The Mystery Man and Jealous RR (OS)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The Mystery Man and Jealous RR

Setting: RR is trying to help Pals family with the Property Tax situation. On his way to Pals house he and Farhad see Pals in the market with another tall and handsome guy…

Raghav: Farhad gadi roko

Farhad: Kya hua anna?

Raghav sees Pals by a choodiyan stall by herself with a gloomy look on her face.

Raghav: Woh saree ka..mera Matlab Pallavi wahan akeli kyu hai? Maine kaha tha keerthi ko usko akela feel mat karne dena

Farhad: anna main abhi Keerthi ko phone karke bata deta hoon

Raghav: ruko

He sees a tall man approach pals with a smile and some yellow flowers in hand,

Mystery man: Pallu! I know just the thing to cheer you up..I hope these yellow roses can brighten your day. You still haven’t told me what happened.

Pallavi smiles and takes the roses from his hands

An angry Raghav clenches his hands

Raghav: kaun hain vo Farhad aur itni himmat meri biwi ko roses deni ki

Amused Farhad: Anna pata nahin, maine aaj pehli baar dekha hain is admi ko Bhabhi ke saath

Raghav gets closer to hear the conversation

Pallavi: Thanks Arhaan, Lekin iski koi zaroorat nahin thi aur rahi baat meri problem ki toh kahan se shuru karu

Arhaan: from the beginning and I suggest we go to that coffee shop, baarish hone waali hair and I personally don’t want to get drenched

Pallavi nods and Arhaan puts his arm around her shoulder leading her to the coffee shop. Raghav is fuming and ready to confront them but Farhad stops him from making another angry mistake.

Farhad: Anna jaise aap soch rahe hain vaisa kuch nahin hai, i’m sure they are just friends

Raghav: Really Farhad! Koi male friend apni biwi ko aise touch karega aur main bas dekhta rahoon un dono ko

Farhad: toh kya karenge anna

Raghav: tum ghar jao, don’t worry I won’t let my anger destroy my progress with pallavi

Farhad nods and leaves his very jealous boss to handle the new young lad who dared to touch his wife

Raghav goes inside the coffee shop and sits a table away from his wife and her so called friend

Arhaan: WOW! Pallavi tumhare saath itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tum abhi bhi is so called shaadi mein rehna chahti ho

Pallavi: baat meri nahin hai Arhaan. Raghav acha insaan bana chahta hai and he wants to return everything I have lost to me. How could I just turn my back on him now when he’s trying so hard to be good for himself and his family.

Arhaan: main tumhe aise nahin dekh sakta, tumhari zindagi ek mazaak ban chuki hai pallavi. You are my oldest friend please please leave him and let me take care of you in kohlapur.

Raghav with tears in his eyes can't stand it anymore. How could she cheat him like this when all he wants to do is fix her life and maybe just maybe become a real husband if she allows him to.

Pallavi: Arhaan please aisi baat phir se mat kehna. I know it hurts you to see me like this but I am a married woman and Raghav is my husband whether I like it or not. He is doing what he can to bring happiness back into my life and for that i am grateful.

Arhaan gets loud: WHAT! USSI NEH TUMHARI LIFE BARBAAD KAR DI

Raghav. stands up and goes to their table

Raghav: ayye hero! awaaz neeche koi haq nahin hai tumko aisa pallavi se baat karne ka...ardhamaindha

Pallavi is shocked: Raghav tum yahaan

Raghav looks at Pallavi angrily and smirks: chalo, bahut coffee peele tumne sweetheart, ghar jaake dinner kare ab?

Arhaan: excuse me Mr. Raghav tum aise...

Raghav: stay out of it, yeh abhi bhi mera biwi hai aur yeh mere saath apna ghar jayegi

Raghav takes Pallavi's hand and walks out of the coffee shop

Pallavi: Raghav chodo mera haath

Raghav: oh toh tumhe mera touch acha nahin lagta lekin woh hero ka haath jab tum par tha toh koi baat nahin right?

Pallavi: bakwaas ki bhi hadh hoti hai Raghav

Raghav: Hadh ki to baat hi na karein toh acha hai Pallavi

Pallavi: kya matlab hai tumhara?

Raghav: voh hero ne tereko roses diya aur tumne accept bhi kiya, kaisa dikhta agar tum meri jaga hoti toh

Pallavi: tum pagal ho kya? Arhaan mera dost hai aur kuch nahin and what do you care

Raghav: oh i am sorry, i forgot humara shaadi sirf ek deal hain so you are right tumko jiske saath bahar jaana hai ja sakta hain

Pallavi: this conversation is over

Raghav grabs pallavi's arms and holds her shoulders: sun lo Pallavi, mein tera husband hai aur tum meri wife. Mein bahut possessive hoon meri family ko le kar. So don't test me. I will be successful in achieving my goals and after 30 days you will still be by MY side as MY wife. That hero cannot change that and I will never give him the chance to take you from me. Ardhamaindha?

Rain starts pouring down on them and Raghav lets go of Pals puts his coat around her and brings her close to his side

Pallavi not sure of what else to say turns to him and says : Thank you!

Raghav smiles: Welcome biwi!


If I get enough comments I can turn it into a longer fanfic! Got a lot of ideas floating around :)


Thanks for reading!

Edited by johnslove - 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Jealous Raghav is a wish of entire fandom

Lovely OS 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Possessive Raghav . It's a nice start 👏.


Please make it a FF if you got an idea.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was a good confrontation to help both realize that they do actually believe that this Marriage is real ! Woohoo!


Please do turn this into an FF. I'm sure you have got a great idea & Everyone here would love it🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yayy...do turn this into a FF...loved this small os

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Jealous Raghav is treat to read.pl continue this as FF.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Jealous RR is a treat to read and watch. Do write more. 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was so damn cute and sweet, loved it

Please write more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I would love to read it further

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice one pls write more

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