Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 17

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

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You have me so excited for tonight's episode. Haha so glad you incorporated Kesar. And all of the dialogues. 😆I really want to get inside of your head when your write these dialogues. You've got to be chuckling while you write this. That whole Kesar drama. And Dev chimed in for the extra effect as well! Kesariya 😆

And I loved the little ShiVI bike scene as Shiva was dropping her off to work. It was cute and they're moving in the right direction. And probably faster than what they anticipated. Haha looks like dono ka time aa ga ya hai. Can't wait to read what Raavi has up her sleeves to use this new information to settle the score with Shiva on all of his pranks. One thing I know for sure is that it's going to be a riot!!

Thank you so much for loving the story

About chuckling, well yeah😆

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Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

I always get so excited when you upload 😆

This was so funny! Love Krish, Shiva and Raavi's antics. I really want to see all three brothers also laughing and bonding, really miss that in the show. The story progression is so organic and their relation is budding so beautifully That forehead kiss I am just in love.

That bit in the shop when Gaumbi told her that his future khandaan will come from you was so funny 🤣 Dimaag ki batti jali 😆

Super eager to read about this jealousy angle!! Update sooooon ❤️

Thank you so much for all the love

Sorry for not replying earlier.

Hope you enjoy the further story

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HELLO LOVELY PEOPLE!!!🤗

Sorry for my lateness. Here with an update. Hope you all enjoy it. Sorry for the typos.

Let me know about your thoughts. Criticism is always welcome.

Thanks to everyone who read , liked and commented on the previous posts.

Keep loving and Happy reading❤️

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PART 6

Shiva rolled his eyes looking at the giggling duo –Raavi and her favourite devar Krish. They were sitting together behind the counter and watching something on the phone. Raavi had joined school 8 days back. Since then it had become a routine that she would return to the store directly and send Gaumbi home. They would manage the store along with Kaka and Dev. Krish would join them in the evening. But today Krish was there even before Raavi returned and since then they were whispering and chuckling among themselves.That chipkali had always irritated him. Yes it felt good to have her around but still she was synonym to irritation. Raavi felt his glare at them and chuckled some more,

“kaha fasa rahi hai mujhe tu, tere volcano ugalne wala pati ko jab pata chale ga na tab mujhe chutti pe bhej dega, aasman pe”, Krish said trying not to wince at his brothers mild glare, but Raavi was enjoying it.

“accha hai, tu chand, mangal sab ghoom aana”, Krish looked at her nonchalant tone incredulously, “dekh Krish ,tune usska madat kya mujhe darana mein”, She replied in a low voiceas if she was making a child understand something, “ toh aab yeh usska compensate samajh”,

“kya miyan-biwi hai, tum dono ke pyar ke aag dekh kar dar lagta hai kisi din somnath na jal jaye”, he muttered under his breath letting out a fake giggle,

“yeh tum dono aaj kuch jyada hi nahi has rahe ho? Hume bhi batao aisa kya ho gaya”, Dev asked as he and Shiva stood in front of the counter. He had been observing the youngest two member of their family since they entered. They look too happy today and may be too excited,

“kuch nahi dev hum toh woh Bunny ke bare me baatein kr rahe the”, Raavi replied him with a shrug but her husband’s ears immediately perked up.

“bunny kon?”, Dev asked and saw the duo grin as if they were waiting for that question only,

“arreh Bhabi ka woh RK jaisa colleague. Accha dost ban gaya hai bhabi ka”, he narrowed his eyes at Krish’s ready reply but had to roll his eyes hearing Shiva,

“Accha hai, Ek ka naam bunny dusri ke shakal bunny jaise. Dosti khub jamegi”, Krish inhaled a sigh a waiting the fighting couple’s epic fight to start but to everyone’s surprise Raavi didn’t flare up and retort him. Instead she worriedly got up from her sit and leaned across the counter to feel Shiva’s forehead and throat with the back of her hand,

“Shiva tu thik to hai na!! Bhukar to nahi hai”,she frowned at his face and then as if some realisation dawned upon her she squealed smiling like a cheshire cat, “Iska matlab....woah!!!! tune meri tareef ki. Zindagi mein pehli baar Shiva ne meri tareef ki”, Krish frowned, what was she saying! Did he praise her really?

“Usne tujhe bunny bulaya hai”,

“Wahi toh. Bunny kitna cute hota hai, aur isne mujhe bunny bulaya matlab main usse cute dikhti hu, haaye!!!! Poore somnath mein mithai batni padegi toh aaj”,

“Somnath chod, mujhe hi khilade. Sacchi mann se dua karungi tum dono ke liya”,

Dev shook his head, these three were never going to grow up. Well once three idiots always three idiots!!

