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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Awww!! EDT par we were discussing the same plot!

How lovely to have people who can immediately help us read something that we wish for.


Thanks for this lovely piece! Hope there's a Part-2.


I was on EDT too when I recalled I already have one 🤭

EDT pe you were discussing him teaching her or the boy going home, ye thodu alag hai 😌

Thanks for reading šŸ’«

Sorry to disappoint, but I suck at writing anything but OSes šŸ˜”

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Prerna23456

Amazing one.....Well I have already read it....I don't remember the name..... But it's definitely from the another ITV GHKKPM ( GHUM HAI KISIKEY PYAAR MEIN ) between Pakhi Sai Virat and SamratšŸ˜„


Thanks for reading šŸ’«

As I did mention in the introduction itself, I used MY story from the GHKKPM forum and modified it a lil bit for RaghVi. It is called What If I Wanna Change That? on that forum.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Looneygirl

Please continue. As many have said this deserves a part 2


Thanks for reading šŸ’«

Sorry to disappoint, but I suck at writing anything but OSes šŸ˜”

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Me000w


I was on EDT too when I recalled I already have one 🤭

EDT pe you were discussing him teaching her or the boy going home, ye thodu alag hai 😌

Thanks for reading šŸ’«

Sorry to disappoint, but I suck at writing anything but OSes šŸ˜”


Arre, Don't Worry! Just try to think of it as another OS. Maybe some kinda business/life lesson that Raghav's teaching her when he sees her in a shop or sth. Like he gave advice during Mansi's sangeet for that School Lady našŸ˜‰ .... Maybe this might help. Just trying to encourage awesome writers like you šŸ™ˆā™„ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Kavita99

Mere liye toh barso jesa hi hota h agr din me 1 bhi new raghvi story padhne na milešŸ˜‚addicted to it nowšŸ˜‚


That is a funny aspiration to have, but glad you chose my story to start your day šŸ˜‡

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Dear Readers,


Thank you for all your appreciation and love so far šŸ’«


As a writer, I am aware that one of my flaws is that I am not good at ensuring continuity in parts, which is why I do not write anything but OSes and drabbles. As indicated in the introduction, I have merely copied off my previous story What If I Want To Change That? from the GHKKPM forum and modified it a little bit.


I understand and am gratified that you would like a Part 2, but writing a story under pressure, means that I will be giving you a version that I am clearly not confident about, and since I am the kind of person who does not even hand in a substandard assignment, it takes a mental toll on me to force myself to be inspired when I am not or to publish something I know makes no sense to me. I do consider it important for me to trust my own story before convincing others. Besides, I do have my exams coming up soon, so I am not in the frame of mind to be making promises I know I cannot keep.


So it is my humble request, if you have any feedback on THIS version of the tale, independant of demanding any additional parts, please feel free to leave it in comments. If you so choose to avoid my work moving forward for this too, I shall understand, though there is obviously no offence meant to anybody.


~ Tannu šŸ˜”

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

You don’t have to rush in giving the part take your time

Finish your exams first Best of luck

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Me000w


Thanks for reading šŸ’«

Aww..breath of fresh air..what does it smell like? Mangoes? šŸ¤­šŸ¤—

I guess I was sorta vibing on Yuvi/Ashi from Remix when writing it, but published it 5-6 months ago on GHKKPM forum ~ SaiRat šŸ¤

Always šŸ¤—

Well I'm not into smelling stuff like Raghav šŸ˜† But I do love mangoes šŸ˜†

Ahh, Sairat. I should've guessed from the "pati encouraging higher studies" convo. This reminded me more of TiaVeer than Yuvi/Ashi though... remember Ranveer and Arjun? 🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Me000w

Dear Readers,


Thank you for all your appreciation and love so far šŸ’«


As a writer, I am aware that one of my flaws is that I am not good at ensuring continuity in parts, which is why I do not write anything but OSes and drabbles. As indicated in the introduction, I have merely copied off my previous story What If I Want To Change That? from the GHKKPM forum and modified it a little bit.


I understand and am gratified that you would like a Part 2, but writing a story under pressure, means that I will be giving you a version that I am clearly not confident about, and since I am the kind of person who does not even hand in a substandard assignment, it takes a mental toll on me to force myself to be inspired when I am not or to publish something I know makes no sense to me. I do consider it important for me to trust my own story before convincing others. Besides, I do have my exams coming up soon, so I am not in the frame of mind to be making promises I know I cannot keep.


So it is my humble request, if you have any feedback on THIS version of the tale, independant of demanding any additional parts, please feel free to leave it in comments. If you so choose to avoid my work moving forward for this too, I shall understand, though there is obviously no offence meant to anybody.


~ Tannu šŸ˜”

Aww dearie šŸ¤— First of all, best of luck for your exams! Seeing how you're so particular about everything, I know you're gonna rock them ā­ļø

Secondly, writing is all about bringing your own wishes and imaginings to life, so you should only ever write for yourself. Don't feel pressured! ā¤ļø

But also for yourself, sometimes consider taking a step beyond your comfort zone as well 😳 The first time is always difficult, but you'll never get better until you try, right? 😳 Trust me, it feels good to take that step. No matter how much you feel it sucks, you're one step closer to achieving something new ā¤ļø

All the best! šŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: rinku95

You don’t have to rush in giving the part take your time

Finish your exams first Best of luck


Thank you for the kind wishes šŸ¤—

I think I have been misconstrued. It has nothing to do with time, dearie. I clearly have no interest in doing so, since neither am I good at it nor I am convinced about it, and am requesting that I do not wish to be forced to do so. Was just trying to state it more amicably for readers. Hope that you understand. Thank you.

Edited by Me000w - 4 years ago

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