Just Passing By - A Shivi Os

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Raavi had fallen from stairs and was crying in pain holding her feet. Dhara,Anita, Shiva came running.

Dhara : Raavi tu theek haina? Kuch hua kya? Kidhara lagi toh nahi na?

Shiva: Tera dhyaan kaha rehta hain. Neeche dekh kar chalna tha na. Ab chot lag gayi na. Gadheri.

Raavi tries to stand but winces in pain. Shiva without a second thought picks her up in his arms startling Raavi.

Raavi : Shiva tu yeh

Shiva : Shhhh

Shiva takes her to the room. Raavi somehow feels protected in his arms. She wraps her hands across his neck and buries her face in his neck. Shiva tries not to look at her. He gently places her on bed. He takes out ointment.

Shiva : Kaha lagi hain?

Raavi shows her ankle and arms. He takes her hand. She looks down as his hands touch her arms. Shiva gently strokes her arms and blows air. He takes her feet but there are not any bruises. It instead had a sprain.

Shiva : Lagta hain moch aayi hain

Raavi cutely nods her head. Dhara arrives there and checks her.

Dhara : Raavi tu aaram kar mein tere liye Idhar hi khaana bhijva dungi.

Shiva advices her to rest and leaves. All gather for lunch at table. Shiva comes there.

Suman : Haan toh kal pagphere ki rasam rakh de. Kal Raavi aur Rishita jaayenge aur parso Shiva aur Dev unhe lekar aayenge.

Shiva : Par Maa Raavi ko chot lagi hain aise mein

Suman : Haan toh kaunsa usse nachna hain, udhar jaake aaram hi toh karna hain. Prafulla Usse wheelchair par le jaayegi.

Shiva : Mein usse

Suman : Lene jaayega, rakhne nahi.

Shiva nods and takes Raavi's plate to her room.

Raavi is sleeping. He goes to her and calls out her name slowly. She doesn't wake up. He then loudly calls her chipkali. She gets scared and wakes up. Shiva shows her food and signs her to open her mouth.

Raavi : Mein kha lungi Shiva

Shiva : Haan kaise? Haath se? Haath mein toh chot aayi hain. Muh khol mein khilata hoon.

Raavi looks at him. He is so caring Raavi thought. He feeds her and informs her about pagphera. He thought she might become happy hearing this but here she was sad.

Shiva : Tu khush nahi hain?

Raavi : Nahi voh mujhe tere bina neend nahi aati na.

Shiva : Kya?

Raavi : Matlab tere se jhagda kiye bina mujhe achi neend nahi aati.

Shiva : Ek din ka toh sawal hain. Ho jaayega.

He makes her sleep again and he leaves for work.

Next morning he wakes up and doesn't find her. He goes here and there to look for her when Krish informs him that they left early in the morning for rasam and that now Dev and Krish have to pick them up the next day.

Shiva goes into the room but he feels something empty. He thinks whether she would have applied the ointment or is her sprain okay. His thoughts break when Gautam calls him out for some work.

Gautam explains him about some store work but he just blankly keeps on nodding.

Gautam : Shiva samjha na?

Shiva : Ji Gombi

Shiva does the work but his mind is present somewhere else. At night he decides to take a stroll outside the haveli in the hope that he might spot her.

Dhara : Shiva itni raat ko kaha ja raha hain?

Shiva : Voh aise hi thoda round maarne

Dhara : Par

Gautam : Dhara jaane de usse

Krish : Mein bhi chalta hoon

Shiva : Koi jarurat nahi hain. Jaake soja

Shiva leaves from there in hurry before anyone could ponder him with more questions.

Shiva goes out and spots a mansion where Raavi Rishita and Prafulla are staying. He checks that window of two rooms are open. In one room he spots Prafulla pacing here and there while in the other room lights were off.

Shiva : Yeh pakka chipkali ka room hain. Lagta hain so gai hain. Yeh acha mauka hain. Dekh kar aata hoon theek hain ki nahi.

He silently climbs up the window with the help of ladder and enters the room. He sees a fragile figure sleeping peacefully covered with blanket. He goes near her and slowly whispers.

Shiva : Aye chipkali uth mein hoon.

The figure doesn't move.

Shiva : Lagta hain so gai hain tu. Koi nahi. Mein toh sirf yeh dekhne aaya tha ki tera sprain or chot theek hua ki nahi. Aur tune haath mein ointment lagayi ki nahi. Tu toh bol rahi thi tujhe mujhse jhagda kiye bina neend nahi aati. Toh tu kaise so gai. Mujhe toh neend hi nahi aa rahi.

Rishita : Neend isliye aa gai kyunki mein Rishita hoon Raavi nahi.

Rishita laughs alot. Raavi comes out of the washroom limping and switches on the light.

Raavi : Shiva tu yaha kya kar raha hain?

Rishita : Tujhe jo kamar mein aur pair mein jo sprain aaya haina voh dekhne aaya hain. Acha mein na thoda ghum kar aati hoon. Tab tak tu sprain check karle.

Shiva : Kya? Kamar mein laga hain tujhe?

Raavi : Nahi toh. Yeh Rishita na kuch bhi bolti hain.

Shiva looks at her. He goes near her, grabs her waist. Raavi winces in pain.

Raavi : Dukh raha hain Shiva

Shiva : Tune toh bola tujhe nahi laga

Raavi looks down feeling guilty.

Shiva : Dikha chal

Raavi : Kya? Nahi

Shiva: Kyun?

Raavi looks down here and there. Shiva realises their position and leaves her.

Shiva : Sorry mera matlab voh nahi tha

Raavi : Its okay Rishita ne dawai lagai thi. Vese tu sach mein mera haal chaal puchne aaya tha?

Shiva : Voh Voh. . Haan. Subah se tu dikhi nahi thi toh socha puch loon

Raavi : Phone pe bhi toh puch sakta tha

Shiva : Mein bass yaha se pass ho raha tha toh socha mil loon

He rubs his hair. Raavi smiles.

Shiva : Mein jaata hoon abhi

Raavi : Hmm

Shiva keeps looking back at her. He turns and climbs the window.

Raavi : Shiva ruk

Shiva turns and sees her. Raavi pulls up her kurti and shows her waist to him. Right in the middle of waist there was blackish blue spot. He touched it. She winced in pain. Shiva pulled down her kurti and looked away and turned to leave.

Raavi : Shiva tu sirf mujhse milne ke liye bahar nikla tha na.

Shiva doesn't reply anything just smiles and leaves away.

Raavi : Jootha kahin ka, was just passing by wala.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is so cute!! The way they care for each other!

I had read this on Wattpad a while back! Had to comment here🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aaaawww this was sooo sweet…

ShiVi really cares about eachother…

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

This is so cute!! The way they care for each other!

I had read this on Wattpad a while back! Had to comment here🥰

I just read this story yesterday. I got confused seeing it getting updated just few minutes back. Now I remember that I read it on Wattpad

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was soooo cuteeee 💞💞

Shiva coming to meet Raavi at mami's place 🤪

Loved the ending 😆

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