“ Ae mami ke behan ki beti, Humesha kehta hu dekhke chala kar. Aab lagi na chot saar pe”, Shiva exclaimed hitting her head softly ignoring whatever Krish said,

“Tu aapne baat se piche nahi hatt sakta Shiva. Cute toh tune kaha. Gawa hai yaha pe”, Raavi giggled smiling extra cutely,

“aur tu uss bunny ya funny ko cute bol raha tha”,

“aab woh hai hi itna cute”, Shiva glared her with his on his waist, “pata hai aaj toh ussne gajar ka halwa banake laya tha”, Raavi said excitedly,

“Tuuuum....logoke liye bhabi?”, Krish started his part acting all eager, stressing the tu part.

“haaa. Kal besaan ke laddu laya tha, bataya tha na tujhe. Itna swadist tha”, Shiva scowled at her,

“kya bhabi humare liye bhi le aate”,

“ussne bola sondesh banake layega”,

“sondesh”, Dev heard Krish ask excitedly and shook his head – this two were up to something,

“bengali sweet. Bunny bhi bengali hai nah”,

“yeh teacher hai ya halwai!! School mein aab halwa wala bhi rakhte hai kya”, Shiva said in an irritated tone,

“mujhe na aapka yeh bunny pe dil aa rahe hai”, all three gave him an horrified look, “aise kya dekh rahe ho”, Raavi decided to continue ignoring her devar’s over acting,

“tujhe toh maine bataya nahi. Hum na batein kar rahe the aur pata chala humare pasand kitna milte hai. Usska fav film hai Ramleela, mera bhi. Usska fav flower hai gulab, mera bhi”,

“aee gadheri kal tak toh tu mogra ke piche marti thi ,aaj gulab kaise ho gaya”,

“tujhe kaise patah!!”, Shiva raised his eyebrow at her surprised tone – she had forcibly made him buy them many times, then how wouldn’t he know!, “chal chod. Phir usse pink color pasand hai aur mujhe bhi”,

“aur yellow mere favourite hai!!!”, he muttered under his breath anticipating some more changes in her fav list for today,

“aur usse bhi tom cruise bohat pasand hai”,

“Chris Evans se tom cruise!! Abbe mami ke behan ke beti, tujhe nahi lagta tu aaj kuch jyada hi flip mar rahi hai”, Shiva asked leaning on his hands on the counter,

“oo masi ke behan ki damad ,tujhe nahi lagta kuch jal raha hai”, Raavi didn’t take time to meet him half way,

“Lagta nahi, sach mein jal raha hai. Mere bhai ka saar, tere baton se pak gaya hai uska bheja. Dekh dhuan nikal raha hai”, Shiva pointed at Krish’s head who actually moved his head side to side to see if dhuan was coming out or not,

“par mujhe toh jalne ke batbu yaha se aa raha hai”, Raavi jabbed at his heart over his chest. Shiva replied her hurriedly,

“kuch bhi!! Main kyun jalunga bhala. Tere iss bunny funny se main nahi jal raha”

“maine aisa kab kaha. Iska matlab tu Bunny se jal raha hai”, Raavi smirked at his WTH look – finally! Look who got trapped,

“ayy cockroach ki tarah udd mat. Shiva kisi se nahi jalta”, he scowled acting unaffected but the next words made him go red in embarrassement,

“Tum dono kitna cute ho! Raavi ke muh se kisi aur ke batein sunte hi Shiva kaise laal ho gaya”, Dev snorted at Rishita’s word. He hugged her as she came inside and Krish waved his hand. Shiva glared at the gloating face of his chipkali who looked too much satisfied with herself. Raavi’s mission was accomplished. She just wanted to make Shiva red in jealousy but here embarassment came in bonus. She did a victory dance in her mind.

“Yeh saab appko cute lag raha hai shayad.Shadi ke pehle innse milte nah toh soch te agle din kise zinda dekhoge –bhoothnath ko ya chipkali ko”,

“ayy Krish, chipkali kisse bula raha hai”,

“tu bhoothnath kisse keh raha hai”, ShiVi exclaimed together loudly then glared at each other again,

“yeh dekho. Ek dusre ko yeh nam ke alawa pukarte nahi aur hum bole to ayyyy”,Krish exclaimed dramatically moving away from them,

“aab toh shadi kar ke aa rahi ho ghar me ,pata chale ga yeh log cute hai ya chalta phirta kacheri”.

“par agar dekha jaye toh krish, yeh dono bachpan se humsha sath mein hi milte the na”,

“ha ek dusre ke sar pe nachte huye”, Rishita looked at them curiously,

“Shiva ko dhoondna hai toh Raavi ka pata lagalo aur Raavi ke liye Shiva ka”,

“aur kya chupaya tha ha apna prem kahani”, ShiVi who was having a staring contest, snapped out of it and looked around.

