OS: The Ache (The Chavan Khandaan Bahus) *COMPLETE on Pg2* - Page 2

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interesting

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Originally posted by: emah04

This looks very interesting I am looking forward to it

It has been uploaded!

I liked all the pov's but Sai was best! Maybe coz I'm partial. Please write more on Sai, Sairat. You wrote this whole piece so well! ♥️

I am spellbound.

Thank you for the deep insights of each women.

I loved the way you portrayed their feelings with your words.

Keep writing and eagerly waiting for your more works

This is simply awesome

Loved it very much

Each of their pov was bang on , the emotions they felt

Do write more stories

wow!!!loved it. the dilemmas and anguish of all the three bahus. i think even in the show sai is the kost sorted of all the three despite being the youngest. she doesn’t need anyone to fight her battles. karishma’s pain was potrayed so beautifully. well about pakhi the leas sai the better. even after seeing and knowing everything, she still thinks he is not going anywhere because he promised? delusion at its heights.❤️❤️❤️❤️

Its not water but tears in my eyes for Pakhi.

Honestly I feel sad for the Pakhi in stories written on IF.

She's grey here

In the show she's just dark as writers don't know grey.

Sai Joshi falling in love with the jalebiwala

He's the same as in the show

Action but not words

Bol do aur Sai ki kashmakash khatam karo

Karishma She needs to first stand up to her SaaS and sasur Make them stand up for their son

If these 3 bahus join hands

Chavan Nivas walon ko seedha kar de

Makaan ko ghar bana de

Teeno ke pati selfish and bekhabar hain.

Beautifully written...👏

Would love to read more from you...

Oh this was very well written. You beautifully captured the turmoil they face each day.

Karishma actually has a character and doesn't just exist to make snide comments on others in order to make herself feel better. The self realization is there.

Sai....well we stan a sassy queen always.

But the makers rarely let's us see her insecurities, the cracks in her oh-so self confident demeanor.

She's human. She feels. She is confused.

Even if she has Virat, she still doesn't have him.

She doesn't even confident about her own feelings..... the confusion....the uncertainty of the future.

Pakhi is hurt. She is denial. And that was portrayed beautifully.

She wasn't a bad person. Blinded by hatred for Sai, she behaves in an unforgivable manner.

She realises that. She feels guilty. For the way she behaves with Sai, because she knows Sai didn't steal Virat from her. Feels guilty for the wrong she did to her own husband.

But then again, Virat was supposed to be hers. And she is right back to where she was before.

Simply amazing 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