riansh os: whole - Page 3

Originally posted by: soumya04

This is so good, loved it.

Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

Ohh it was amazing beautiful fantastic story.. 😍😍

I literally have no words to describe how fantastic it was. 😍😍

The way you write, describing each and small details, it was awesome.

Yaar main aisa kuch chahti ti show mein bhi...

And I can understand how much effort and hard work u have put in writing this fabulous story is clearly evident ❤..

I really loved it ❤❤❤❤❤

Main toh hamesha se vansh ko mastermind dekhna chahti thi but makers ne after that bullet scene they have ruined the vansh character somewhere.. And I then thought it will never come back but then during navrarti episodes, he came with bang but again phir sab thanda pad gaya.

And Yeh Gurleen and you have somewhere have same sense in writing.

She also loved to mention small details in her story which makes it more interesting...

M really missing her stories.... ❤❤❤

But overall it was fantastic awesome fabulous mind blowing superb aag lagne wala update tha...

Pls keep writing more such stuff 💛💛💛

I tried to put effort in details. Glad you like it.

Hum sab yhi chahty thy. Par na mil ska. Khud hi sab imagine karna padta hai.

Mastermind na bhi dikahty to bhi thk tha. At least they could have shown him handling things with maturity. But he will remain clueless till eternity.

Gurleen Di have got the characterization just right for Vansh and Riddhima. She is unmatchable. I do miss her too. Hope she comes back one day. She is a sweetheart.❤️

Thank you so much. I will try to write some more. Because i kinda enjoyed the process.

Originally posted by: Innocentlove96

That was quite a read....took some time to finish it.

Marvelous job 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻..... simply amazing n stunning.

Glad to see the VRS who is aware of his surroundings and more than happy to see this Riddhu actually using her brain in right direction by questioning Kabir's intentions related with his so called missing.

Just loved their confrontation part and them having a real conversation and not some taunting or shouting or scolding match which they usually have. It was good to see Vansh patiently listening to Riddhu till last without reacting and Riddhu to be brave enough to confess her deeds and accept them instead of being scared and hiding it till extreme.

You recreated the story beautifully and in such subtle way it feels like original show.

Amazing job bro💞💞

Yes, both of them have their flaws. Both of don't actually deserve to taunt each other about their personality.

They were needed to understand each other.

Bat kar k na zuban tire hoti hai na bat sun k kaan. To kuch apni suna deni chahiye. Or kabhi kisi ki sun leni chhaiye.

Thank you once again.❤️

Originally posted by: raveena0605

I have bookmarked it and once i read i will comment on it. 🙏🙏🙈

Sure jab bhi you read it, do let me know.

You yourself have been on a roll. You are writing so much. i appreciate your efforts.❤️

I will try to take out time from classes and my utter laziness to read you work.❤️

Originally posted by: zynia890

Thank you for taking out time to read this.❤️

Yes, both of them have their flaws. Both of don't actually deserve to taunt each other about their personality.

They were needed to understand each other.

Bat kar k na zuban tire hoti hai na bat sun k kaan. To kuch apni suna deni chahiye. Or kabhi kisi ki sun leni chhaiye.

Thank you once again.❤️

That's why we say they both are flawed characters.

They need to understand that they should listen when it's right time and confess when it's high time.

Not when everything is destroyed by themselves.

Can u please write 2nd part of this os🙂

Originally posted by: varshababy

I agree it requires lot of courage to post your first story. But I must say it’s so well imagined and written. You should continue writing.

Thank you!!❤️

Originally posted by: Ityj

Can u please write 2nd part of this os🙂

story...

I will write something more soon when I feel like it....right now whole situation is just 😭

Hi, sorry for the late reply on the os, i just wanna say awesome 💥💥💥💥. This is exactly where the writers failed,they could have shown Riddhima understanding about mafia business, being Vansh's equal, exerting her MRS VR reputation.

We could have gotten so many beautiful moments. Would love to see more of your writings. 😁😁😁👍👍👍👍