Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 16

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It was awesome. You penned it down amazingly. The dialogues were so organic. ❤️

It was fun reading the chapter. Shivi's evolution.... That moment was so sweet and well executed.

Each character was so authentic.

Loved it.

Do update soon. 🤗

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Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update👏

Shivi, Krish & Kesar part in haveli was hilarious😆

The dialogues were so apt and hilarious🤣

Loved how smoothly Shivi's relationship is changing❤️

Shivi's bike moment was beautiful

Gautam's dialogue about future khandan was hilarious😆

Shiva is jealous, let's see what Raavi will do to settle the score

Waiting for next

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Originally posted by: mirai07

The entire time I was reading it, I had a huge smile playing on my lips.❤️

Lovely part 👏

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Originally posted by: priyanka26996

Nice update

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

Kudos to you writers..you guys bring life into your write ups..seriously,how you guys write dialogues for raavi,shiva and krish? 🤣😆

only two options,either आप लोगों के अंंदर उन तीनो का भूत चढ जात है या आप writers को split personality का बिमार है। 🤣

my fav dialogues:

1. “tu bhi chudail woh bhi chudail. Behno hoge na tum dono?”
   
2. usse rishta hoga tera. Tu bhoothnath woh bhi Bhoothni”.
   
3. behen bani sautan”, “mera matlab soch Raavi bhabi, woh yaha itne saalon se tera hi intezar kar rahe hai. Tujhse badla lene ka!
4. shaadi saath janmo ka bhandan hota hai. Pichle kisi janam chod diya hoga Shiva ne usse tere liye”.
5. sun,waha apni asli roop mat dikhana, bacchco ko pata chala tu chudail hai toh school chod ke bhag jayenge.

🤣🤣

keep up the good work!

You know I had to google the hindi you wrote then I was like🤣🤪

So glad you enjoyed the dialogues and everything. 🤗

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Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Soooo beautiful 😍

Kesar, behen bani sautan🤣🤣🤣🤣

That moment when he dropped her to school

N that forehead kiss was so sweeet🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Aane wala khandaan 😜😜😜😜😜

Shiva to jealous hone wala h 😅😅😅😅

Thanks for updating

Update next part soooooooòooooooooooooooon ❤

Sorry for being late

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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Nice chapter! Shiva's dialogues were the highlight 😆.. Raavi accepting that chudails are her rishtedaar 🤣

Shiva claiming that kesar was his lover was hilarious

Loved the whole shivi, krish and kesar part! ❤️

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Originally posted by: Foxii

So Freaking good, best part so far :)

I laughed soo much, when Raavi dropped the vase and she and krish hugged shiva... their banter while the whole Kesar fiasco was superb ♥️

Krish as kesar khalaa hahaha

Shivi little romance moment was cute

Shivaaa is jealous 😍😍 loved it, continue soon please

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Originally posted by: NadaanDil

This was lovely! Loved how the story progressed!

Update soon

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Will try

Originally posted by: Namita-M

Another awesome update! Loved it.

Thank you so much for loving the story, Nami dii