Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 22

Hellooo

When are you updating next?

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Hellooo

When are you updating next?

Haven’t finished yet.

Guessing in two days may be.

Sorry for the delay

Keep loving though 🤗

Originally posted by: tlamisa

Such a lovely update! The way you write the scenes and their conversations feel so soothing🥰

ShiVi are so comfortable with each other ❤️

please update soon!

Thank you so much♥️♥️

Will try

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Haven’t finished yet.

Guessing in two days may be.

Sorry for the delay

Keep loving though 🤗

No worries! Take your time 🤗

I am just going to reread this once more in the meantime 😆

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

No worries! Take your time 🤗

I am just going to reread this once more in the meantime 😆

Love you for the support❤️❤️

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

No worries! Take your time 🤗

I am just going to reread this once more in the meantime 😆

Me too 😂

HELLOO!!!

Here with an update. Sorry for being late and thanks for showering your love on previous parts. 🤗

Pls comment your views on this part. Criticism is always welcome. Sorry for the typos.

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PART 8

It was Dev's wedding day. As Dhara was 7 month pregnant, Raavi was running around doing Dhara's errands according to her instructions. She was coming out of the pooja room preparing the aarti thaal when she almost collided with her husband dearest shocking both of them.

“Ayy chipkali dekh ke chaal na”, Shiva exclaimed as he steadied both her and the plate but she looked more focused on her plate,

“Tu dekh ke chaal na. Abhi yeh gir jaati toh! Mujhe phirse bana na parta. Yeh 6th baar main yeh thaal saaja rahi hu. Dii ko pasand hi nahi aa raha. Bechara Gaumbi, kya kya jhelna pad raha hai unhe iss mood swings ke vajese. Har ladki ko aisa hota hai kya?”, Raavi said in one go.Shiva looked at her changing expressions half amused half bored. She was first irritated then she sighed tired then she was fearful then she looked sympathetic and at last she was just confused! Shiva shook his head. Did this girl know she could show more emotions than a pregnant woman if given the chance! Also she spoke like a bullet train when tensed.

“Aise bol rahi hai jaise tu khud ladka hai, aur tujhe mere moodswings jhelna padega”, Raavi looked at Shiva horrified as if his statement could ever come true. Shiva hit her head slightly, “gadheri! aab chal bahar. Main tujhe hi dhunde aaya. BHABI ke kehne paar”, he emphasised the word ‘bhabi’ for good measure making her almost run to the hall.

In the hall,

Dev was sitting beside Dhara on the sofa. She was teasing him and he was blushing. ShiVi entered the hall together and Raavi instantly started her marathon talking, again.

“Shiva tune Dev ka pagri nahi bandha abhi bhi, aarti bhi baki hai. Baarat nikal ne ka time ho raha hai. Hume late ho jayega”,

“mera bhi band de na bhai”, Krish clipped in as he sat on the cot there, Raavi looked at him worriedly making Shiva roll his eyes,

“lo yeh bhi line mein hai. I am sure Gaumbi bhi nahi bandha aab tak. Matlab woh bhi line mein hai. Tera khud ka bhi baki hai”, Raavi then turned to him irritated and tugged at his shirt, “Aur yeh kapde, tu abhi tak yeh kapde utara nahi”,

“tujhe badi jaldi hai mere kapde utar ne ki”,

“nahi utarega toh sherwani mein ghusega kaise, gadhere”,

“kya Dev? baithe baithe utra utri ka lesson le raha hai”, Krish wound his arm around Dev’s shoulder who came to sit beside him so that Shiva could start tying the turban,

“tum log apna yeh comedy show shaadi khatam hone ke baad continue karo, please”, Gautam slid beside Dhara visibly exhausted. Dhara made faces at him then turned to the other four,

“haa bhai, finally shadi ho raha hai. Jaldi se khatam karlete hai”,

“phir main aisi neend soyungi, aisi neend soyungi na. Ahh sochke hi sukoon mil raha hai”,

“mere pyaara devar, shaadi khatam ho raha hai. Functions nahi. Reception baaki hai. Woh bhi teen teen reception”, Raavi very enthusiastically burst Krish's happy bubble. Everyone except ShiVi sighed,

“aur gao gana daas saal mein pehla function hai. Dhum macha denge saab”, Shiva mocked their enthusiasm at his wedding. They were jumping at that time. And now!! They were literary terrorized with the idea of another wedding. Served them right for all the torture he had to go through in those functions.

