A Poem On PurVir

Hey guys, It's Tanisha here. I have read all the FFs, SS, OS, TS and every other thing you guys have posted here and before anything else, I must say they were really great. So getting back to my topic, I am a disaster at stories but I do write decent poems and I have written a poem on our PurVir and really want to share it with you. Hope you all will like it. A happy reading ahead.

Falling

Gazing into your eyes, day in and day out,

I keep falling, falling for you.

My eyes wish to get lost into yours,

And see the world in a new frame.

My ears wish to hear your voice,

And resonate it, soft and faint.

My mind wants to think of you,

To go down your memory lane.

My heart wants to be yours,

To never be mine again.

I often wish to amble,

With our hands entwined.

To let myself free,

And follow your antics.

To see your eyes gleam with happiness,

And search my happiness in you.

To feel your warmth all alone,

And keep falling, falling for you.

This poem is from Vir's perspective. Hope that you all would enjoy it.

Its very good...keep up the effort😁👍🏻

You're really good at ur work tanisha 👏

I must appreciate for your wonderful work !! 🤗

The words u chose to describe Vir's feelings are so pure and true and apt !! Very well done 👏

I'm glad you decided to share this beautiful piece of work with us !! Keep going 😉

Originally posted by: Suppss

You're really good at ur work tanisha 👏

I must appreciate for your wonderful work !! 🤗

The words u chose to describe Vir's feelings are so pure and true and apt !! Very well done 👏

I'm glad you decided to share this beautiful piece of work with us !! Keep going 😉

Thank you 😊

Lovely poem tanisha 🤗🤗

Pls do write more😳

Welcometo the forum Tanisha🤗

This is so Beautiful !❤️

You have actually penned his real emotions and feelings..

So perfect and pure..Love it..❤️

Hii Tanisha🤗

The poem is soo good ❤️❤️

Do keep writing😊😳

What a BEAUTY

Wonderful poem Tanisha, Marvellous 👏

Displaying such a wonderful array of Vir's feelings, aptly describe. Your words have such tranquility in them.

Truly a Masterpiece!

Do write more ...!

Originally posted by: Tanisha_16

Hey guys, It's Tanisha here. I have read all the FFs, SS, OS, TS and every other thing you guys have posted here and before anything else, I must say they were really great. So getting back to my topic, I am a disaster at stories but I do write decent poems and I have written a poem on our PurVir and really want to share it with you. Hope you all will like it. A happy reading ahead.

Falling

Gazing into your eyes, day in and day out,

I keep falling, falling for you.

My eyes wish to get lost into yours,

And see the world in a new frame.

My ears wish to hear your voice,

And resonate it, soft and faint.

My mind wants to think of you,

To go down your memory lane.

My heart wants to be yours,

To never be mine again.

I often wish to amble,

With our hands entwined.

To let myself free,

And follow your antics.

To see your eyes gleam with happiness,

And search my happiness in you.

To feel your warmth all alone,

And keep falling, falling for you.

This poem is from Vir's perspective. Hope that you all would enjoy it.

Beautiful work dear.. 👏❤

Do write more.. We love to read.. ❤

Hey tanisha, its very good. I personally think writting a poem is a difficult thing. But u did it so well. Keep writing. 👏