Pandya Store|Episode Discussion Thread #16 - Page 114

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

i knew it 🤣

Knew what?😎🤣

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

If they follow the original then Shiva's insecurities will be a recurring theme!

I just hope they don't mess up by reverting any of the progress we got today 😕

I am worried about reverting as well😆 writers of this show have severe case of amnesia and the editors are born with scissors just like Edward Scissorhands😆 chopping the scenes left, right and center😆

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

After re-watching the episode, I think the following ShiVi scenes (I'll ignore every non-ShiVi scene except the Rishita/Krish hug scene since they were all bad 😆) But here are the following edits I would've made had I been the script writer (by no means claiming I am a better writer here since some of the stuff I write makes no sense to me either 😆).

1. After pulling the boulder off Raavi's legs @2:19 and hearing her discomfort, Shiva should have extended a hand out towards her. No words, just a hand with the scene going like this:

In the midst of the rubble and never ending wind, Shiva stands tall, gazing at Raavi. His eyes soften when he hears her cough. Swallowing, he extends a hand in her direction and Raavi gazes at him with wonder.

Raavi’s fingers tremble. She was used to Shiva’s hate. She was used to Shiva’s mockery. But standing there was just Shiva. The boy she protected in her childhood. The boy she watched grow up into the man he is today. Raavi’s lips curled upwards as she reached for his hand. Once she placed it into his palm, Shiva’s fingers interlocked with hers.

He pulled her upward, noting every expression on her face. And once he noticed the wince, without a thought, he put one arm under her knees and the other across her back to pick her up. Raavi’s fingers clenched onto his kurta, “But you are hurt,” she whispered.

He glanced at her, “I thought I told you that I would never leave you alone.” He stabilized his grip, “Don’t worry about me. Just worry about yourself.”

2. Instead of the singing @15:00, I wish Shiva tried to wake her up by giving her false accounts of their childhood, and she fights him back tiredly by correcting him (the fan girl within me would love to know more about their childhood ❤️, so this is more of a selfish scene)

Shiva gently patted Raavi's head, "H-hey c-chipkali." He couldn't let her close her eyes. His dushman should always be awake and lively, ready to counter him at any time. Swallowing, he felt his throat choke, "R-remember the time you stole my lunchbox? Just so you could taste Dhara-bhabi's cooking," when she groaned, he smiled softly. She was responding to him! "H-how did you like the dabeli?"

Raavi stirred as she let out a slow sigh, "It's... it's not dabeli. D-Dhara Di m-made c-chole," her eyes opened for a moment, and he couldn't help but pray she would be okay.

"Y-you've proved to be blind as always," Shiva attempted to adjust his weight so he wouldn't be crushing Raavi, but with the rubble, it was hard to move without losing his balance and falling on her. "It's not chole, it was dabeli."

Raavi let out a half-hearted laugh. She tiredly shook her head as she closed her eyes again. Shiva's eyes widened. She couldn't close her eyes. She just couldn't. Raavi's eyes shut tightly, "I-It was definitely chole," his hand dropped to her cheek, cupping it. He used the base of his thumb to rub her cheek and she opened her eyes once again. "I-I know because it was your f-favorite."

"Y-you know so much about me," Shiva choked out as his eyes were riveted on hers.

Raavi nodded her head as a tear slipped out of her right eye. Shiva quickly caught it with his thumb. "I-If we make it out here... I'll make you chole," her eyes were closing again, startling Shiva. "I-I p-promise," she mumbled. "A-as an apology."

"I thought I told you that I don't care about apologies," he used his elbows to support her as he used both his hands to cup her cheeks. "And I thought I told you that I would never leave you alone!" He took his eyes off her for a brief second to observe the rubble around him. Dropping his gaze back to her, he stroked her cheek, "So just trust me."

Raavi's hand reached for his kurta. She nodded her head as another tear rolled down her cheek.

Write it! In detail! It is amazing!