“yaar main na tujhse haath jodta hu Krish. Agle das saal tak shadi ka naam bhi matt lena”, Gaumbi exclaimed making everyone chuckle as Krish gave an exasperated look,

“pichle daas saal tak shadi ka umar nahi tha. Agle das saal tak naam na lene ka dhamki de rahe ho. Toh main shadi karunga kab? Aap ke umar mein?”

“tu phir se mere umar pe aa gaya”,

“kiya Gaumbi, chodo na. Baitho yaha. Raavi mujhe aarti ke thaal dikha”, Raavi handed over the plate to Dhara then started speaking excitedly again,

“krish chaal maa ko le aate hai, phir aarti hoga. Phir baarati niklegaaa”,

“ayy pyaare devar ki bhabi, tu itna kya utabla ho rahi hai ?”, Shiva asked as he tied Krish's turban,

“mujhe nah baraati mein nachne ka bohat shok hai”,

“apne wale main itna nache phir bhi shok reh gaye”, Dev asked amused. This girl never lacked enthusiasm!

“woh toh mere dulha ka baarat tha. Usme aur isme bohat fadak hai. Kahan woh gate mein 2 min nachna aur kaha yaha se nach te huye jaana”,

“ayyy manjulika, tere iss mere dholna ko pause laga....”,Shiva's whatever punchline was left incomplete as Dhara glared at them,

“tum logo ko aab der nahi ho raha hai”.

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One Months Later,

Shiva and Raavi paced back and forth in front of the labour room. Dhara had labour pain 3 hours back and Gaumbi had immediately admitted her in hospital. He was almost panicking seeing Dhara in so much pain and screaming. Her estimated due date was after 8 days. So her going into labour before that made everyone tensed. But the doctor reassured them saying it was normal. Suman was in home with Prafulla and Jagat. Even she wanted to accompany her kids to the hospital but they didn’t take her along as they weren't sure how long it will take and it was past midnight already.She needed rest. Hardik had too had come to hospital as soon as he heard.

Now they were counting the moments ticking by waiting for Gaumbi or Doctor or any Nurse to come out of that door. Hardik went to get them refreshments as all were pretty tired and also he couldn’t sit still in tension.The pacing couple clashed suddenly resulting in them glaring each other. Dev who was sitting between Rishita and Krish, their head on either of his shoulder, sighed praying they wouldn’t start a mini cricket match with entertaining sledging.

“aay chipkali!! Aage piche kar rahi hai toh dhang se karna. Kya takra rahi hai”, well, such prayers are hardly granted.

“tu bhi toh kar sakta hai ‘dhang se'. Bada aaya mujhe batane”,

“hai toh tu chipkali par juban, juban mendak jaisi”,

“jaise bhi hai meethi juban hai. Tere jaisa besura nahi”,

“oh hello, mr and mrs mendak”, both glared at Krish, “mera matlab hai bhai bhabi, hum hospital mein hai. Yaha aise lade nah toh dhakka marke nikal denge”, ShiVi gave each other a ‘serves you right look' but frowned hearing his next words, “dono ko”, they made faces at each other and looked away.

Dev shook his head. Why did he expect this two to behave after all this year? They had known each for so long, were married for 7 months now and had been dating for Somnath knows the time. Still one couldn’t expect them to talk to each other civilly. Dev wondered how their dates used to be! Hardik returned with coffee as Dev and Krish made the two sit down.

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1 hour later,

Dev was on a phone call. Krish, Rishita and Raavi were discussing something while Shiva gave them bored look. Hardik took the duty of pacing. Suddenly the door opened and Gaumbi came out of the labour room. Shiva and Hardik rushed to him as the other three stood up. Dev quickly cut his call.

Gaumbi's face broke into the largest smile as he announced that they had a girl and both mother-daughter were fine. Everyone would be allowed to meet them after some 2 hours. Shiva and Dev beamed and sandwiched Gaumbi between them. Krish bounced to hug the brothers. Raavi moved to Hardik and hugged him as he wiped away his happy tears. Rishita smiled standing beside the brothers.Their happiness were unexplainable at that moment. Gaumbi came out of the embrace and moved to Hardik. Shiva pulled Rishita and Raavi in their hug,

“main pehle hi bol rahi hu, bacchi ko sabse pehle main godh mein lunga”, Krish spoke up watching the best friends plus b-i-ls congratulate each other still in the hug earning a smack from Dev,

“tu chota hai tu sabse akhir mein milega. Main sabse pehle lunga kyunki main hum teeno mein se bada hu”,

“tu kuch mat bol, bhoothnath. Bada se shuru ho ya chote se, tera number aise hi beech mein hi ayega”, Shiva almost pouted at Raavi's word.

