ShiVi TS: Scandalous - Page 5

Originally posted by: 7APK

Mind Blowing 😍😘😍😘

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Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

The premise of your story... I had way too many emotions... laughter (Raavi's let's get into Shiva's trunk to get into his home to steal something), amaze (Shiva's "I take one too many cold showers because of you"), shamelessness (as I imagine Shiva as a nerd with glasses (he could totally pull off the look)).

What a great alternate universe type story! Love it. Wondering how the second part will be, especially since you've upped the game by mentioning "cold-showers." Can't wait to see just how repressed this boy is...

after seeing these comments I'm wondering if I actually made it that suspenseful as everyone is making it out to be 😆

I can guarantee that bachata will not be repressed in the upcoming parts 😉

Originally posted by: Namita-M

Ooh!! I can’t wait read more!!

updating within the next hour!!

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Ooohh loved this one! Totally expected such a crazy plan from Raavi 😆

What a place to stop.. that's too evil 😳

Waiting for more❤️

I know but I'm a krazy kaameeni so I had to stop there 🤣

but fear not, update coming soon

Originally posted by: tumhiho

Ahhh Raavi is too cute😂 her blackmail plan was pretty solid, poor girl got caught before she could ever put it into action 😅😂👀

Nerdy Shiva also seems to be pretty bold huh?🙈

Can’t wait to read further♥️Very intriguing so far🤩

oh he's very very bold 😉

updating soon jaan!

Hello my jaans

I am sorry it took me so long to update the next part, I was out vacationing.

Since some people wanted more than two parts, I tried my best to split it but couldn't find a way to do so

That's why the update is a lot longer than my usual ones.

Please leave your feedback as I would love to know your thoughts!

Hope you all enjoy it (:

I will be trying to write stories this week on some of the requests I got!

Thank you so much everyone for their feedback on my previous works, I really appreciate it a lot.

Until next time...

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Love, Mrs. Dhillon

Originally posted by: Spicyfood

Very interesting

Waiting for next part

thank you jaan!

updated 😳

Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Nerd Shiva☺️

Interesting and different concept😆

thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: Justseeing1

I love it!! And I can def image Shiva with black frame glasses. Shiva in the show looks so hott but if he cut his hair shorter and wore better clothes that fit him properly he would look 100 times gorgeous! 😍 like idk if you saw his past shows but he looked so good in EK Aastha Aisi Bhee and Internet Wala Love. I wasn’t crazy about the plot line in Ek Ashtha but loved Internet wala love. One of my fav shows.

I have seen him in his previous shows and my my he looks so hot

But I actually prefer his longer hair and rugged look. it gives that total gunda wala feeling which is so hot ufff uff