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The Porcelain Doll

Sonu Raj Rathore the girl who got married just 6 months back was sulking in the kitchen of Rathore household kneading the dough and preparing food for her husband and mother-in-law. Ever since she got married life had not been a bed of roses for her. Though she got a loving husband in the form of Raj she had got the worst mother-in-law in the form of Sarla. Everyday after Raj went to office, Sonu was treated like a maid in her own house, She would be hurled with taunts of the mistakes that she had not even committed. Sarla was the worst mother-in-law anyone could ask for. Sarla would make her do all the household chores all by herself. Even after living in such a big penthouse and having all the facilities to afford servants. Sarla would never do that as she believed that if daughter-in-laws are there to do the chores why should they waste her son’s hard earned money. Sonu would have been given punishment if she did not do the task assigned to her. Once Sarla even burned her hand by putting a hot spatula on her hand.

“Sonu!!!! Sonu”, Raj’s voice brought her back from her dream world.

“Haan Raj bolo kya hua?”Sonu asked. “Sonu sach-sach btana tum ro rhi thi naa?” “ Nhi Raj shayad aankh mein kuch chala gya tha, tum btao na kya hua?” “Main toh tumhe yeh btane aaya tha ki Ahaan bhaiya aaye hain tumse milne. Tum jaldi bahar aa jao, theek hai?” “ Haan Raj main aati hun”.

“Ahaan bhaiyaa!!!” Sonu came and hugged her brother who had always cared for her like a father or a mother would for their child.

“Kya hua Sonu tu aise rone kyun lag gyi”, a worried Ahaan asked his little sister. “Kuch nhi bhaiyaa bas aap sab ki bohut yaad aa rhi thi mujhe aap sabke paas aana hai thode din ke liye, aap mujhe lekar chaloge?, Sonu asked like a baby. “ Ofcourse itni si baat hai chal tu Sarla aunty se pooch le phir main tujhe lekar chalunga. Theek hai?” “Bhaiya mummy mujhe haan ni bolengi aap puch lo na pls. “Aree kyun nhi bolengi tu bahu hai unki? “Bahu hun isiliye toh nhi sunengi pls aap baat kar lo na.” “Theek hai chal” Ahaan agreed. “Aree yeh chali jaayegi toh saare kaam kaun karega?”, Sarla asked. “Aree mom aap toh aise bol rhe ho jaise bahu nhi maid lekar aaye ho aap ghar par” an angry Raj defended his wife. “Raj main baat kar rha hun na. Aunty Sonu kuch din ke liye hi toh jaa rhi hai na pls aane dijiye.” “Ab tum itni request kar rhe ho toh theek hai Ahaan beta le jao apni behen ko. “Ae sun agar apne bhai kuchh bhi btane koshish kari na toh tera aisa haal banaungi kabhi yaad bhi nhikar payegi apne bhai ko. Samjhi?” Sarla warned her after everyone left the room. “Ji mummy” These were the only words she could utter in front of Sarla.

Scene changes to Sonu’s room Malhotra house-

Sonu was writing how her day went in her diary. The only place she found her solace in. She could not complain about his mother’s behaviour as she did not want to become the wall between the mother-son and neither did she want to let Ahaan down so she chose to pen down her feelings in a place where no one could get to know about her ordeal.

“Sonu tujhe neeche chachi bula rhi hai '' Sonu got startled at Ahaan's sudden arrival and tried to hide her diary but was noticed by Ahaan.

“Haan bhaiya jaa rhi hun”, Sonu went leaving her feelings at the hands of Ahaan who wanted to read what his sister was writing.

Dear Diary,

Aaj meri pehli rasoi thi maine sab ke liye kheer banayi thi sabko bohut acchi lagi Raj ne toh 2 katori extra khaayi.

Ahaan felt proud of his sister but whatever he read after that started making him hate himself.


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Sorry for the cliffhanger this story right be a two-shot or more than tha.

Please comment ur thoughts on this piece of creativity

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It’s a good start. Sonu would indeed have such a life. Please do continue writing 👍

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Loved it!

Please do continue soon!😳

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Its really nice👏 do continue soon 👍🏼

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Part-2

Dear Diary,

Aaj meri pehli rasoi thi maine sab ke liye kheer banayi thi sabko bohut acchi lagi Raj ne toh 2 katori extra khaayi. Par mummy ko bilkul pasand nhi aayi unhone Raj ki khushi ke liye 1-2 chammach kha li thi lekin uske jaate hi usskheer ko aur maine jitni bhi kheer banayi thi usse bahar kutto ko de diya. Mujhe bohot bura laga. Par maine Raj ko kuchh nhi btaya kyunki main nhi chahti thi ki meri wajah se un dono ke beech ladayi ho aur main Ahaan bhaiyaa ko let down bhi nhi kar sakti thi. Phir raat ko galti se dal mein namak zyaada ho gya tha toh mummy ne mujhe saza dene ke liye kaha ki main puri dal kha lun bohot mushkil hui lekin main nhi chahti thi ki Ahaan bhaiya ko kisi bhi tarah ki embarrasement ho isiliye maine kuch nhi kaha. Phir ek din maine ek glass tod diya galti se toh unhone mujhe bohut zor se thappad bhi mara tha.

Ahaan could not read further as hot tears streamed down his eyes and he could not believe his sister whom he wanted to protect from everyone was suffering so much just to not let him face the embarrassment of his sister not capable of handling her house.

“Bhai” Ahaan’s train of thoughts halted when Kartik came calling him to come down for dinner. “Kya hua bhai aap ro kyun rhe ho kuchh hua hai kya?”

“Kartik yeh padh Sonu ki diary mujhe lagta tha ki main apni behen ko protect kar rha hun lekin woh already itna sab seh rhi thi meri wajah se”, Ahaanhanded him the diary.

“Bhai ek baat kahun, Sarla aunty par toh mujhe uss din bhi doubt hua tha. Yaad hai jab hum Raj se baat karne unke ghar gye they?”

“Haan toh?”

“Main jab kitchen mein gya tha Sonu se milne toh maine uske haat apr jalne ke nishaan they”

“Tu kya kehna chah rha hai Kartik ho sakta hai na kitchen mein kaam karte waqt suka haat jal gya hoga?”

“Bhai kaam karte waqt jalne mein aur jaan buchkar haat jalane mein bohot ifark hota hai, woh ishaan aise they jaise kisine uske haath par garam kadchi rakh di ho.

“Iska matlab tu kehna chah rha hai ki Sarla aunty?”

“Haan bhai, lekin hamare paas koi saboot nhi hai?”

“Main kuchh aisa karunga ki Sonu khud confess karegi aur uske baad tu dekh main kaise unse badla leta hun unse, unki wajah se meri Sonu ne already itna suffer kara hai. Mujhe pta hi nhi tha ki meri1920 ki soch meri behen ki zindagi barbaad kar degi. Ab dekhna main sab theek kar dunga.”

“Finally bhai aap apni soch badal u don’t know main kitna khush hun”.

Saying this he hugged Ahaan.



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Riddhi Saini

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