Raghvi OS - Complicated Relationships

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Hi guys. This OS is written by Nidhi aka @DesiTVButterfly. She was unable to post this due to some technical issues so I am posting this on her bahalf. Do leave in your feedbacks.


Caution / Disclaimer whatever : ---

I have totally skipped Amruta's baby Abortion Kand here..
So Here when Raghav come Deshmukh Niwas to tell the truth about Abortion.. Everyone listen to him, he exposes Amruta, little drama happens but Rahul doesn't break his engagement with Mansi..
This story continue after Rahul & his Family leaves saying they will meet in next marriage function..


I Hope You Enjoy 😊😊😊


RaghVi - Complicated Relationships


Pallavi ran to her room crying and she collapsed near the bed..
She couldn't believe what just happened to her..
One anonymous abortion receipt and she was trapped in a circle of doubts by her family members..

She was chocking.. she buried her head in her folded elbow while clenching the bedsheet..
Her father in law who is everything to her, who's happiness matters to her most, who always used to fight for her that same father in law doesn't believe her anymore.. and it's haunting her like a nightmare..

Thinking how her life changed upside down suddenly since Raghav came into her life, she wept herself to sleep..

Next morning.. while getting ready infront of the mirror she decides to face everything bravely just like she always do.. she decide to do anything which will bring her father in laws trust back on her..
And anyways it was a very busy day for her because of the pending orders at the shop and Mansi's wedding function in the evening..
She as always had to juggle between the shop and preparations for the function..

Her thinking process broke when she heard the knock on her door.. she turned in the direction to see FIL was standing on the door.. unknowingly a satisfactory smile came on her face when she saw him..

But not too long.. her smile vanished completely when she heard from him that in the evening function, she is getting engaged to a guy called Avinash Kulkarni..

She was shocked by the sudden announcement just then her mother-in-law entered the room..

She kept her hand on her shoulder and said

MIL- pallavi.. iss ladke ko Main Aur tumhare baba Hum donon jante Hain inke bahut purane dost ka beta hai.. ladka yahi hyd ka hai.. well settled hai.. uska khud ka apna ek business hai.. jyada Bada nahin hai but bahut accha chal raha hai..

Kal raat hi tumhare baba ne apne dost se baat ki thi.. aur sabse acchi baat to yeh hai ki unhe tumhare bare mein sab kuchh pata hai aur Fir bhi unhen is rishte se koi problem nahin hai.. infact tumhare aur mandar ke shaadi mein bhi vo log aaye The.. Bahut acchha ladka hai Pallavi Mana mat karna..
Pallavi - nahin aai.. Main ye Shaadi nahin kar sakti.. baba.. baba.. please.. aap mujhse gussa hai Main janti Hun.. Main samajhti Hun.. lekin ab toh meri begunahi sabit ho chuki hai na.. fir bhi.. fir bhi agar Aap Mujhe koi bhi saja dena chahte hai toh de dijiye.. Mujhe sab kuchh manjur hoga.. per ye shaadi nahin baba..

FIL - pallavi.. mana ki sacchai bahar aa gayi hai ki wo doc zhuth bolri thi.. par isse jo humari badnami hui hai woh kum nahi ho jati.. are kis kis ko kya kya jawab dete firenge hum.. kis kiska muh band karenge hum.. aur waise bhi Hum tumhen yahan poochh nahin Rahe.. Hum tumhen hamara faisla suna Rahe hai.. Jo tumhen maan na hi hoga.. Agar tumhen hamare saath rishta rakhna hai toh..

Pallavi - matlab..??

FIL - matlab yeh Pallavi ki agar Aaj tumne iss rishtey se Mana Kiya to Main tumse apne sare rishte Tod dunga aur jindagi mein kabhi bhi tumhari shakal nahin dekhunga..

He left the room leaving pallavi behind in shock..

