Raghvi Drabble Series: Journey-[Final drabble updated 15/06 on page 9]

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Raghvi Drabbles Series: Journey

After reading the responses to my one shot [A Second Chance(OS)] I felt like writing a series of drabbles in the same AU. The dialogues will be in English here though, as I struggled with writing hindi dialogues especially for Raghav.

For those who have not read it :-

These stories are based in an AU where Pallavi and Mandhaar were married for an year before he died and the following events take place two years after his death. The story is same until the sangeet episode and this takes place a few months after that. The Deshmukhs have genuinely made Pallavi their own.

This series is not really a continuation of my one shot.

The stories will be in a chronological order unless specified otherwise, but I have not called it a short story as the time gaps between the stories will be disordered and they can be read separately.

Thank you to all those who left kind comments under my one shot, it gave me the confidence to write this.

INDEX:

1. Birthday- Page 1

2. Amma- Page 4

3. Dream- Page 5

4. Match- Page 6

5. Group- Page 8

6. Dance- Page 9

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Birthday

It was a pleasant Sunday morning and Raghav was glad that he could spend it in solitude. As he was drinking his cup of coffee, he began planning everything he would do today. Take a nice long bath, read a book, and finally just sit in silence with a glass of whiskey. It was the best way he could celebrate his birthday. His daydreams about a peaceful birthday were rudely interrupted by the doorbell.

“Reddy, go check who is at the door.”, he yelled while cursing the guest, or rather intruder, under his breath.

“Happy Birthday!”. Raghav heard a voice which had become familiar to him in the past few months. There she was, at his bedroom door in all her glory, Pallavi Deshmukh.

“How did you know it was birthday?”, he scowled, clearly unhappy that his day was ruined.

“That’s a weird way of saying thank you. As to how I found out, I too have my sources Ghamandi Rao.”, she grinned.

It was at this moment he realized that he might have preferred the less chirpy Pallavi. Anyways, he did what he did so he might as well entertain her.

“And did any of your sources have a name that rhymes with Garhad?”, he asked, despite knowing the reply.

Sure enough the reply came, “I take my sources very seriously Mr. Rao. I cannot share their details with you.”

Raghav mentally prepared the list of words he would be yelling at Farhad later this evening. Meanwhile the intruder had decided to make herself comfortable in his house.

“I must say you have way too many bottles of alcohol. Genuine question, do you drink more water or alcohol? Somehow I have seen you countless times with a glass of whiskey, rum or whatever it is that you drink but never water.”

“Firstly my alcohol consumption is none of your business, but for your kind information you have always seen me with a drink in my hand because it’s the only way I can tolerate your pointless chatter. Secondly, I’m very glad you came to wish me, however if you’d excuse me I do have other plans today. Sorry for the inconvenience.”

You think I’m intolerable! I’m offended.”

“And yet you are still here. Also did you blatantly disregard my second sentence?”

“Plans.. You are in your robe, lying on your bed with a book in your hands. Your plans probably involve reading and drinking whiskey.”, she scoffed.

“And those sound like great plans to me so if you would please leave.”, he said while pointing at the door.

“Nope. You couldn’t get me to leave even when we were enemies, now that we are friends don’t even bother to think about it. And if that makes you feel bad, don’t worry I’ve made plans.”

It was ironic that she should say “don’t worry I’ve made plans”,when that was the very statement that chilled Raghav to the bones. He had no doubt these “plans” weren’t going to make him very happy.

“Today we are going to bake your birthday cake!” There it was, Raghav’s doom.

“I’ve asked my sources to keep the ingredients ready. So all you have to do is follow me to the kitchen.”

And as much as he didn't want, he did follow her. They spent the next hour bickering over ingredients, vessels, cooking time and just about any topic they found, until the oven interrupted them. The cake was beautiful. A simple vanilla cake, light and fluffy.

“See, I told you not to worry.”,Pallavi said, pleased at her work.

“I’m pretty sure it turned out fine because of all my effort.”

“Since it’s your birthday I’ll let you believe what you want to”, she replied while patting his shoulder, “Anyways, time to cut the cake. Call all your staff and Farhad. Let them see what their beloved Anna has prepared.”

As they walked outside the kitchen , Raghav saw his hall decorated with streamers and his photos. He stood in silence, stunned at the decoration.

“Surprise!”,yelled a disordered chorus of Farhad, Pallavi, Reddy and the rest of his staff.

“I thought about your favourite theme and then I realised it had to be you. So there you have it, a day to celebrate ‘The Raghav Rao’.”, Pallavi couldn’t help but say.

“I’m honoured you know me so well.”, Raghav smiled. “But seriously, thank you Pallavi , I really mean it”. And surprisingly he did.

“And thank you to all of you as well, as a token of my gratitude, you will get to eat a cake prepared by me.”, he directed to his staff. At that statement the room burst into cheers, which were led by Farhad.

As they all surrounded him, with Pallavi and Farhad competing to sing the loudest and most out of tune ‘Birthday song”, Raghav felt at home.

This was better than any whiskey or book he could imagine and he wouldn’t have it any other way.

A/N:

This isn't proofread so forgive any typos or grammatical errors. Do share your feedback and corrections, if any.

Edited by hapc - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago
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OMG!!! It will be an understatement to say I loved it. It was fantablously amazing . Even though it was short you have succeeded to convey all the emotions to readers.

I loved this bond between Pallu and Raghav 😃. Waiting to see more of this Raghvi.

I have a small request to make. Will you please update next stories very soon......PLEASE .

P.S. Thanks for writing dialogues in English, it's so helpful to non-hindi speakers like me. 🤗

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Wow! I love this Alternate Universe you have created for our couple👏


I love how I get to read about their Friendship, how it would have been if not for how the TV-series had to go


Loved how Farhad & Pallavi create a happy ambience for their Reluctant Raghav always.


Please Please do write these OSes soon as you have a very ardent reader here😆

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Originally posted by: Amnnaaaa

OMG!!! It will be an understatement to say I loved it. It was fantablously amazing . Even though it was short you have succeeded to convey all the emotions to readers.

I loved this bond between Pallu and Raghav 😃. Waiting to see more of this Raghvi.

I have a small request to make. Will you please update next stories very soon......PLEASE .

P.S. Thanks for writing dialogues in English, it's so helpful to non-hindi speakers like me. 🤗

Thank you so much for this comment! ❤️

I'm so glad my writing succeeded in evoking emotions from you. It's ironical that I thought my inability to write hindi dialogues would inconvenience people but it ended up working in your favour, so it feels like a win-win.

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Originally posted by: SONIA441

Wow! I love this Alternate Universe you have created for our couple👏


I love how I get to read about their Friendship, how it would have been if not for how the TV-series had to go


Loved how Farhad & Pallavi create a happy ambience for their Reluctant Raghav always.


Please Please do write these OSes soon as you have a very ardent reader here😆

This is such a sweet comment!🤗For a new writer like me, they keep me going. Thank you. I hope my other OSes also do justice to the praise you have showered upon me.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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most adorable birthday scene ever

loved it

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Awww....the best suprise for RR...i am really excited what more you have in store for us...

this was simple and cute os--loved RaghVi's friendship--Bhabhi or not-Garhad is always on Pallavi's side

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Posted: 4 years ago
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awesome

write some more OS or short/long

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zahaanpana tussi great ho, mtaufa kubool karo💐🍰🍧🍫


short sweet lovely emotional perfect cute heartfelt............. list is going on....


👏👏👏👏

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