The Darkness He Had Chosen For Himself - One Shot - Page 2

The build up is great for Ahaan's redemption and angst phase. The reveal would be great to watch on screen.

I have said it before and saying it again, if you imagine the actors reading those line , you know thats not a Fanfic but actual script of the show.😆

As always brilliantly written and it does elicit a feeling of guilt and regret on behalf of Ahaan.

On Sonu's part

Such a beautiful piece of OS 😢

I so wanted this to happen in show 😢

The emotions were so well described as always and you left me teary eyed again!! 😢

Would Love to read more!!

This is... Beautiful! I know I have said it before, but your writing is so poetic that it never fails to make me emotional. Plus you showed exactly what I wanted. All in all, I LOVED it.❤️❤️❤️

Please continue, I would love to see Ishqi's reaction.

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Sorry. Like I mention in my almost every story, I thrive on comments. No comments. No motivation. No motivation. No more writing.

PS: I don't count gifs as comments. The least I expect are at least five words for a 1500 long tale. 🤢🥺💔

Here you go my comments:

Awesome and I wish someone from writers team read this and they take a hint what to write. Seriously. And do write the part of Ahaan going to talk to Ishqi after realizing his mistakes. That will be beautiful to read, hopefully for you to write too. Great job.

Originally posted by: sumaishu

Thank you for this. So nicely written. Very emotional. Ahaan new what happened on that night. Please continue dear part 2. Want to kniw how he faced ishki after knowing the truth.

Waiting.......

Thank you. I am glad you had a nice read. 💜

Originally posted by: DaffodilsNew

Reading an FF after ages.

But some of those lines just made me even more disappointed in Ahaan in the show. How much dt girl trusted him and wht he did to the trust. He wanted to protect her ryt😔

Beautiful written btw .

Oof. After ages, really?

Thank you and you are right. It indeed is quite disappointing that he didn't trust her enough to stand by her without knowing the truth.

Mujhko ye zindagi isn't it arjun wala song.

Haye kya os hai, I can see this actually happening in show 👏 your writing is great sigh I am in love with your stories

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Oof. After ages, really?

Thank you and you are right. It indeed is quite disappointing that he didn't trust her enough to stand by her without knowing the truth.

Yes

Last I read FF was in Namkaran forum which closed years back.

Originally posted by: Vicks_ki_goli

The build up is great for Ahaan's redemption and angst phase. The reveal would be great to watch on screen.

I have said it before and saying it again, if you imagine the actors reading those line , you know thats not a Fanfic but actual script of the show.😆

As always brilliantly written and it does elicit a feeling of guilt and regret on behalf of Ahaan.

On Sonu's part

Aww thank you very much for dropping this. ❤️