Sairat / Sampatra SS: Tanhaaiyan ( Ch 3 - Pg 8 Updated 24th May) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ps143

Yes she has 😔

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Author' Note:

Hello all,

So I have changed the introduction in the beginning. Would request you all to read it once and let me know your views on whether I should continue or not.

So this tale will be focusing on both Sairat and Sampatra.

Would you all still love to read it ? Should I continue?

Originally posted by: Ps143

Please check the note and then let me know if you'd still like to read the story if I include Sampatra in it

Why not dear!!

It will be a treat to read it !!

And the way u portray the emotions i'm damn sure we would also be in love with Pakhi.💕

Buckled up for the beautiful story!!!❤

Continue soon!!!

Yes yes u can add sampathra also

Would love to read

Please continue

Its all about how we present and portray a character... would love to explore the character through your lenses 💜

Chapter 2

She sat at the corner of her room, curtains of darkness covering the entire room. Just like the apparent perpetual darkness which had engulfed the light of her soul! Her eyes were red with shed and unshed tears, her kajal spread roughly. Her lips were quivering and stained with blood from the cuts her teeth had caused. Her hair cascaded down till her waist in a muddled heap due to randomly gathering it in a loose rubberband. Her hands and legs were bleeding at different spots due to cuts and wounds. Her pallu knocked off her shoulder, now lay at her waist. Overall, she was a wasted heap huddled at a corner, darkness all around and within her.

Suddenly the door knocked open and one could make out the sound of frantic footsteps. Suddenly light shone all over the place leading to shocked gasps from the two people who had entered. The room was a complete mess with clothes strewn on the bed, the mirror broken, books scattered, vase shattered, phone thrown at the side, the side table overturned and the lamp on it shattered at the corner. And at the farthest corner was she, her head on her knees, she showed no movement at all.

"Pakhi!" Vaishali rushed towards her daughter, horrified at the condition she was in. Just to what extent had this obsession seeped in her?

Shailesh followed behind, not knowing how or what to say. He painfully swallowed the lump in his throat even as he crouched next to his wife, infront of his daughter.

"Pakhi! What the hell have you done to yourself??" Vaishali shouted unable to process her daughter's madness.

Pakhi looked up slowly and her red eyes met Vaishali's. Her look horrified Vaishali who dropped down on the floor.

"Why?" Pakhi questioned gritting her teeth.

"What why?" Shailesh calmly asked, knowing he had to keep his calm in this situation

"Why did you tell them about me and Virat?" she shouted.

Shailesh sighed and said

" They needed to know the truth. That's what is best for all"

"No! That's not what is best for all!" she screeched and held his collars angrily, shocking both.

"I - I would have succeeded! She had left the house on her own accord making things easy for me. I would have succeeded! He- he would have been mine! He's mine! Just mine! Who gave you the right to stop me from reaching him?" she screamed shaking her father who stumbled, unable to keep his balance but she dint stop.

"Y-you came between me and him! It's because of you I lost this chance! The only chance I had! I hate you! I hate you!" she shouted and pushed him to the ground.

"Shailesh!" Vaishali called out and supported him. They stood up, tears falling down freely from their eyes and casting a look at Pakhi's perturbed and agitated form, left the room.

Their chests felt heavy with pain and guilt. It was their fault that their calm, lovely and mature princess had turned into a mad, obsessed woman. If only they had said no when they had to, if only they taught her to accept a no. If only they had given her proper guidance as to how to deal with the problems she faced. If only! But now they knew, it was quite late. With heavy hearts, they arrived at the decision which was needed at the hour. They couldn't stop her downfall but they'd surely bring her back. They'll do everything they have to, to bring back the original Pakhi!

There are two kinds of guilt: the kind that drowns you until you’re useless, and the kind that fires your soul to purpose.

- Sabaa Tahir

Shailesh and Vaishali had decided, their guilt will surely fuel their soul to purpose!

A/N

1) In this SS, Chavan family wouldn't be aware of Pakhi and Virat's past. No one from the family would be aware. They all like her because she's supposedly a good Maratha bahu.

2) Do share your views on the story. Would love to read your comments, which would also help me improve.

Love,

PSR

Very well written ❤️

Update soon❣️

Fantastic update

Pakhi is such a desperate women who wants everything according to her

Please update soon

Nice one...

Eagerly waiting for pakhi redemption

So might be the chavan family has got to know about their past

Sai's nightmares😭

What did virat find??

Will waiting for ur updates

Love

KAVYA