“main maa ko call karta hu”, everyone immediately nodded at Gaumbi.

2 hours later,

The five pandya plus Hardik were in a discussion of how they were to welcome Dhara and the newborn. Their chattering stopped as the labour room door fully opened and Gaumbi stepped out with a bundle of blanket cocooned in his arms carefully. It was their bundle of joy. The pandya brothers eyes welled up at the sight in front them. Their brother had spent a decade caring for them and raising them as his own kids. Now he was finally getting his own child to pamper, adore and love. Krish moved forward to take the girl and noone objected. Gaumbi placed the baby in his arm carefully and showed him how to support her head. Others crowded around him gazing at the baby girl. She looked splitting images of Gaumbi now.

“Yeh toh bilkul aap ke jaise hai Gaumbi”, Krish exclaimed unable to move his eyes.

“Par aankhe bilkul Dhara jaisi”, Hardik said as he gently took the baby. It tried to open its eyes but then sighed closing them again.Hardik felt his eyes welling up again at the sight. He had given his kid sister with his firm belief in his best friend. He knew Gaumbi would fill her life with all the happiness and over the years he had witnessed it. Today he was witnessing another happy leaf adding to their story.

“aur baal bhi”,

“mujhe do na Hardik bhaiya”, Hardik nodded at Raavi and did as told. Shiva was standing behind her holding her by shoulder. As Raavi took the baby, Shiva tightened his hold and theh gazed at the baby. They looked at each other. Their eyes were expressing many emotions then. Joy, nervousness, anticipation and may be love. Dev came forward and Raavi handed the baby to him. Shiva wrapped his hands around her shoulder fully and she encircled hers around his waist, both watching Gaumbi as he took his precious possession back with utmost care and adoration.

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1 week later,

Dhara was discharged 2 days after the delivery. The three brothers had welcomed their dearest bhabi and the newest addition into the house doing aarti. They had planned and replanned with Suman and Hardik about the grand welcoming. But then kept it simple with just decorating the house and making a huge banner. Since then everyone was busy with the newborn who was yet to be named. All the pandya's called the baby girl with their own given nickname. Suman loved to call her gudiya and they knew it was a name that was gonna stick forever. Krish called Munni amd Rishita Chipmunk. That ended in Rishita calling him too filmy and he calling her too classy. Dev called her Pari, Shiva Meetu and Raavi Chutki. Hardik preferred the name he used to call Dhara when they were much younger – lado. But the parents of the little angel was another case. Gaumbi couldn’t and wouldn’t stick to one name. He would adore her with whatever name came to his mind at that moment – from meri ladli to Krish's munni. He called her everything. And Dhara had no nicknames for her. She was content with meri bacchi or baccha. Everyone who met her loved her instantly, evem Prafulla. Shiva teased her saying to prove her love by gifting those kangans to the newborn. Well, Prafulla was yet to visit Pandya niwas after that.

Right now they had gathered in Suman's room on her call. The baby was on Suman's lap making tiny movement for reaction to the whatever antic Rishita and Krish was doing. Both were hovering over the kid as they kneeled by either side of the bed. Dhara and Raavi were on both side of Suman on the bed laughing at the two's funny faces. Gaumbi sat by his Maa's foot. The easy chair there was occupied by Hardik and Shiva and Dev leaned on its arms.

“bol maa aab. Kya zaroori batein karni thi tujhe?”,

“kya zaroori batein? Sabse zaroori baat kya hi kaha tum logone abhi tak”, everyone frowned at Suman's word,

“Konsi baat ma?”

“aee Dhara rani, bachha janam de diya aab uska naam nahi rakhna hai kya? Kuch socha tum dono ne?”, GauRa shared a smile hearing her,

“woh bhi bol ne wali baat hai maa! Naam toh mera wala hi rakha jayega”,

“oo gad..”, Shiva left it incomplete as everyone glared at him in unison. No gaali in the kids vicinity. “tere woh filmy bakwas naam kisi sinduk nein bhar aur guhe mein rakh ke aa. Tere tarah bakwas hai saab”,