“haa,mujhe na tum dono ka love story sun ni hai. Yeh Dev ko kabhi kuch puri tarah se patah nahi hotah. Tum dono mujhe batao. Woh bhi poore details mein.”, Rishita asked excitedly as she settled beside Raavi. ShiVi blinked at each other feeling mildly panicked ­– ‘yeh love story kaha se paida kare aab’ – Shiva muttered under his breath giving Dev murderous glance. Who asked this idiot todo nain mataka with another over-zealous woman!! Raavi who was still leaning close to him over the counter scowled at him.

“arreh gupta ji ka delivery aane wala tha na. abhi tak nahi aaya. Main dekhti hu”, Shiva tried for an escape route only to get hold back by his wife –how could her kirane ki dukan leave her in his kirane ki dukan! That too with these chugli aunties ; matlab her b-i-ls and s-i-l.

“woh kal aane wala hai. Gupta ji call karke bataya toh tha”, Raavi said with a sweet smile gritting her teeth. She held Shiva’s arm tightly almost digging her nails daring him to leave right now. Looking at her face, Shiva thought it would be best to stay back. Knowing Raavi, if he left now she would spun such a story that would only embarrass him more. He needed to save his grace from this mad chipkali.

“Finally Somnath ke sabse eitihasik kahani janne wale hai hum”, Shiva rolled his eyes at Krish and Rishita’s excitement. They wanted a story they would get one and wouldn't even know whatever hit them. He looked at his chipkali to find her staring him. He could see her gears turning and he could see disaster was coming up. He suddenly felt scared.

“toh hua yeh ki.... hum dono bachpan se ek dusre ko jaan te the”, Raavi started with a nervous smile,

“Bah hume pata hi nahi tha”, Krish remarked laughing as Dev hit his head. Raavi glared at Krish for the interruption and then at Shiva for chuckling at her expanse – enjoying too much? Wait and watch.

“toh iska sapna tha pandya banna. Ab krish isse chota hai aur Dev do saal bara.Bacha kaun main. Iski khush kismati ki main issi ka umr ka tha aur ussne apna chance marna shuru kar diya”,

“woh hello tu bhoothnath apna khayali pulao mat bata. Main batati hu. Dekho main thehri Somnath ke sab se beautiful, cute, lovely, gorgeous, khoobsurat........”,

“chipkali,chudail, gadheri..", Shiva singsonged along with her, "pata hai hume. Aage bol”,

“toh yeh bhoothnath mera charm resist nahi kar paya aur mere piche lattu ho gaya”, Raavi finished flicking her lock,

“aee mami ke behan ki beti. Apna mat bana. Main tere piche!! Impossible!”, Dev and Krish rolled at the couple, Rishita looked amused,

“Lo inka shuru ho gaya. Tum dono pehle decide karlo kahani ka starting kaise hua tha”,

“wahi toh kar rahe hai”, they snapped at Krish who frowned at them,

“mujhe toh lagta hai inn dono ka jitna khicha taani chalta hai na, inn ka story uss tarah se shuru hua hoga”,

“kis tarah se”,

“Exactly, kiss tarah se. dono hamesha aise rehte hai aur chumma chatti se shuru ho gayi ho gi”, Krish gestured to the current position of Shivi with their face inches apart. They gave each other a surprised look and sprung back fast. They felt embarassed suddenly. Were they always like that? Shiva glanced at Raavi and saw her looking at everywhere with a red tint to her cheek. She was blushing? for real!! He stared at her amused.

“yeh bajirao ko dekho ab bhi aankhe fad fad ke dekh raha hai apna mastani ko”, Raavi looked up to catch Shiva’s amused look before he snapped at Krish. He was finding all these amusing! Then let’s make it more amusing.

“tu chup kar Krish. Tere advertisement ki vajese show abhi bhi shuru hi nahi ho paa raha”, Shiva sighed exasperatedly seeing the three looking at them eagerly again. Where were all the customers today when he needed them the most!!

“sharmane ka kya hai Shivu. Apna hi hai, inhe bata ne mein kaisa sharam ki tu mere liye mere fav bajirao jaise baal bhi rakhne wala tha ”, Shiva cringed hearing Raavi’s fake giggle. What was she hinting at even!! Bajirao ? that bald head style!!

“Shivuu!!!”“Bajirao!!’, both boys grasped out and Rishita was almost making dreamy eyes. Shiva felt like smacking his own head with that chipkalis. If she was having fun then why should he sit back!!

“Kyare chipkali kabhi toh andar ke baath andar rakkha kar. Maine bataya kya ki kaise tu meenamma ki chudail avtaar lene wali thi. Woh toh maine jhoot bola ki tu asie hi deepika lagti hai warna Somnath itne dino khali ho jata”,

“arreh woh chodo. Yeh batao propose kisne kiya pehle”, Rishita interveined before they could continue,

“Yeh Gadheri / Bhoothnath”, ShiVi scowled at each other – he/she proposing her/him !! huh expensive dreams!!