MIL - (While Leaving) mujhe maaf kar dena Pallavi.. ismein main tumhari Koi madad nahin kar paungi..maine kal raat inhe bahut samjhane ki koshish ki.. ki tumhare marji ke Bina hame iss rishte ka faisla nahin lena chahiye.. per yeh itne naraj hai ki meri koi bhi baat nahin sun Rahe hai..

She taps her shoulder and leaves..
Here pallavi's whole world came crashing down.. she felt as if she couldn't breath..
She just couldn't digest the fact that her FIL started hating her existence in house that much that he just want to send her away with any unknown random person ASAP..

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It's evening already.. whole day Pallavi was disturbed.. but never for once she ignored her responsibility of arrangements for mansi's function..

Everyone got ready.. all the guests started coming to their house for function.. pallavi's aai saw her in a beautiful red saree..
Pallavi was discussing about the lights with Aakash.. They see Aai.. Aakash greet her and left from there..

Aai - bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho iss saree main..

Pallavi - shayad aap bhul gayi hai par ye saree mandar ne mujhe humari shaadi se pehle di thi aai..

Aai - bhuli nahi hu main.. bass.. bass yaad nahi karna chahti thi aaj mandar ko..

Pallavi - q.. qki aap zabardasti mera rishta kisi aur ke saath jodne jaa rahe ho isiliye..?

Aai - pallavi.. tu jaisa soch rahi hai waisa nahi hai.. ye haalat hi kuch aise..
Just then her phone rang..

Pallavi (on phone) - ji aap abhi aa rahe ho?? Thik hai main aati hu..

(Turns to aai) aai.. ek customer ko urgently saari delivery chahiye thi.. par aaj function ki vajah se dukaan jaldi band karna pada.. unhone kaha ki vo Ghar aaenge Sadi lene ke liye.. (looks around) yaha Krishna bhi kahi dikhai nahin de rahi hai.. main bahar gate tak jaa rahi hu.. unki saadi dene..

Aai was about to nod but pallavi just turned & went to her room to bring saree without waiting for her reply.. aai could clearly see that she was hurt and disturbed but she couldn't do anything for her..

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She reached outside but customer did not arrived yet.. she decided to wait for couple of minutes.. she takes the support of pole nearby and again lost with all her thoughts..

Some fingers snapped infront of her which brought her in Senses.. she raised her eyes.. it was Raghav..
They have a small eye lock.. he sees her eyes filled with tears..

RR - aee.. sadi ka dukaan.. yeh haath main Sadi ka bag lekar yahan gate per khade rehne ka practice karri ho Kya.. main jab tumhare dukaan ki jagah apna showroom kholunga tab yahi par apna Sadi ka dukaan dal dena..

[She was silent.. she looked away.. her silence & not responding disturbed him somehow.. ]

(He continues) tumhara wo dukaan ka board nikal ke yaha bhej dega.. chipka Dena..
Aise raste par Se aate jaate Koi Na Koi Ek do saadi to khareed hi Lega..

[She still chosed to not reply him as if he is not there and it did bother Raghav a lot..]

(He continues) vaise Aaj puchega nahin Ki main kyon aaya is function mein Aur voh bhi kal itna tamasha hone ke baad..

Voh kya hai na uss bindi wali aunty ne toh mujhe bulaya nahi aaj.. lekin subah subah Rahul ke amma ka phone aa gaya tha.. wo chahti thi ki main iss function main aau.. toh maine socha kyun nahi..

[All he was saying just to get a single reaction or reply from her.. but she was silent.. she didn't even looked at him.. he was totally unaware of what was wrong with pallavi ]

[Just than the customer arrived, she apologized for being late & disturbing her in family function, pallavi juz slightly fake smiled in return but didn't say a single word.. she took money & straight away went to house passed him without even looking at him.. but all these while, raghav was just looking at her and her actions]

[Farhad who was standing a step behind and watching all this.. comes a step forward to raghav]

Farru - Anna.. ye pallavi ko kya ho gaya..

(Raghav's stare on her got broke)

RR - mujhe kaise pata hoga.. maine kya theka liya hai kya uska..