“Shiva, tu na zyada bol raha. Utna bhi bakwas nahi hai ”,

“Shiva sahi keh raha hai. Raavi tu na Krish ka side matt le”,

“tum bare Shiva ke side le rahe ho?”,

“yeh lo. Inn ka phir chalu ho gaya. Pehle sirf Shiva-Raavithe. Aab un log toh team khol ke baith gaye”, Hardik commented making them shut effectively. Gaumbi shook his head and looked at Suman,

“maa, Dhara aur main chate the ki tu humari bacchi ka naam rakhe. Teri pehli pouti hai yeh”,

“ho gaya sab ka quota ka bolna? Sab ke woh script pe joh bhi line tha bol liya”, everyone nodded their head like obedient kids, “phir meri suno sab. Iss gudiya ka naam rakhne ka adhikar nah iss ki maa ka hai”, Dhara looked astonished at her declaration, “Maine chaar chaar bacche ka naam rakkha hai aur woh asaan nahi hota. Issliye yeh kam main isse deti hu. Aise hi kamchod hai aur kamchodi thodi karne de sakti!”, everyone present in that room chuckled knowing the meaning of the last few lines too well. They were said to show she didn’t care but they knew deep down she cared for Dhara as much as she cared for her them. Dhara's eyes teared up and Suman made a dismissible face, “oo Dhara rani. Apnaganga jamuna side mein rakkho aur batao, koyi naam sochi hai tune?”

Dhara wiped away her tears and smiled widely at Suman. Everyone looked at her expectantly.

“Siddhi. Maine siddhi socha tha maa”, Suman smiled satisfied hearing the name. Siddhi meant fulfilment. Suman felt there could be no other better name for the baby girl for she had really completed her son's life. Her eldest son and daughter in law had almost everything except their own kid and this gudiya fulfilled that. She had filled all of their lives with more happiness. She was their Siddhi, Siddhi Gautam Pandya.

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One more month later,

Shiva watched his wife, his youngest brother and his second sister in law whispering amongst themselves sitting by the well. He was checking invoices sitting on the sofa and rolled his eyes. They were definitely cooking something up. Gautam came in the hall and frowned at the trio. In this two month period, everyone learned this three together meant something ridiculous!!! Something that would end at Krish getting scolded by everyone, including his two partners who would refuse any involvement at the last moment. Gaumbi looked at Shiva who shrugged in reply – his blabbering wife was yet to blabber out their plan. Both Krish and Raavi was bad at hiding things from Shiva and Gaumbi. One stern look and they mellow down instantly. Today even they were unaware of what ruckus trio planned. The trio kept glancing upstairs as they giggled together. That meant today's victim was Dev, again. Dev was an easy target and this three started zeroing on him. Shiva shook his head and continued making list of items that were to beordered for the store.

Suddenly the trio's giggles increased and Shiva heard a gasp.He looked up to see Dhara standing in the middle of the hall with her hands on her mouth. The trio were giggling like mad by the well and Shiva prayed that none of them should topple over the well wall. He then turned to the direction everyone was looking and felt his eyes almost pop out. Dev was descending the stairs yawning wide. His hairs were dyed with three different colours – bright orange, bright pink and lemon - in different places. Shiva was sure they didn’t spare any hairs of Dev's head. Even his eyebrows looked dyed. Gaumbi rubbed and rerubbed his eyes. Shiva couldn’t look at him any longer thanks to the bright color and looked down at the receipts again laughing silently. Dev was still out of the world so didn’t know what happened to his head. He straight away went to the baby cot that was kept outside the kitchen. He leaned to coo Siddhi who was giggling to herself till now. She stopped seeing him then started crying her lungs out. Dev came to the earth with Siddhi's scream and reeled back in fright. Dhara glared him. Siddhi was normally a quiet kid. But when she decided to make sound, whole Somnath might be able to hear her. Calming her down was a herculean task. Dhara was thankful to Gaumbi's sleeping habit for the first time. Siddhu had gotten Gaumbi's sleeping habit i.e. to sleep through anything and everything. She glared at the trio who was on the ground clutching their stomachs from all the laughter. Dhara too wanted to laugh with them seeing Dev's startled expression but hearing her daughter's shrill cries she couldn’t do so. She took Siddhi in her arms and started pacifying her.Shiva and Gaumbi too joined her chuckling at Dev.

“bhabi kya hua? Pari aise rone kyu lagi? Aur tum teeno aise has kyun rahe ho”,

“Dev babu, apna shakal dekh ke aa ayne mein. Pata chal jayega”, Suman said as she too came out hearing her grand daughter. Dev moved to the mirror placed in the sitting area and took in his appearance. If he was shocked before, he was horrified now. What did they do with his precious hair? Furious, he started chasing the trio.