“Raavi tum bolo kaise propose kiya tha Shiva ne”,

“ussne mujhe film dikhane le gaya tha aur waha apna dil ke baat bataya”, Raavi said fiddling with her pallu acting all shy, Shiva winced.

“par tum dono ko toh nikal diya gaya tha na toh propose kiya kab”, Krish asked with a thoughtful look. ShiVi turned to each other – did they really went to cinema? Together? When?

“abbe gadhere woh toh usse pehle tha”,

“Aww dekha dev yeh dono kitne romantic hai. Cinema dekhne jaate hai. Aur tum ho!!”, both ShiVi felt peace as Rishita complained to Dev. They could escape now if this two got into an argument , “Par rehne dotum. Shiva tu bata fir kya hua”, and ShiVi again turned to glare Dev - they needed to teach him to fight they decided. Then a customer entered the store making ShiVi sigh in relief. Shiva literary ran to attend him while Dev went to drop Rishita stating – “ShiVi’s love saga khatam karne me saal lag jayenge”.

After an hour,

Shiva came in finishing his call with Gaumbi to find his wife in conversation with a young man. He looked their age. Shiva narrowed his eyes at Raavi as she laughed at whatever the young man had said.

“Kya chaiye aapko?”, Shiva asked gruffly making them shift their attention to him.

“Shiva isse mil. Yeh mere college me tha, Aman, meri bohat accha dost”, Aman smiled at Raavi sweetly then turned to Shiva,

“It’s a pleasure to finally meet you. Aman Grover”,

“sunke toh gobar hi lagta hai”, Shiva muttered glancing at the forwarded hand. Then he shook it tightly making Aman almost wince. He didn’t leave the hand no matter how much the other pulled it.

“Accha,tu issi ki baat karti thi. Joh tere liye phool wagera lata tha”, Raavi was surprised that he remembered that information, “fir toh tujhe gale lagana banta hai”, Shiva said eyeing Aman head to toe. Aman was considerably tall man with fair skin and round face giving him a chocolate boy look. Shiva hugged him tightly making him struggle to leave him.

“arreh Raavi main jaata hu fir kabhi milunga”, Aman almost ran away making his mind to not cross Shiva’s wife’s path again. Shiva chuckled at Raavi’s widen eyes.

“shukar hai tujhe yeh gadhera yaad nahi. Warna tab bolta ki ‘aur woh phool aur chocalates ke baare me bata’”, Shiva said mimicking Raavi.

‘Kiya tu Bhabi ko phool aur choclates bhi deta tha”, Krish acted to faint with that information. Shiva smacked him and pushed him out ordering to not come back for the day. He turned to a smirking Raavi,

“tu nah jyada khi khi mat kya kar custmaroke saat ,samjhi?”,Raavi just grinned at him and turned to arrange something on the shelf. Shiva stood behind her closely and bend to whisper in her ears,

“mujhe sab samajh mein aa raha hai tu kiya kar rahi thi. Yeh sab mere saath math kiya kar”, she turned to him and kept her hand on his chest ,

“tune mujhe daraya maine tujhe jalaya. Hisab barabar. Samjha mere bhoothnath”, Shiva gazed into her eyes as if caught in a trance. Krish’s word came back to him and he glanced at her lips which looked tempting to him all on a sudden. Raavi gulped as she followed his gaze. But the moment was broken as someone came and they quickly moved apart attending to the person glancing at each other in between.

Yayy! Update ❤️

I just love their bond here! Not only Shiva and Raavi but all of them ❤️

Can't wait to see how they will proceed now

Please iss baar itna lamba intezaar mat karvana 😆 Update soon! 🤗

Bahut accha tha!!!! Jaldi update de dena. It was too good👍

Awesome 🤣

The way the snapped at Krish, when he asked to decide how the story started...superb

finally....thankyou for the update

amazing update👍🏼❤️ shivi's embarrassment was treat to watch and shiva become jealous of aman was funny😆

Amazing and hilarious update🤣

Loved the bond of everyone 😊

Shivi were so embarrassed😆

Shiva was so jealous😉

Let's see how Shivi's relationship will proceed after this

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

You know I had to google the hindi you wrote then I was like🤣🤪

So glad you enjoyed the dialogues and everything. 🤗

Thank you so much for loving the story

Keep loving

is my hindi that bad?

Amazing update 👏👏👏👏👏

Shivi ki imaginary love story 😅😅😅

Shiva is jealous 🤩🤩🤩

Very beautiful story ❤

Update next part soooooooòooooooooooooooon