Farhad - mujhe lagta hai kuch toh gadbad hai uske saath anna..

RR - farhad, terako bahot fikr hori hai na uski.. main jate jate tuzhe yahi chod ke jayega.. thik hai??

(after a few sec. Of silence)

aur mereko lagta hai ye sadi ka dukaan bhi na apne sanki baap ki tarah sanak gaya hai.. chalo ab..

They both entered the house.. Rambo who was greeting Rahul & his Mother gets furious seeing him..

But rahuls mother tells him to not to react as Raghav is their guest now and she invited him.. infact they should be greatful towards him as he brought the truth out infront of everyone.. sulochana fumes in anger seeing him but keeps quiet for mansi's sake..

[Here Raghav's eyes searching for pallavi.. the main reason he came in function was his amma and kirti.. but now pallavi's silent behavior disturbed him soo much that all his focus was to search her and grab her attention like before]

[While searching for her here and there, he sees her inside the Kitchen through window..
She was arranging flowers in a plate for Mansi's function.. he enters kitchen but stand near door.. a lady leaving kitchen asked him what he wants, he takes glass of water from the tray she was holding, lady smiles and leaves..

He again looked at her.. there are 2-3 ladies working in kitchen.. pallavi was lost in her own thoughts.. arranging flowers one by one.. slowly.. she didn't even notice that he was in the kitchen..

A tear rolled from her eyes but she wipes it away..
Raghav's heart flinched for a second seeing her like this..
Juz then pallavi's thought process broke when Aai called for Pallavi..
He suddenly sneaked out of kitchen before pallavi could notice him..

Pallavi wipes her tears & comes out.. she sees Avinash & his Family.. Avinash was a decent looking guy, he saw Pallavi, smiled and greeted.. With both families around her, she too folded her hands to greet him and his family.. At a distance raghav stood taking a support of Piller.. with glass in his hand, he took a sip of water looking at them.. Farhad came to him..

Farhad - Anna, aap kaha chale gaye the.. main kabse aapko dhund raha tha.. mujhe laga aap amma se milne gaye honge.. par amma aur kirti toh waha the..

Raghav - Frahad, ye circus kya chalu hai.. kaun hai ye log..

Farhad - pata nahi Anna.. shayad koi rishtedaar honge.. par anna main aapko amma aur kiri ke bare main bata raha tha ki
Farhad stops when he noticed raghav was not at all interested in listening to him and all he was doing is to stare at Kulkarni and deshmukh family and ofcourse the uncomfortable pallavi, while taking small small sip of water from glass..

On the other side Rambo introduces them and pallavi to his Family.. pallavi was not even looking at Avinash, she was constantly looking down but Avinash seems to be quiet impressed with her Innocence..

"Baba.." just then a 5 year old girl comes and hides behind Avinash..

Avinash pulls her out and make her stand in front of Pallavi..

Avinash - ye Megha hai.. meri beti..

Pallavi was shocked and just taken aback for some seconds.. she had no idea avinash has a 5 yr daughter..

She looked at her aai & Rambo.. they both couldn't meet her eyes.. she understood they already knew but didn't tell her about it..
Avinash - kya hua.. aapko megha ke baare main pata tha na pallavi ji ??
Pallavi just nods for the sake of her family..

Just then Avinash notices Raghav.. He excuses himself & come to raghav..
Raghav saw him coming and stared at him with his rowdy look..

Here aai excuses and takes pallu aside followed by Rambo..

Aai - avinash ki wife ke pregnancy complications hue the toh megha ke paida hone ke baad unki death ho gayi..

Rambo - hum logo ne ye tumhe nahi bataya kyunki..

Pallavi - (cuts his words) kyuki aap logo ko laga ki agar mujhe pata chal jayega toh shayad main mana kardu..
Par baba.. aapne toh mujhe mana karne ka option kabhi diya hi nahi.. bhul gaye aap..

