ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 30

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Very beautiful chapter! All the relationships are so pure, perfect and wholesome, be it Shiva-Shiv, Shiva-Raavi and even Shiva-Rishita!

Shiv's devotion and obsession towards Shiva was brilliantly explained

I loved how shiv was raavi's gift to Shiva, and Shiva himself was his gift to her

Very very heart touching❤️

Thank you🌹🌹👍

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

the ending was so emotional that i had tears in my eyes😭

the chapter was so beautiful, so emotional, so filled with love and shivi scenes. Awesome and lovely write up👏

Thank youuu🍫🍫

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

OMG, you updated!

And I loved it. It's interesting how Shiva and Rishita's equation has changed since Raavi's been there. And loved the insight into Raavi's journey as a "physically" single parent. It's so good to know that Shiva was always part of Shiv's life. All of that was done so well.Please update the next part soon.

Thank you.

Not yet decided on if this will be the last part or not.🌹

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update👏

Shiva and Rishita's relationship was beautiful😊

Shiv is so possessive about Shiva😊

Raavi's explanation about Shiv's possessive side for Shiva was lovely❤️

Raavi's struggle as a lonely single parent was emotional😭

Shiv is really ba gift to Shiva

Waiting for next

Thank you🌹

Originally posted by: Swathu

Wow!!!

This whole story is auch a beautiful journey

This part especially, the way Raavi described how she managed Shiv alone.. it was so surreal👏👏

Such an excellent piece of writing ❤️

Lovely..

Do write more like this🤗

Thank you🌷🌷🌷🍫🍫🌹🌹

It's was so beautiful 😍.

Shiva is an adorable father. The way rishita was crying over not getting any sleep was so realatable and shiva being a sweetheart was glad to help.their bonding was so cute. I wish we get such character development in the show as well😍.

Raavi describing her struggles during childbirth and pregnancy was heartbreaking🥺. She basically worshipped shiva . Their bond is soo pure. The only good thing about her marriage is shiv.dont worry cutie,the next time you get pregnant the whole family will be gushing over you,and shiva wont let your feet touch the ground.♥️

Thank you so much for this morning treat.❣️

Every time I read a story of yours, I am reduced to a snivelling mess😭

That kind of love is akin to a prayer❤️

The depth of emotions tugs at my hearstrings....

There are no words! It's simply beautiful❤️

Nice work . Keep up ur great work

This chapter was so beautiful.

Loved Shiva-Rishita bond.

Raavi's journey of taking care of Shiv was so emotional and touching. It teared me up. 😭

You penned the chapter amazingly. The dialogues were so deep and soulful.

I always admire the way you portray Shiva-Shiv scenes.

I'm overwhelmed reading this story so far. Glad that after all that she had gone through, Raavi is in her safe heaven with her bundle of joy. ❤️

Waiting for the next chapter. 🤗

Wonderful update 🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍

Shiv aur shiva ka rishta kitna gehra h aur kaise h both are beautiful 😍💖