Shivi SS ~ Consequences [part 6 pg40 16/5/2021] [COMPLETED] - Page 33

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing. 

The ending was beautiful and satisfying. 

I really enjoyed reading this story. ❤️



Waiting for another ShiVi story from you. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

This was a perfect story....

Gaumbi is really tired of ShiVi..

Loveeeedd ShiVi moments...

Poor Krish, he didn’t slept good..

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Posted: 3 years ago

amazing end to this short story!

man this was truly one of my favs


loved the uff uff scene ☺️

and love how shiva stakes his claim on her


truly a beautiful relationship <3


can't wait to see what else you come up with!


till date my favorite work of yours has been Zidd but this one is definitely a close second one 

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Posted: 3 years ago

awesome story.....where it started where it ended...a mere misunderstanding brought them this close....this story is just perfect in it own ways

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Posted: 3 years ago

That's a beautiful way of ending it and how things came to full circle. Whatever didn't really happen during the holi night, happened today, but with True emotions and with both of their consent and consciousness.


And Krish having another example of #couplegoals. That last part was ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Soooo cuteeee

Thanks for writing this amazing story 🤗

Eagerly waiting for your stories 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow yaar! Such a nice ending!


Ofcourse dono ne poore ghar ko paagal kar rakha tha. Ladte-Jhagadte bina neend kahan se aaegi dono ko😆


Poore Family mein ek Gaumbi hi hoshiyaar hai! Kya Mastt dono ko patak aaye room mein🤣


Dev ke toh aansoon nikal aate bas🤣


Krish bechara! Koi na jaldi koi aaegi acchi wali teri life mein tabtak Padhai par dhyan de chupchap😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

It ended😭


Yepp, it did😔


Such a beautiful update! 


Thank you🤗


Shiva and Raavi finally move ahead in their relationship in the same room😆❤️

Riya ne bana di jodi 😆

Lovey dovey ShiVi was so funny but also satisfying to read!❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Beautiful ending. Where are the other stories? Waiting for more

Thank you,

updated one right now, working on the next one.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherryrose

it was a beautiful story filled with comedy drama amd lots of twists. Njoyed it👏

thanks a lot🤗