Raghvi Drabble Series: Journey-[Final drabble updated 15/06 on page 9] - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Me000w

Awww is an understatement in this one! Loved it! Keep writing šŸ‘

Please do PM for updates šŸ‘šŸ¼

Thank you!ā¤ļø I will definitely PM the next time I update.

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Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

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Wish we see this bond in our show

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Originally posted by: surbharati

Wish we see this bond in our show

Yes, even I hope the writers show us such scenes on the show.Thanks for the comment!

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Amma


ā€œSaree Ka Dukaan!ā€, Raghav’s voice reached Deshmukh Saree Emporium before he did.

ā€œWhat is it? Also please don’t yell while entering the shop we may have customers who wouldn’t like it.ā€, Pallavi replied.

ā€œHmph, sorry but I need you for a very important task.ā€

ā€œLet me decide, how important the task is and a please wouldn’t hurt anyone.ā€

ā€œOkay, Saree Ka Dukaan please help me.ā€

Pallavi smiled, ā€œTell me your problem.ā€

ā€œI need a Saree.ā€

ā€œAh, who is it for?,ā€ asked Pallavi, pleased at being asked to do something that was her forte.

ā€œMy Amma.ā€

And then began a hunt for the best saree in the whole world.

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ā€œNope.ā€

ā€œI don’t like the colour.ā€

ā€œThe borders are bad.ā€

ā€œI don’t like the material.

ā€œWhat is this? All the sarees are terrible,ā€said Raghav as he rejected the 25th saree.

ā€œWell maybe you’re the problem. These sarees are one of the best sarees I’ve ever seen. The handiwork is brilliant,ā€ replied Pallavi annoyed.

ā€œWow, your customer service is pathetic as well.ā€

At this point Pallavi was on the verge of screaming and all Krishna wanted to do was leave the store.

ā€œKrishna, go out and have a nice lunch break. Come back once I call you.ā€, Pallavi addressed Krishna while still glaring at Raghav.

ā€œBut didi..ā€

Pallavi turned back and nodded. That was all the confirmation Krishna needed. She hurried out of the store, relieved.

Meanwhile Pallavi focused her attention on Raghav.

ā€œWhat is it?ā€, She spit out.

ā€œWhat is what?ā€

ā€œSomething is clearly wrong. You’ve rejected some great sarees without even looking at them properly. Don’t waste my time and yours. Just tell me.ā€

ā€œI want a saree my Amma will like.ā€

"From what I know of Jaya Aunty and Keerthi, Aunty isn’t a picky woman. She’ll easily like a couple of sarees from this collection.ā€

ā€œYou don’t understand, I want a saree that Amma will like enough to accept from me,ā€ Raghav’s irritation was replaced with helplessness.

Pallavi sighed, ā€œAnd do you think you’re going to find a saree like that?ā€

Raghav lowered his eyes in reply.

Pallavi sat beside him.

ā€œI don’t know what to do to convince Amma to accept me. That I’m a good son. You’re the perfect daughter. You tell me what to do?ā€, Raghav turned to Pallavi.

ā€œRaghav, I think you should just listen to your amma.ā€

ā€œOf course I do that. You’ve seen me and Amma! I always listen to her.ā€

ā€œFrom what I’ve seen, you only hear what she says.ā€

They sat in silence as Raghav contemplated what Pallavi had just said. After a while, he got up.

ā€œI’m going to try what you told me to do. I’ve tried everything I thought of, might as well try to do what Amma thinks.ā€

Pallavi smiled.

ā€œAnyways I still want to buy a saree for her. So please help me find a good one.ā€, he said as he looked around.

She chuckled, ā€œWell if you put it so nicely, I might as well help you. This time, however, I make the rules.ā€

ā€œAnd what are these rules?,ā€ Raghav asked.

ā€œWe go through all the 25 sarees you rejected once again. You are very respectful of me and the sarees. And finally, I can add rules whenever I wish.ā€

ā€œThis feels like a trap,ā€ Raghav narrowed his eyes.

ā€œIt’s all you have now. Take it or leave it.ā€

ā€œThat’s not fair.ā€

ā€œYou should have thought about fair before insulting my shop.ā€

ā€œI was very troubled then!ā€

ā€œWell you aren’t anymore.ā€

ā€œHmph, fine, I accept your terms and conditions,ā€ Raghav gave in.

Pallavi grinned.

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They resumed the hunt. Pallavi spoke a paragraph about each saree while Raghav patiently listened. He followed all her rules and Pallavi, to her credit, didn’t misuse her power.

They finally settled on a beautiful cream coloured saree.

ā€œAmma will love this, it’s her favourite colour.ā€, Raghav smiled, pleased at his choice.

Pallavi neatly packed the saree and handed it over to Raghav.

ā€œThank you. Saree ka Dukaan for the saree and the advice.ā€

ā€œYou’re welcome, Ghamandi Rao. I see you’re saying a lot of thank you’s to me nowadays. You’ve finally learnt some manners due to me. ā€

ā€œI have always had manners. I merely didn’t consider you worth the effort,ā€ Raghav said casually.

ā€œWoah Mr. Rao! You’re on thin ice. Don’t forget that you owe me now.ā€

ā€œI never forget my debts Pallavi Deshmukh. I’ll pay them back, with interest. Ardham Aindaā€

ā€œWe’ll see about that.ā€, Pallavi smiled as Raghav walked out of the store.


A/N: Came up with another one. I apologise as it is also short. I guess I can only write short OSes.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Avneel07

This was lovelyā¤

Thank youā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
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All the stories are soo goodā¤ļø..enjoyed reading them.

Keep this continuešŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow! This was a very simple yet endearing Sceneā¤ļø


And Thanks for messaging me about the story


Raghav trying to find the best saree for his Amma & Pallavi helping him realize what his Amma actually wants from himšŸ‘....I love their friendship that you showcase here!


I loved this like I loved the previous onešŸ˜Ž

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Originally posted by: psychoruchi

All the stories are soo goodā¤ļø..enjoyed reading them.

Keep this continuešŸ‘šŸ¼

Thank you so much!šŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Wow! This was a very simple yet endearing Sceneā¤ļø


And Thanks for messaging me about the story


Raghav trying to find the best saree for his Amma & Pallavi helping him realize what his Amma actually wants from himšŸ‘....I love their friendship that you showcase here!


I loved this like I loved the previous onešŸ˜Ž

Thank you so much! Your comments are one of my favorites. They really keep me going.ā¤ļøā¤ļø

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