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Leo

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Shristhi2002

@Shristhi2002

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is a piece of marvel Cheeku

Absolutely amazing, each and every line represented Sai and her emotional turmoil so well, just fabulous .

Man, I love your poems, these are fantastic😳

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AparnaRenu

@AparnaRenu

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh. Good. God!

Cheeku... I need time to process this.

But let me thank you...

And let me just...feel for a while.

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"Kahenge meri sherni ko kya ho gaya hai" 😳 she is his, koi maane ya na maane...

Ye hi line baar baar goonj rahi hai kaano me, Sai ki awaaz me! This line is love!

Aap hi meri duniya, ghar, sukoon aur darr... the fear that comes with love is something truly unique, hai na? The total surrender that you do, giving full control over your emotions to someone else, the trust it takes, the hurt it can cause, is inexplicable. If you have experienced it, you know it.

He is her whole world, he alone can break her, she is petrified of losing control, but even more of losing him!

Cheeku... this one hit very deep... bohot kuch yaad aa gayi 🤗 and the photo... perfect!

Edited by AparnaRenu - 4 years ago

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Leo

@Asur

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002
This is a piece of marvel Cheeku
Absolutely amazing, each and every line represented Sai and her emotional turmoil so well, just fabulous .
Man, I love your poems, these are fantastic😳

And I love your comments on my work. Makes me feel amazing. You know I have always been hesitant in posting poems here because forum usually have os, ss and ff. Though that did not deter me from doing so😆

But your comment in bold just made me so happy❤️❤️

Thankyou🤗