FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 63

Wow what a day ... two update from you ... many bts from mhrw ...

I'm loving it today ....

So pallu is ready for marriage but not until after mansi's wedding, I hope by then raghav will make his intentions clear to her ...

Thank you for the updates, you might not know but these updates are a few minutes from the horror of the world around me... it help me take my mind off serious things ...

So thank you very much for this story in this uncertain times ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Wow what a day ... two update from you ... many bts from mhrw ...

I'm loving it today ....

So pallu is ready for marriage but not until after mansi's wedding, I hope by then raghav will make his intentions clear to her ...

Thank you for the updates, you might not know but these updates are a few minutes from the horror of the world around me... it help me take my mind off serious things ...

So thank you very much for this story in this uncertain times ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you, Sister.

I confess, I'm also using my writing to divert myself so I'll keep off my phone and not keep refreshing the various newsfeeds I follow. As a person of Indian origin who doesn't live in India, I feel so helpless. And impotent.

Originally posted by: Endless_sky

Lovely update,

Raghav Rao does not wait. It will be interesting to see how this plays out as Pallavi is planning on running away from raghav and marry someone else and he is ready to law her his

Pleased you are enjoying the tale. It's getting very interesting for me as a writer now that Pallavi has realized what she wants and he has realized whom he wants---let's see how it all unfolds.

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

'I want her.'

'...he recognized her as one who had become to him a necessity.'

'She's not a Deshmukh.'

'Free to be mine.'

I keep reading these lines again and again and I can't believe how much more accepting Raghav is being of his feelings. When I waited for Raghav's POV I never expected this, my mind is blown. Kudos to you for this update, I can't wait to see how Pallavi is gonna take Raghav Rao wanting to make her his. 😄😄😄

This is why I prefer to wait until I'm close to a declaration before introducing the hero's POV. I enjoy not knowing how he feels until this stage when he has admitted it to himself :-)

Originally posted by: ReemShah

"I want her, She's not a Deshmukh,Free to be mine" these one liners by Raghav shows his possesive side.

She had become an indispensable person for him. I am quite sure wheels are turning in Raghav's head regarding Pallavi being a widow- because it is not often when a person says- they poisoned their partner- that too that freely.

I kind of really wanted a little more description of the time he went to Pallavi's house and how he felt there because I think that is one of the first times they have been close to each other leaving the club incident....that reminds me did Pallavi return the jacket yet?🤔

I loved Raghav's point of view and what about Mrs.Raje--i am thinking she might be connected to Pallavi( I am telling this now because I read the whole FF again)

Oh! Sister! Forgot about the linen jacket. Will have to use that as a prop in a future scenario. Thank you for the reminder. You're officially my beta reader. hehe

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Why Raghav isn't satisfied with "she is a widow" truth, what exactly he's looking for to know that she's free to be his?

I suspect that because Raghav sees that Pallavi is not behaving like a grieving widow, there might be something more to the story than she is revealing. A real widow would not say "I poisoned my husband." Hence, Raghav's doubts.

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

I need to know of she's free tone mine - epic line

Waiting to see if he will woo her or bull doze her into it

So something will unravel at that birthday party he will go to about pallu past due to the ring kya ?

Yes, there is still the birthday party to attend in Mumbai!

I'm looking forward to writing that episode.

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Thank you, Sister.

I confess, I'm also using my writing to divert myself so I'll keep off my phone and not keep refreshing the various newsfeeds I follow. As a person of Indian origin who doesn't live in India, I feel so helpless. And impotent.

It's okay dude, don't be too hard on yourself. Even though I live in india I'm still useless to do anything so don't feel guilty the circumstances is such that we can only watch and pray for a better day!

Finally she made it clear that the Mandhar scam must be made clear to all and she will not carry the facade of the widow any longer.

Why should she suffer due to mistakes of Mandhar and his cheating ..what about her inheritance and cheating he did by selling her ring

I have seen a couple of such cases 😏. One fortunately ended well and her parents were able to help her study further and got her married again to a far off relative. The other was sad she lost her sanity for being cheated. She was In this overprotective cocooon all her life and she could not take it

Thanks again for updating to give some.respite in these trying times

The group I was assigned to work with as a volunteer all expect one is out of ICU and moved to home quarantine. 15 were in hospital and 30 in home isolation.

‘Free to be mine’

Sigh...If only Pallavi had heard that..

wen one thinks it’s all ended or wud end soon.. the other realizes it just the beginning.

Why does Pallavi say it can never be with Raghav? Is it coz of wat Baba n Aayi wud think?

I love how strong Raghavs feelings are.. and with that last line Farhad wud have realized it too.

I cant help but wonder y he stopped the kiss soo suddenly.. with pallavi wondering the same, i thought an explanation wud be shown