Originally posted by: mpks1

So ShiVi love story is not going to be a slow burn😃 Actually speaking there has been a major progress today unless Shiva's insecurities starts to affect them😭

That will come up in the future but Raavi hai na! She'll help him out😳

The efforts of actors , set team was loyally ruined by bgm uncle and editor uncle... thank god Shivi were not messed much

Rishita tractor lekar seedha mandir pohonchegi, haveli pe ya hospital?😆

the last 5 minutes of shivi was beautifully done.. I hope tomorrow's episode will continue along these lines and not turn into a comedy circus again 🤪

Originally posted by: Sakmen

Arrey don't you remember, we did Psychology major the other day, KD special 😉

Either the har ghadi scene.

The MU clearing scene.

The kalash scene (not very plausible)

70 percent says its still on it’s way😛

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

After re-watching the episode, I think the following ShiVi scenes (I'll ignore every non-ShiVi scene except the Rishita/Krish hug scene since they were all bad 😆) But here are the following edits I would've made had I been the script writer (by no means claiming I am a better writer here since some of the stuff I write makes no sense to me either 😆).

1. After pulling the boulder off Raavi's legs @2:19 and hearing her discomfort, Shiva should have extended a hand out towards her. No words, just a hand with the scene going like this:

In the midst of the rubble and never ending wind, Shiva stands tall, gazing at Raavi. His eyes soften when he hears her cough. Swallowing, he extends a hand in her direction and Raavi gazes at him with wonder.

Raavi’s fingers tremble. She was used to Shiva’s hate. She was used to Shiva’s mockery. But standing there was just Shiva. The boy she protected in her childhood. The boy she watched grow up into the man he is today. Raavi’s lips curled upwards as she reached for his hand. Once she placed it into his palm, Shiva’s fingers interlocked with hers.

He pulled her upward, noting every expression on her face. And once he noticed the wince, without a thought, he put one arm under her knees and the other across her back to pick her up. Raavi’s fingers clenched onto his kurta, “But you are hurt,” she whispered.

He glanced at her, “I thought I told you that I would never leave you alone.” He stabilized his grip, “Don’t worry about me. Just worry about yourself.”

2. Instead of the singing @15:00, I wish Shiva tried to wake her up by giving her false accounts of their childhood, and she fights him back tiredly by correcting him (the fan girl within me would love to know more about their childhood ❤️, so this is more of a selfish scene)

Shiva gently patted Raavi's head, "H-hey c-chipkali." He couldn't let her close her eyes. His dushman should always be awake and lively, ready to counter him at any time. Swallowing, he felt his throat choke, "R-remember the time you stole my lunchbox? Just so you could taste Dhara-bhabi's cooking," when she groaned, he smiled softly. She was responding to him! "H-how did you like the dabeli?"

Raavi stirred as she let out a slow sigh, "It's... it's not dabeli. D-Dhara Di m-made c-chole," her eyes opened for a moment, and he couldn't help but pray she would be okay.

"Y-you've proved to be blind as always," Shiva attempted to adjust his weight so he wouldn't be crushing Raavi, but with the rubble, it was hard to move without losing his balance and falling on her. "It's not chole, it was dabeli."

Raavi let out a half-hearted laugh. She tiredly shook her head as she closed her eyes again. Shiva's eyes widened. She couldn't close her eyes. She just couldn't. Raavi's eyes shut tightly, "I-It was definitely chole," his hand dropped to her cheek, cupping it. He used the base of his thumb to rub her cheek and she opened her eyes once again. "I-I know because it was your f-favorite."

"Y-you know so much about me," Shiva choked out as his eyes were riveted on hers.

Raavi nodded her head as a tear slipped out of her right eye. Shiva quickly caught it with his thumb. "I-If we make it out here... I'll make you chole," her eyes were closing again, startling Shiva. "I-I p-promise," she mumbled. "A-as an apology."

"I thought I told you that I don't care about apologies," he used his elbows to support her as he used both his hands to cup her cheeks. "And I thought I told you that I would never leave you alone!" He took his eyes off her for a brief second to observe the rubble around him. Dropping his gaze back to her, he stroked her cheek, "So just trust me."

Raavi's hand reached for his kurta. She nodded her head as another tear rolled down her cheek.

This is tooooo good... what we all needed...❤️

make it an os and please post it in the main forum ...this should not be lost in near to end EDT😆

Originally posted by: bhavna101

Rishita tractor lekar seedha mandir pohonchegi, haveli pe ya hospital?😆

mandir. Hospital koi nahi jaata PS mein 🤣