The Darkness He Had Chosen For Himself - One Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: Blink_Cat

Such a beautiful piece of OS 😢

I so wanted this to happen in show 😢

The emotions were so well described as always and you left me teary eyed again!! 😢

Would Love to read more!!

Thank you very much. 💜

Originally posted by: SuMod

This is... Beautiful! I know I have said it before, but your writing is so poetic that it never fails to make me emotional. Plus you showed exactly what I wanted. All in all, I LOVED it.❤️❤️❤️

You are kind. I don't think I am even close to poetic writing though I work on my craft to get there one day. Thank you. 💜

Originally posted by: Champa2012

Here you go my comments:

Awesome and I wish someone from writers team read this and they take a hint what to write. Seriously. And do write the part of Ahaan going to talk to Ishqi after realizing his mistakes. That will be beautiful to read, hopefully for you to write too. Great job.

Thanks a ton. 💜 I am so glad you enjoyed reading. I think I will hold this tale for now and see what happens in the show because if I continue this with the emotions that I started this with- we won't have IshqAan. 🥺

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Mujhko ye zindagi isn't it arjun wala song.

Haye kya os hai, I can see this actually happening in show 👏 your writing is great sigh I am in love with your stories

E X A C T L Y.

He made me fall in love with the song. Still can't get over it.

Oh my goodness. Thank you very much for such sweet words. You made my tonight and tomorrow and some more days. ❤️

This was actually very beautifully written ❤️

Loved it ❤️

beautiful OS 👏❤️

your stories have become mere weekends ka sahara

thank u for writing them 🤗❤️

This one was sooo emotional😭😭

And the lines at the end doubled the emotions

So apt with the story