“kamino, kaha bhag rahe ho. Tum teeno ke vajese main chutti nahi leta. Aur leta bhi kisiko nahi bata ta kaunsi din meri chutti hai. Warna tum log mujhe experiment suject aur mere room ko lab samajh lete ho ”, Krish tried to hide behind Shiva and Dev followed him there. Shiva was standing beside Dhara and Gaumbi. Siddhi's cries had lessened down a bit by then with their combined effort. But one look at Dev and she started with full volume again. Dhara, Gaumbi and Shiva sighed exasperated,

“ayy Dev, tere ye rangin zulfein jab tak firse kala nahi hotana, tu Gudiya ke samne nahi aayega. Aur Dhara isse shant karne ka zimmedari inn teeno shaitano ko de. Inn ka karam ka fal yeh hi bhoge”,

“hum ne kuch nahi kiya maa”, Raavi said straightening up immediately, all mirth gone.

“Haa maa. Yeh sab Krish ka kaam hai. Uska faltu idea”, Rishita added as both moved away from Krish. Cute Siddhi was one thing and Crying Siddhi another. Even though they loved both, they preferred the first one. Krish sulked at his s-i-ls with betrayal in his eyes. Shiva hit his head.

“Aur kar bhabi bhabi”,

“Thik hai mann lete hai tum dono ke baat”, they sighed in relief, “par Krish toh tere pyare Devar hai, hai ne Raavi? Toh yeh tera kartyavva hai tu usska saath de”, Raavi looked at her wide eyed, “tu kaha jaa rahi?”, Suman eyed a moving Rishita who smiled sheepishly,

“mera favourite devar toh Shiva hai. Toh main kitchen jaa rahi hu, usske liye chai bana ne”, Suman clicked her tongue at her,

“Saahi kaha. Par Shiva ke biwi kaun? Raavi. Uss nate tu inn dono ke madat karna teri farz hai”,

“aa jao dhokebaz bhabiyon”, the three moved to the swing where Dhara sat with Siddhi. Gaumbi and Shiva were with her. Mission Siddhi manao was on.

That same day,

It was afternoon. Shiva was doing inventory in the store after completing lunch. His phone started ringing suddenly. He looked at the caller ID and got surprised to see Maami written. Well, his chipkali forcibly saved maami's number exclaiming how could a son in law not have his mother in law's number? Well the simple way he didn’t have. But why was Mami calling him? Didn’t she call this morning and asked Raavi to visit her? Raavi was free today being it Sunday and had left with Krish near midday. Was it Raavi calling him? She had her own phone to call him, right? Shaking his head he received it only to be greeted with Maami's annoyed voice,

“ayy Siva, Raavi ko phone de ne. Woh kab tak aayegi?”, Shiva knitted his eyebrows hearing her. Normally he would greet her with some taunt but ‘kab tak ayegi' took all his attention away,

“kab tak ayegi matlab? Woh toh subah hi nikal gayi tujhse milne”,

“Siva tu jhoot matt bol. Meri bacchi ko kabhi toh mujhse milne le aa”, Shiva was getting tensed with her every word. Mami was many thing but her love for Raavi was true. Shiva had came to respect their bond in these few month. So Mami would possibly not joke or lie about Raavi.

“kya mami. Jhoot kya, Krish drop kiya na teri bacchi udhar. Woh log pounchi nahi kiya?”,

“woh aayi toh kaha gayi, Siva. Meri dikri mere paas hoti toh main tere ko call karti kya?”, Shiva felt panic rising. Where did she go? Krish was supposed to drop her right? Then why wasn’t she there?

“Tujhe main bad me call karta hu”, Shiva cut the call not waiting for any reply. He dialled Raavi's number but it said switched off.He tried again but no vail. He then called Krish and got same reply. He felt his world was spinning. He was there when they left and they didn’t go back home, he was sure of that. He knew Krish was supposed to meet Rohan after dropping Raavi. He quickly called Rohan who informed him Krish didn’t visit him yet. How was this possible?

Where did this two go then if not Maami's house?

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Aaaaaa I am so happy you updated. It was awesome read. I loved the chappie filled with soo many moments.

Will wait for the next one.

Update sooooon

Well this update was worth waiting.....awesome update

So much happened in this update.

Oh love the name of mini Gaura❤️

Krish and his younger bhabis are amazing... hilarious pranks they come up with

Oh Oh... Krish - Raavi missing 🥺