ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 29

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Posted: 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

I cried at the end there ❤️


This was so pure and beautiful, I have tears in my eyes. Shiva's bond with Rishita was also so sweet ❤️


Loved this update ❤️ Beautifully written ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

I cried at the end there ❤️


This was so pure and beautiful, I have tears in my eyes. Shiva's bond with Rishita was also so sweet ❤️


Loved this update ❤️ Beautifully written ❤️


Thankyou Ananya🌷

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very beautiful chapter! All the relationships are so pure, perfect and wholesome, be it Shiva-Shiv, Shiva-Raavi and even Shiva-Rishita!

Shiv's devotion and obsession towards Shiva was brilliantly explained

I loved how shiv was raavi's gift to Shiva, and Shiva himself was his gift to her

Very very heart touching❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

this was emotional and beautiful.....

the anguish she has gone thru......the trauma and den she imagined him to be there for her, encouraging her, giving her hope.....all this was too much to bear........she was stronger den she thought ....


shiv's obsession has been cleared to all......wow.....love and adore the bond they have...........

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Posted: 4 years ago

That was just stunning. That explanation by Raavi about how Shiv had always been Shiva's was beautiful! The relationship between Shiv and Shiva was so wholesome, just how he goes round happily doing his dad duties is so wholesome. I'm so happy Raavi got her happiness 😭🤧. She went through so much. That Shiva and Rishita convo was unexpected but in a good way. Loved the progress in their relationship too.


Honestly one of the best FF's 👏👏❤❤.

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Posted: 4 years ago

the ending was so emotional that i had tears in my eyes😭


the chapter was so beautiful, so emotional, so filled with love and shivi scenes. Awesome and lovely write up👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

OMG, you updated!


And I loved it. It's interesting how Shiva and Rishita's equation has changed since Raavi's been there. And loved the insight into Raavi's journey as a "physically" single parent. It's so good to know that Shiva was always part of Shiv's life. All of that was done so well.Please update the next part soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update👏

Shiva and Rishita's relationship was beautiful😊

Shiv is so possessive about Shiva😊

Raavi's explanation about Shiv's possessive side for Shiva was lovely❤️

Raavi's struggle as a lonely single parent was emotional😭

Shiv is really ba gift to Shiva

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow!!!

This whole story is auch a beautiful journey

This part especially, the way Raavi described how she managed Shiv alone.. it was so surreal👏👏

Such an excellent piece of writing ❤️

Lovely..

Do write more like this🤗

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