FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 47

Originally posted by: Foreversonam21

Hi

Your Pallavi gets more gorgeous with each episode. The unburdening of expectations from the decampment is so beautifully portrayed that I no longer want to follow the serial. Your Raghav and your Pallavi hold all of my attention.

My goodness, Sister---what generous praise! I am speechless. Thank you.

Originally posted by: mayabhi

Hi.. Sorry i was busy for past frw days and caught up last 3 chapters just now.. so much has happened..

But the biggest thing for me is that i cud see the real Pallavi now. The smart and determined girl who had to take a back seat after her marriage.. can’t wait to see how the teaching and learning is gonna go

Cant help but wonder wat kaku is gonna tell home n how she’s gonna manage that..

Yes, Sister---I agree---the last 3-4 episodes have helped me as well in terms of writing her scenes because I know better what her responses will be to the upcoming challenges. I can imagine what a relief it must to discard that weight of widowhood. I'm happy for her.

Wow. Fantastic update

So he will figure out how Mandhar has cheated her from.ghe investigation ..so will he use it to his advantage or will be soften towards her ? My bet is on the former

Thanks for updating everyday..in this devastation all I hear is sad news and positive news are low.

I am doing a volunteer duty to coordinate things for friends and their fam in quarantine. Calling/ mss 3 times to check on them. Also doing some other coordinations also.

So FF and my baby are my escape for a few hours

“He had resisted but finally agreed when she told him that Krishna was her secret weapon—her Farhad.” This statement did justice to Raghav-Farhad and Pallavi-Krishna. In fact this episode was actually only scenes of the two pairs and that was amazing. Krishna is so supportive of her didi and wants to avenge her ..how sweet.. both of them truly love each other. Raghav Rao is falling in love! I didn’t expect it to be so early but I am interested. Farhad’s reply was hilarious. So now Raghav is going to investigate Mandhar.. hmm I wonder what he finds and what he thinks then..

Raghav will find out that Mandhaar is alive through his investigation and will go to meet Pallavi with all pomp and attitude saying "Your husband is still alive."

and Pallavi will be like"Meh..I already know" Raghav's reaction would be priceless then😂😂

Truly said as Farhad is to Raghav, the same is Krishna to Pallavi- friends, sibling, their keeper or confident, supporter and secret weapon.

Raghav is already intrigued by Pallavi and her actions and as of Pallavi-she's focused on her goal and no one else

Can't wait for more

I have a feeling Ms. Raje is going to play a role in this love story. Pallavi had an inheritance. Where did it come from? Who were her family? Is she connected to Ms.Raje?

That ring which came from Royals was that Ms.Raje s family?

What if her change of heart and extending an invitation to Raghav was not just because of what Raghav said in Mumbai?

Has she seen and recognized that ring?

Thank you so much for including an investigation on Mandar in this update! 👍🏼

It is wonderful that Raghav now wants to dig deeper into her past, it will lead him to make the connection between the ring and her, and figure out why she was so interested in it, coz she does not come across as a thief in any sense. I love how Pallavi tells Krishna everything just like Raghav tells Farhad everything, the parallel has not explored in the show as much so I appreciate reading about it. As for the intrigue on Baji Rao Malhar, love it!! He was a great commander of the Maratha forces, and an extremely respected soul, apart from his love story, and RR becoming 'Mastani' is a funny notion 😆

Look forward to more!! 😳

Epi-20

First things first, thanks for improving my vocabulary with the synonyms of Desertion😆 . I love reading your Sulochana scenes. They're so well-crafted. How efficiently she provided information regarding Pallavi's marital status. I'm sure Raghav would also need to learn that efficiency from her🤣 .

Epi-21

Ohh! And did I tell you that I do want an episode filled with just their talks in my previous comments. Thank You Thank You for giving me that here & since I read 3 parts b2b I'm too much in a daze now

I love that Pallavi here's smart enough to ask of his help & knows she can do only so much without guidance & also not make it sound like a complete one-sided task .

Epi-22

I like how Baji RAO has been Pallavi's mentor as an idol & Raghav RAO will be in real life. I absolutely loved the light-hearted way Krishna turns Pallavi's serious conversations into. You have created a gem of a person . So Raghav'll definitely find out a lot about Mandar but will he be able to figure out the equation with Pallavi. And if so, how is this gonna change his equations with her?? Interesting! Clapping my hands in glee😎

Also I have a suggestion if I may, please ignore if it doesn't work for you. You can try putting a shorter Precap rather than a significant portion of your updates. For eg: for Epi-22, you could have tried to just post - "Raghav turned to the window, and looking at the twinkling lights of the city below, he said, “I’m afraid I might end up being Baji Rao’s second lover.” "

Ok, I've been putting off commenting because I have so much to say. I've already told you how amazing I find your writing style, but I'm gonna say it again, just to let you know much I love it. Also, your Pallavi is the best version she could possibly be while staying true to the TV version! She's fierce, bold, confident and dazzling... but she's also a vulnerable young woman waiting to experience life ❤️ I just love the way you're depicting her. Raghav Rao in the show is amazing enough, but to see my girl shining like this makes me so, so happy Any man would be intrigued by her!

Another thing that I love here is the focus on Pallavi and Krishna's bonding, something I've been dying to see on the show. It's just like you said — she is to Pallu what Farhad is to Raghav. But somehow they never put enough emphasis on it So I'm glad you're showing this beautiful bond between them... it warms my heart

I also love how you've shown Aai's bond with Pallavi. In the show I've always believed that Aai would be her biggest pillar of support when the time called for it. She did make my faith falter for a while, but I'm glad her character is getting to that point again. Your Aai gives me very similar vibes, if not better. I can understand her mind's conflict about Mandaar — as a mother, it can never be easy to accept that your own child turned out so horribly wrong. But in being Mandaar's mother, she doesn't forget to be Pallavi's aai, and that's very sweet. The way she encouraged her to dress up and start a new beginning to her life like the young girl she is... it felt like a true mother-daughter scene. Aww ❤️

I also really love that your Raghvi are gonna be involved in actual business! ⭐️ I'm so excited to see what all he teaches her and how he goes about it! Judging by his line about being Baji Rao's second lover, I'd say our hero is also looking forward to it quite a bit 😉

Can't wait for their journey to start Keep posting! You're doing a marvellous job 👏👏