ShiVi OS- Zaroori hai zindagi ke liye

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful !

Just so damn beautiful 🥺

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You gave every scene a little more extra than what we were given and that just made it much more sweeter than it already was.

Shiva, finally seeing sense. Finally realising his faults and his hand in making Raavi's life miserable. I know we don't do Shiva bashing but him realising it was necessary for him to finally accept her as his. Him realising how this woman he called his wife didn't actually do anything to deserve everything that she had went through. I love how his axis had shifted. I'm not saying that you should forget your mother once you get married but your priorities should realign. Both Wife and Mother has their own places and it's his job to maintain that balance. To take a stand for who is right and admit if either one is wrong. Him finally realising how important she was to him, how their life actually did revolve around each other, in that situation, was heartbreaking. Here he was finally realising how much he needed her and it was almost already too late.

Raavi, this strong girl that kept her pain to herself and tried her best to carry on with what was handed to her. The girl everyone expected to behave well just because they've known her since she was a child. This girl who said nothing and took on the punishments that wasn't even meant for her. I'm glad she heard his promise. It was actually the one thing she NEEDED to hear the most. HOPE. To finally have something to look forward to. To finally stop feeling like she was free falling without any safe landing in sight. To finally stop feeling like time has stopped for her and she was stuck there all alone. To finally feel anchored and not lost all alone drowning in her sea of emotions. That thank you was the sweetest ever. How even in her hesitance that Shiva might push her away, she gathered all of her courage and opened her honest heart to him.

Them going back to teasing each other was just an indication that they're gonna be okay. It may take time, there might be a lot of fights in the future, but they know that they'll always have each others backs through thick and thin now ♥️

You did such a great job and you made me cry 🙄😂🙄😂


Fav line;

"Mera waada hai tujhse Raavi Pandya. Agar hum yahan se zinda nikle na to main tujhe wo saari khushiya dunga, woh saare haq dunga jiski tu haqdaar hai. Bas ek mauka de dena mujhe! Laut kar aa ja mere paas. Abhi to bahut zindagi baqi hai."


Because at this moment, Shiva Pandya finally accepts Raavi Pandya as HIS and promises her that he is HERS.


Ps; That cheek pinch and kiss is adorable and took my heart 😍♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was just sooooo beautiful❤️

The pain and the helplessness of Shiva💔..You have described it so perfectly....it made me emotional too....it was heart wrenching😭❤️

The emotional trauma was so much greater than the physical pain he was enduring....

Simply wowwwww👏👏


I loved his promise to Raavi to give her all khushi and Haq.

The morning scene was another beauty

What an heartfelt apology from Raavi and her thank you was so beautiful. This was the acceptance Shiva wanted when he said itna Chota thank you yesterday.❤️


Both their fears vanished...her fear of abandonment and his fear of rejection....now both are willing to move forward with each other and they are back to their banter mode...This was so cute❤️


Glad you mentioned that a doctor treated them😆


I loved this update so much. One of my favorites.❤️🤗

Waiting for the next one!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful OS! It was emotional as well. A NDE is what could make Shiva realize what she means to him. He finally drcided to protect her, giver her haq and be her savior for the rest of her life. His concern for her was so evident and did not let her out of his sight. The various interactions/scenes you had written all made sense. Raavu’s apology and thank you came from the bottom of her heart❤️

After all this, they returned to normal by teasing each other, which is part of their daily lives😆

Thank you for writing this🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The first thing that I read when I woke up today😳

It's such a beautiful OS!

I loved the way Shiva realized that how important Raavi was for him, that his bhabhi was a human and did make mistakes, and he realized his own mistakes as well❤️

Exactly what I want to happen!

Watching her at night, her presence comforting him that she was safe, and then the thank you in the morning😳

I am so glad that Raavi had heard what he had said and all that Raavi said to him, aah! That was simply amazing!❤️❤️

But when he said, "Apne liye bachaya!", oh my God!😳 Dil khush kar dita!

And then the little kiss on the cheek at the end😳 So adorable!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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its awesome beautiful OS ,very emotional n heart touching

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow! This is so beautiful, poignant and apt ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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this was lovely! ❤️

Shiva's dialogues, his realization that his bhabhi is not a God but a human, and Raavi's thank you to him at the end were all very beautifully written

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's beautiful Mahi... I really wanted PS to show raavi's reflection for the way she treated after the MU.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is just too beautiful VP!!

Loved the emotions all over the OS, Shiva's realisation that Raavi is his zarurat❤️

His concern, care everything was touching ❤️

U know I was thinking yesterday "Kaash 'Zarurat' topic pe koi OS mil jaye padhneke liye" & today you posted 😆🤗

Thanks for posting this😘

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