ShiVi Drabble: Silent

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Silent:


Raavi folded the clothes with a heavy heart, internally weeping at the day’s events. It seemed that every day since her marriage had been getting even worse than the day before. She had walked into this relationship, fully aware that there would be consequences but hadn’t realized that she would have to endure such an insulting environment on top of her wounded heart.

She cradled her wrist gently, examining the array of bruises that had lined up since this morning. Her first gift from her husband – his nasty imprints on her soft skin. She cursed herself for not remaining silent, for adding salt to his wounds. But she wondered what had she said that elicited such a brutal reaction from him? She hadn’t insulted Dhara Di, in fact she respected her too much to even think of disrespecting her.

She simply had questioned her methods, wondering if this truly was the right course of action. Did she have no right to add her two cents in on family matters? Should she always remain silent even if the situation in front of her was clearly getting out of hand?

And when he had so brutally grabbed her hand, why didn’t she say something? Why did she remain silent when he crushed her wrist with his hand? She had always retaliated before they had gotten married, annoying him incessantly with her kindness. Why didn’t she say something when he explicitly told her to either agree with his Dhara Bhabhi or stay silent? What happened to her individuality and self-respect then?

Earlier she had been cursing herself for opening her mouth but now she felt that she hadn’t said enough. Of course, she deserved this beratement because she let him walk all over her. Of course, he wouldn’t see the error in his ways because she had done nothing to condemn his harsh behavior. Of course, he would assume that she would remain silent at his beck and call because she hadn’t refuted his obnoxious orders right then and there.

If it was her silent behavior that had encouraged him to behave so rudely, then enough is enough. She wasn’t going to mope around the corners of the house, crying silently over her misery out of the public eye. If he had the audacity to manhandle her out in the open area of the kitchen for anyone to see, then she would make sure to give a befitting reply in such a public manner as well.

She wiped her tears and resolved to never let her silence do the talking for her ever again. If there is one thing she is going to teach Shiva Pandya, it is going to be how to respect all women and not just his Bhabhi and Maa.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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just some of my thoughts in a form of a drabble 😳

I know we've all been pretty upset with how Shiva has been handling his anger lately and I wanted to pen down my own thoughts on the matter.

I really hope this is not something that the writers brush over like have done so in the past and actually call him out

let me know your thoughts 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it a lot. Truly A woman should never be treated harshly. Or a man. For that matter.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aise thodi chalega isko bi continue karo ...please kar do na ..uske baad kya hoga batau na please😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it!! the last sentence is so right👍🏼 He needs to learn to respect her.

Aage Raavi kya karti hai, kaise react karti hai yeh bhi likho toh sahi🤗 ab yeh mat bol ki tum logon ko drabble ka matlab nahin pata hai kya😛

This really has the potential of a nice story.. soch le 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Isko bhi continue kro plz! Shiva ko realize krao uski galti plz ! 😊

And plz update sirf meri dulhan !!😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Loved it a lot. Truly A woman should never be treated harshly. Or a man. For that matter.


I completely agree

both men, women, and non-binary people should be treated with respect and dignity - no one deserves to be treated the way women have been treated in this show

the post @mahajanaish uploaded with the parallel is so accurate (her tag isn't working 🤔)


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scarysea

Aise thodi chalega isko bi continue karo ...please kar do na ..uske baad kya hoga batau na please😃


I have way too many ongoing works 😆

ek aur add kardu? 🤣

depending on response, I might but yet again I have no idea what direction this story would go in 😆

give me some ideas please 😳

and thank you for your comment jaan 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swathu

Loved it!! the last sentence is so right👍🏼 He needs to learn to respect her.

Aage Raavi kya karti hai, kaise react karti hai yeh bhi likho toh sahi🤗 ab yeh mat bol ki tum logon ko drabble ka matlab nahin pata hai kya😛

This really has the potential of a nice story.. soch le 😊


thank you so much jaan 🤗

mujhe baksh de 🤣 I am never ever writing a drabble from now on 😆 you lot never it stay a drabble 🤣

give me some direction, if I get enough inspiration I might 😳 but abhi I have no idea whatsoever 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swastika34

Isko bhi continue kro plz! Shiva ko realize krao uski galti plz ! 😊

And plz update sirf meri dulhan !!😳


hi jaan 🤗

in terms of sirf meri dulhan, I've hit a bit of a writer's block with it 🤔 but I am working on the chapter and hopefully I will have some sort of teaser out tonight and then post the chapter tomorrow

I've hit a roadblock with Shiva's behavior in it and just trying to figure out what's the best way to approach it 😆


iss wali story ko continue karne mein shayad time lage, I wrote it as a Drabble with no intention of continuing it toh sochna padega 😳


thank you so much for your support 🤗

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