Shivi FF - fighting for love part 9 updated on page 16(completed) - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww ... this chapter is love. ❤️

ShiVi are so adorable.


Loved it.


Do update the next chapter soon....

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Posted: 4 years ago

awesome... m loving the feel of it....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update👏

Shiva was so impatient, he even allowed maami to hold his nose🤣

Shivi are married❤️

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Soo beautiful 😍😍 😍😍 loved it ❤️❤️

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Loved the update pliz update soon 😍😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loveee it! ♥️ So cute and sweet!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh god why can't writers learn from our FF's... They are way more better than the stupid episodes we saw daily... Great going excited for next chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you so much for all the love guys 🤗.

PART-9

All the rasams were done.Rishita escorted raavi to her room.it was beautifully decorated with candles and flowers.the bed was filled with rose petals.the room was not too lit and not too dim,it was just perfect.

" Yeh sab Tumne Kiya?" Raavi asked looking around the room.

Rishita nodded and asked "Accha laga?"

Raavi hugged her and replied " bahut Sundar hai" .

Given how they started off, raavi had never thought that she and Rishita will be such good friends one day . Raavi had started to admire rishita.the way she fought against the world for her love was commendable..she was a strong girl who was not afraid to speak her mind, though her tone was rude but she did make some valid points.over the time she had started to love and respect the pandya family as her own but she prized her dignity over everything else.

" Ab Mai chalti hoo..tumhe aur disturb nahi karungi.tum aram se baith ke Apne pati Ka intezaar Karo."rishita said breaking the hug and winking at her

" Nahi rishita...tum chaho to thodi Der aur Ruk Sakti ho...baitho na..hum baatein karte hai" raavi fumbled not knowing what to say.

" Tumhe abhi baithke mujhse baatein Karni ha?" Rishita asked surprised

Raavi nodded innocently.

Rishita shook her head and hit Raavis head lightly.

" Budhu" she said and left giggling

Meanwhile In the hall shiva was sitting in the cot and glaring at Krish, who was trying to stop him from entering his room .

" Suhag Raat hai...ghunghat utha Raha hoo main" Krish sang in his besura voice irritating shiva more.

Everyone chuckled seeing them.

" Bas bas...bahut Hogaya Krish..ab shiva ko zyada pareshan mat Kar, Woh thak Gaya Hoga ...jaake Aram Karne de use " dhara said lovingly ruffling shivas hair.

"Kya bhabi? Aapko Lagta hai Woh andar Jake Aram karega ?" Krish said

Dhara and gombi awkwardly glanced each other.

" Tujhe to Mai...bahut zubaan chalne Lagi hai Teri aaj Kal" shiva said running behind Krish

"Krish! Tu kahi bhi Kuch bhi bolta hai" dhara Said trying to act strict

" Jaane de shiva ko Krish.koi bahut besabri se Uska intezaar Kar Raha hai" Rishita said entering the hall . shiva smiled hearing her and left krish.

Shivi's room

Raavi was standing by the window, looking at the moon.her skin was glowing in the moonlight, there was a smile of contentment on her face.shiva hugged her from behind.she put her hands on top of his.he put his head on her shoulder.

"Pata hai, Maine Kabhi nahi socha tha ki Kisi ladki se Mai iss had tak pyar Kar Sakta hoo.kabhi store aur parivaar ke alawa aur Kuch socha hi nahi.thank you raavi .. Meri Zindagi Mai aane ke liye aur mujhe iss khoobsurat ehsaas se jodne ke liye" shiva said and turned her around.raavi looked up to see her husband intently staring at her.

She raised her hands to cup his cheeks.

" Tune mujhe ek dusri Zindagi Di hai shiva, aur us Zindagi ko itni khusiyon se Bhar Di hai ki mujhe darr Lagta hai ki kahi Meri khusiyo ko Meri hi nazar n lag jaaye "raavi said and hugged him tightly.all she wanted was to be in his arms .feel him close to her.listen to his heartbeats.

" Ab har buri nazar, har Bala ko Tujh tak pahunch ne se pehle shiva pandya se hokar guzarna Hoga.samjhi?"

