Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 21

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

very sweet update! loved how shiva and raavi have become comfortable with each other now

loved their kiss! ❤️

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

OMG!! This was perfect for what I needed right now. Can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this. The ShIVi scene and discussion was perfect. Loved how they finally had discussion that was very mature and true to their feelings. Loved how Shiva said to let things go with the flow. Please update the next part soon.

I am so glad you enjoyed it😳

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Will try to update sooner

Originally posted by: fkhr30

Nice

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

Read all in one go! This was such a great read. Only if we didn’t have such a heartbroken Raavi in the show and she was as strong as shes’s here. Love your take on the story and waiting for the next update ❤️

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Glad you enjoyed full read

Will try to update sooner

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update👏

Janardan is not a complete villain here, Rishita is also nice and adjusting type😊

Gaura are having a baby😊

Loved Shivi's moment❤️

Their marriage was a compromise for family but slowly their relationship is changing ❤️

Loved the maturity of Shivi in between their Nok-jhoks

They have some attraction towards each other and they are not denying it and taking steps to enjoy those moments

Waiting for next

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Will try to update sooner

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Amazing update 👏❤

Their heartfelt conversation was very nice .

Beautiful 😍

Update next part soon🤗

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Will try to update sooner

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Noooo!! Don't leave us here 😭

Their bond is the most beautiful and pure I love it! ❤️

Happy that Janardhan Seth is also not a complete villain in this and Rishita is more mature and adjusting in her soon to be new family.

Gaura are having a baby

I just want you to update everyday 😆

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Even I want to update everyday, but nowadays not getting enough time to pen down

Will try to update sooner

Keep loving 🤗

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

I've been waiting for your update for foreveeer 🥺🥺

I've been rereading it from the beginning for so many times ! 😂😂

I love their relationship 🥺🥺

How slowly from enemies(more like frenemies) to being engaged. To Raavi apologising to Shiva wholeheartedly for tying him into this unwanted relationship. To Shiva seeing her purity and innocence in trying to save his family's dignity.

Exploring friendship in the length of their engagement ! Them being close and sharing their hearts opinions. How they haven't changed and still kept fighting and teasing each other ! That small bit where Raavi hurt her foot, that scene when they sat together on the swing and kept trying to irritate one another ! That's just the EPITOME of Shivi ♥️

To the beginning of the marriage rituals ! I love how I get to see Raavi happy here doing her marriage rituals for Shiva ! When on mehendi day, she said to Shiva not to ruin it for her 😂 And how easily she said, "Tu mere Mangetar kaam, uska ashiq lagra hai". It's so beautiful to get to see her accepting it wholeheartedly. And Shiva being worried for her while Dev is introducing Rishita 🥺

And the wedding ? Beautiful ! How both accepted that their bond now has an official name. Husband and Wife. That gave them the confidence that they have each other no matter what.

And after marriage, haaayee haaayee 🥰

Seeing them exploring not only each other but their marriage as well ? It's bliss. You can see how Shiva supports Raavi in her wanting to work. You can see Raavi still fulfilling her duties as the bahu even while working. I'm loving how you portray their give and take relationship !

And not denying the attraction ! Damn ♥️😍

First Shiva being such a baadmash pranking Raavi at the Haveli ! And Raavi giving it back to him by making him jealous 😂

And that forehead kiss infront of the school ? Even while flirting they used their nicknames for each other 😂

Shiva remembered Aman while Raavi didn't ? Pure gold 😂

Them trying to cook up their own love story while making it as embarrassing as possible for each other is just sooo hilarious ! And Krish beta, thank you so much for putting that Kiss idea into their heads, they needed the push 😂😍

But most definitely, I'm in love with this chapter !
Just like you said, since from the beginning they didn't think this marriage through. They just di what they thought was right and saved their family name. I love how in between their nok jhoks, you add in a little serious conversation between them. This gave us readers a little intimate peek into their relationship. How not all is just fun and jokes. There is depths into this relationship, feelings are changing and they are not denying it. I love love love that !

Favourite line ;
'Lekin yaha tune mere pe bomb daal diya. Par jo bhi hua hum dono ne sambhal liya. Aage bhi aise hi sambhal lenge.'

Because that's exactly what Raavi did 😂

But now look at where they are 🥺🥺

I'm so effin soft for your version of this two ♥️♥️♥️

Side note; I'm loving how Rishita is a positive character here ! At least it looks like Shivi's sacrifice didn't go in vain. And they even got love in return of that sacrifice ! Love love that ♥️♥️♥️

You are doing such a great job with this concept of the story ! And I always get greedy and greedy for more once I've gotten an update of this story! Par as I always say, aaram se likho ! That way your creativity can soar higher and us reader will benefit from it ♥️🍫♥️🍫♥️🍫

How beautifully you summarized it all!! ❤️❤️

Really happy that you enjoyed it

Actually almost satisfied that I was able to convey what I thought and felt writing this stort and you could connect with it all.

Now praying to not disappoint you actually.

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Will try to update sooner.

Keep loving🤗

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

How beautifully you summarized it all!! ❤️❤️

Really happy that you enjoyed it

Actually almost satisfied that I was able to convey what I thought and felt writing this stort and you could connect with it all.

Now praying to not disappoint you actually.

Thank you so much ♥️♥️

Will try to update sooner.

Keep loving🤗

Areey areey ! Don't think like that ! Just write what you feel and never think it's not enough. It's how we learn right ? If we never try, than how would we know !

I'm soo glad I've found this story and you are doing a good job of it ! ♥️😍♥️😍♥️

Such a lovely update! The way you write the scenes and their conversations feel so soothing🥰

ShiVi are so comfortable with each other ❤️

please update soon!