Sairat SS - Doori sahi jaaye na (Completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is called as happiness. Kal ka itna acha episode and then your os . It made my dayyyyyy❤️.


I want you to write more os laksh. You are amazing writer. This post is perfect . Emotional + romantic+ funny . Everything in one .❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️



Thank you for tagging. Can I hope for more os ? 🥺 I missed your write ups.

Thanks a lot for remembering and tagging me. Lots of love. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it. It had a mixture of all the elements.

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Amazing 🤩🤩

Absolutely loved it 😍😍

It was such a nice story ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Why do I feel Sai is trolling Veeru. Jaise ko taisa type. 🤣 You tried to prank me now it's my turn. 🤣

Poor guy is worried... sach mein possessed toh nahin ho gayi yah phir she is thinking too much about the chudail. 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion

Why do I feel Sai is trolling Veeru. Jaise ko taisa type. 🤣 You tried to prank me now it's my turn. 🤣

Poor guy is worried... sach mein possessed toh nahin ho gayi yah phir she is thinking too much about the chudail. 🤣

The answer is in the next part which is in the same page 🤣.

Part 3 is also updated in the same page right after part 2.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wildreaper

Amazing 🤩🤩

Absolutely loved it 😍😍

It was such a nice story ❤️

Thanks 😊 ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: laksh

The answer is in the next part which is in the same page 🤣.

Part 3 is also updated in the same page right after part 2.


Damn I didn't see it... 🤣 WIll read them. 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

This was so lovely, loved each and every word of it.

Thank you ❤


Part - 1:Daastaan chudailo ki contribution ki

Lol, kya title hai 🤣

Currently the greatest credit of this story goes to Ms./mrs. Chudail. Agar woh na hoti, toh itna sab na hota🤣

Sach mein 🤣 Bargad ki ped ka photo Sairat ki Photo album mein bhi hoga 🤣🤣


Amazing, some awesome fantacies of raja babu which came out as chudail stories did a lot of damage to the singhad fort's infrastructure and its reputation 🤣

🤣🤣


Toh jab sab kuch door honge toh Sairat paas aayenge, waah, simple logic👏

Haan bhai, khidki khol, ventilation andar aayega tabhi teri oxygen teri paas aayegi.

Lol 🤣


Par uske baad Sai ne jo kiya, UPSC topper ki syllabus ko question kiya seedha. I wish Sai zor se dhakka deti Viru ko bed se, saari chudailgiri nikal jaata, aur apni biwi se darta woh alag🤣

Yeh bhi ayega kisi aur OS mein 🤣, pehle paas toh aane dete hain, phir dhakka 🤣🤣


This was just awesome, but I guess sometimes these things do happen, so Viru, use your shabd from onwards rather than chudail for your fantacies😎

Lol, Viru aur shabd? 🤣


Part 2: Chudail ki beizzati - A saga of serious insult

Bechari, Chudail didi/aunty ki beizzati hogayi. Pata chala the couple are just using her name for their own story progression. Galat hua, I demand justice for chudail clan 🤣

🤣🤣🤣


Chalo, dono ki chudailgiri baahar aagayi, pati patni mein bargad ki barbaadi🤣 But finally, back to normal or not😉

Part 3 : chudail ji tussi great ho, taufa qubool karo

Oh.my.god.😎

Itna bolta hai Viru, kabse🤣

This was so lovely, the emotional level of this chapter was amazing.

That's the truth, sai needs his affection, the feelings in his eyes laced into words, simple words. That he needs her,only her. No one else to share his life with, just him and her. That is the beauty, it's his gestures and only him that gives her assurity. He matters to her, and she matters to him. And what exists between them, can only be handled if both of them open up like this. Banters leading to exploring the beauty of the relationship.

❤ True, there is so much to talk but they don't speak up.

Really wonderful, waise aage ka kuch nahi dikha, par theek hai, sapne dekh lenge phirse 🤣

You know how poor I am in this 🤣

Lovely SS❤️

Thanks Shristhi 😊❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sairat07

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First of all a biiiiiggggg Thanku!!!! For posting all the parts ....!!!!!!!!smiley31

Thanks 😊❤


Superb SS!!!

The way u have penned it is amazing!!! Gone with the flowsmiley36smiley9

Part 1:-

U know what I was shocked!... I also thought is she stressed or possessed of that chudail like Virat!smiley36

Lol 🤣🤣 I wanted it that way but wasn't sure if it had come out that way or not

Part 2:-

This was funny! Their usual banter and cute replies to each othersmiley37...Lol Sai got to knew that there was no chudail... She be like Ab to gabbar gayasmiley37

🤣🤣I first titled it as "Mujhse Panga?" 🤣🤣

And all thanks to Aai!smiley4Never felt bore cuz of their nok-jhoks always find it funny....Loved it...smiley42

Thanks 😊

Part 3:-

Awww how sweetly Viru admitted the fact!!!...Aise hi sab kuch bol diya karo Raja Babusmiley44Also got to know Sai's thoughts... Makers should show her monologues... Regardless!

But I liked how u emoted it here! And I can imagine SaiRat doing all this!!

Mooh khole toh sahi. Yeah, would be good to get some monologues.

These all r SaiRat kinda things...And damn sure that none can do it better...Neilsha makes it perfect...Though it is a fictional SS but it seems too real

Beautiful dude!

Loved it!❤

Thank you 😊


Waiting for ur next write-up!!smiley4

Ya I know u might be thinking how greedy I am...but always eager for SaiRat contentsmiley37Sry!smiley36

Lol, will try to write something. Didn't feel like writing for sometime due to the story. I was also busy for sometime. Sometimes when I spend time in the forum writing some posts or replying to posts that I am not able to find time to write stories.

Thanks for the comments 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinafans

I am so sorry for not reading and commenting...Quite busy after lockdown got over....Will read all by once and comment...


Thank you so much for tagging and letting me know.

No problem at all 😊. Tagged you since you wanted me to resume writing OS. Please read at your convenience ❤. Thanks for this message.

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