Shiva smiled hugging her more tightly, if that was even possible.they stayed like that for some time closing their eyes, feeling the moment.shiva slowly removed her veil and put it away.he cupped her cheeks and and kissed her forehead removing the maang tika . He kissed her ears one by one removing her earrings.he unhooked her necklace and placed a small kiss in the nape of her neck.raavi clutched to his kurta all this while.he removed her bangles and kissed her hands.he held her chin and made her look into his eyes.his eyes travelled from her doe like eyes to her quivering lips.he brushed his thumb lightly over her lips .she closed her eyes in anticipation.he bent forward and took her lips in his, it was a slow, gentle, passionate kiss.raavi reciprocated and held the back of his head.she clutched his hair making a fist and shiva held her waist supporting her .

They parted after some time breathless. raavi was disheveled, her lips were slightly swollen and her cheeks a deep hue of red.she looked soo cute.he could just eat her up.shiva shook his head at such thoughts.

Raavi shyly pushed shiva away and begun to move when he held the Dori of her blouse opening it in the process.raavi stopped at the realisation.he came closer to her from behind and placed kisses all over her back.he slightly lowered the sleeve of her blouse and kissed her shoulders.raavi turned around and hugged him again.he opened her hair and smelled the fragrance, his hands playing with her tresses.

Shiva picked her up and made his way towards Their bed.his eyes not leaving her face for a second.he gently lowered her and begun to kiss her again.starting from her forehead, he went downwards.he stopped just above her cleavege., And went to kiss her bare waist.he placed open mouthed kisses on her waist wrecking havoc on her senses.

"Shivaa.." she moned clutching his hair.

His name from her mouth sounded like music to his ears.he stopped and came to the level of her face.

" Raavi...Tu taiyar hai na iss rishte ko age badhane ke liye? Dekh Tu Chahe to hum aur thoda intezaar Kar sakte hai." Shiva asked looking deep into her eyes.he loved this woman and he wanted to be absolutely sure that she wants this too, because if he went any further he would not be able to stop himself.

Raavi looked at him with devotion.was it even possible to love her bholenath more?she held his collar and pulled him closer and slammed her lips on his.he got his answer and deepened the kiss.

Raavi was fidgeting with the buttons of his kurta.shiva broke away from the kiss and opened his kurta and threw it away.raavi admired her husband.she had stolen glances of his body in the past but now she wanted to feel him.she raised her trembling hands and gently caressed his chest.shiva put his hands on top of hers and steadied it.

" Darr kyu rahi hai? Poora Ka poora tera hu.haq hai tujhe" he said

This gave raavi confidence and she pushed him on the bed and started kissing his chest and torso.shiva was startled for a bit when he saw his chipkali turning into a sherni.he quickly recovered from the surprise and pulled her body on top of him.they spent the night exploring each others bodies and finally became one.they were both exhausted by the end and collapsed on each other.

Raavi was sleeping on his arms and shiva was carelessly drawing patterns on her bare back.a bedsheet lay over them lazily . He felt something wet in his arms and looked down to see raavi crying.he panicked.

" Raavi Tu ro kyu rahi hai? Sab theek hai na? Dard ho Raha hai tujhe ?" Shiva asked checking on her.

He had tried to be gentle, but may have got carried away in his passion.

Raavi quickly shook her head

" Mai thk Hu shiva... bahut Khush Hu mai.par pata nahi Rona bhi aaraha hai" raavi pouted

Shiva chuckled looking at her.he pulled her closer and caressed her head to comfort her.she slowly drifted to sleep.

MORNING AFTER

The sunrays broke his sleep.he had never slept so peacefully in months.he looked down to see raavi sleeping in his arms.she looked so beautiful, so serene.he drank in the sight of his sleeping wife and gave a quick peck on her forehead.

Raavi stirred in her sleep and slowly opened her eyes .

" Good morning Mrs shiva pandya" he whispered

Raavi smiled shyly.it sounded so good.mrs shiva pandya.

Suddenly her eyes Fell on the clock and she was startled.

