|| ShiVi FF -- Fragile Hearts || Ch 1 @ PG 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Prologue


Raavi


6 months. Everything changed in just six months. No one is happy. Everyone's life has changed. We all are together, still apart. Me and my best friend Rishita, we are in our new life. In a new house, with a new family. Yes, the Pandya family. Now, we are a part of this family. I love everyone in the house except one person. Who? My Husband!


Shiva


It's really a turning point in all of our lives. We four are going through very critical stages of our lives - Dev, Rishita, Me and She. Each of us is afraid of losing something. Everything is seems perfect to others, I love my family but I hate her. Who? My wife!

Hola guys. I am Shirisha. You can call me Shiri :) This is my first story on ShiVi. Slightly inspired by the show, yet a different concept. I hope you like it :)


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi Shiri.

This is Meera here.

The prologue is interesting.

So, it's a different take on Shivi. I would love to read more of it.

Will be waiting for the update.

Do continue soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi Shiri

Jen here

Prologue from their points of view is rather intriguing dr

Do continue this different take of the story seems fascinating.

Will love to read directly from their minds as to what each other means to them.
Pls do remind me when you continue in the form of a PM❣️

Love

Jen

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi, Shiri :)

Nice Idea, looking forward to reading this story.

Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi Shiri, I'm Sofia. This sounds really interesting, love that it's from both their POVs. Can't wait to read more ❤️.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting concept

Waiting for next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting prologue

Looking forward to the updates

👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Hi Shiri.

This is Meera here.

The prologue is interesting.

So, it's a different take on Shivi. I would love to read more of it.

Will be waiting for the update.

Do continue soon.


Thank you Meera :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Hi Shiri

Jen here

Prologue from their points of view is rather intriguing dr

Do continue this different take of the story seems fascinating.

Will love to read directly from their minds as to what each other means to them.
Pls do remind me when you continue in the form of a PM❣️

Love

Jen


Thanks Jen.


Will surely do :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Foxii

Hi, Shiri :)

Nice Idea, looking forward to reading this story.

Update soon


Thanks dear :)

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