"12 baj Gaye? Shiva ..bahut late Hogaya...hey Bhawan sab kya Soch rahe hoge?"raavi panicked

Shiva was also surprised when he saw the time.but he knew his family won't mind, but he prepared himself for a teasing session.

"Mai dhara Di aur Gombi ke saamne kaise jaungi? Krish aur rishita to mujhe bahut chedenge." Raavi said covering her face with the bedsheet.

Shiva smiled and pulled her closer holding her by the waist.

" Ab Tu aise gadhedi jaise soyegi to aur kya Hoga?" Shiva said

"Accha? Sirf Meri Galti hai? Tu bhi to soya tha? " Raavi said

" Mai to keh doonga sabse ki raavi be mujhe Raat Bhar some nahi Diya" shiva replied casually.

Raavi looked at him with an open mouth and big eyes and smacked his arm.

" Waise ek aur idea hai...hum bahar hi nahi nikalte hai...Sara din is kamre Mai hi rehte hai." Shiva said and gave a soft kiss on her lips.

" Shivaa..." Raavi quickly broke from the kiss and took a moment to calm her racing heart.she knew if this started they would indulge in another love making session.she didn't mind, but it was too late.

" Tu mujhe subah subah distract mat Kar... taiyar hone de mujhe " raavi said and ran to the bathroom with the bedsheet.

Shiva looked at her retreating form with a smile on his face.

"Gadhedi" he muttered

Raavi quickly came out and went straight to the kitchen.all work was done.dhara and Rishita were just giving final touches to the lunch preparation.

None of them talked to her .

" Dhara Di...Mai Kar deti hoo" raavi said trying to help.

" Ab aur kya help karegi...sab kaam to ho chuka hai.subah tujhe puja Mai aana tha.time Dekha hai tune? " Dhara said with a stern face.

Raavi looked down guiltily.

" Maana nayi nayi Shaadi hui hai, par nayi dulhan Ka sasural mai pehle din itna late uthna? Yeh to had hai raavi " rishita added.

Krish, Gombi and shiva came in.

" Maa subah subah aapko dhund rahi thi bhabi.woh to Maine bahana banake sambhal liya. Unhe agar pata Chal jata to Kitna Bura Lagta " krish said sadly

"Ab chod Woh sab krish.aaj Kal ki ladkiya Kaha reeti riwaz, bado Ka lihaz ..yeh sab Maanti hai." Gombi said shaking his head and putting a hand in Krish shoulders.

Shiva looked at all of them slightly amused.what was going on?

Raavi looked down, tears welled up in her eyes.

" Sorry..." She said and her voice broke.

Everyone burst out laughing.raavi looked surprised.

Rishita immediately came to her side.

" Sorry Yaar... par Teri taang kheechne na itna Acha mauka kaise chodte" she said holding her ears with one hand

Raavi furiously looked at everyone.

" Inka to Samajh Mai aata hai.dhara Di..Gombi..Aap dono bhi?" She complained

"Kyu? Hamari itni Umar ho chuki hai ki hum mazaak bhi nahi Kar sakte? " Gombi said putting his arms over dharas shoulder.

"Sab na iss bhootnath ki Galti hai.isne hi mujhe sone nahi Diya.." Ravi blurted out pointing at shiva and suddenly stopped realising what she said.

Shiva smacked his head and covered her mouth.

" Gadhedi...kya bol rahi hai " shiva said

Everyone laughed.krish dramatically closed his ears.

" Hey bhagwan..yeh Mai kya sun Raha hu "

Raavi blushed and ran away from there.

"Mai abhi aya..." Shiva said emabarassed and walked out of the kitchen.

Rishita and Krish ran after them.how can they let this opportunity go?

Dhara and gombi smiled looking at the kids, praying that the love and togetherness between them stays forever.


I am ending it here. This fanfic will be very special to me as it is my first one.thank you to everyone who liked and commented and gave me encouragement to write more 🤗

Will try to write something new soon.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is a beautifully ending! ❤️🤗

Loved how they all pulled Raavi’s leg at the end 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just amazing 😍😍😍 incredible!!!loved it ❤️❤️

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