Aai - nahi pallavi nahi.. dekho meri taraf.. tumhe na batana ye mera decision tha.. mujhe laga pehle Tum Avinash ko Mil lo jaan lo.. comfortable ho jao fir..

>> On other side..
Avinash - aap Raghav Rao hai na.. ?? (Raghav rolled his eyes)

Mera naam Avinash hai sir.. main aapko aur business techniques ko bohot follow karta hu.. maine kai baar aapse milne ki koshish ki par aap tak pohoch hi nahi paya.. mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi hora hai ki aap mere samne khade ho aur main aap ko aise iss function main milunga..

Raghav not giving any damn care about his excitement..

Raghav - toh tum itna uchal q raha hai.. uss pallavi ka dur ka bhai hai kya..

(Raghav asked taking last sip of water from his glass)

Avinash - bhai.. are nahi nahi.. hum dono ka toh rishta tay ho gaya hai..
Raghav choked on water.. it came as a shock for him and he don't even know why..
He got a grip on his emotions and again stared at him with a little tilt of his head..
Raghav - Kya.. tum aur wo saadi ka dukaan..
Avinash - (frowned) aapka matlab pallavi ji??
Haa.. hum dono shaadi karre hai aur aaj humara sagai hai.. kyu?? Aapko nahi pata tha ki ye function humare sagai ka hai.?

Raghav just shifted his gaze from him to look at her.. he saw her breaking into tears while talking to aai rambo and left the house suddenly.. he shifted his gaze to Avinash again..

Raghav - tum sure hai ki wo saadi ka dukaan tumse shaadi karna chahta hai..

Avinash - ji unhone khud haa bola hai, hum tabhi yaha aye hai..
Khair wo sab chodiye.. main aapko apne chote se business ke baare main kuch batana chahta hu.. aapse baatein karna chahta hu..

Raghav gave him his evil smirk.. pulled his hand and kept his empty glass in his hand..
Raghav - ab toh mereko bhi tujhse bohot baatein karni hai.. par abhi nahi..
He leaves towards exit behind Pallavi.. here farhad took glass from his hand and apologized..
Amma stops Raghav while going and ask him what he is doing in this family function again.. Raghav just turn to her - main aata hai Amma (and he left)

Farhad who noticed earlier how raghav didn't liked the idea of pallavi's marriage with avinash.. Now saw raghav going out even ignoring amma.. he smiled softly thinking how much pallavi matters to raghav..

He stepped outside house to search for Pallavi.. she was standing behind the pole.. tears juz rolling down her eyes.. he saw a corner of her saree peeping out.. he stood in front of her.. she wiped her tears seeing him.. he juz couldn't see her tears..

Raghav - (with the intention to change her mood)
mereko nahi pata tha ki tumhara boyfriend bhi hai saari ka dukaan..
(She juz decided to remain silent)
Toh aaj engagement hai tumhari.. accha hai.. maine tumhare rambo baap ko bola bhi tha.. umar nikal rahi hai tumhari.. shaadi karwade..
Waise pehle pata hota toh tumhare liye koi gift leke aata.. koi nahi.. kal bheejwa dunga..

(She still not responding just sobbing silently.. he got irritated by her silent treatment and he just want to get any kind of reaction from her)
Waise ye mere 30 din ke challenge se bachne ka accha rasta nikala hai tumne.. hyd ke hi ladke ko pakad liya taki tumhe hyd se bahar nahi jana pade..
Lekin kya hai na mujhe itna pasand nahi aaya wo.. business business karke bohot dimag pakata hai Mera..
Toh ab main soch raha hu.. hyd se bahar sath main hi bhej du.. tumhe aur tumhare uss boyfriend ko..

"Boyfriend nahi hai mera wo.. main janti tak nahi hu use.."
Pallavi shouted..
Raghav felt relaxed with that tiny outburst of her as if he was craving for it so badly..

"Toh mat karo na ye shaadi"
Raghav said in soft tone.. pallavi felt that softness and affection in his voice..

"Jabse dekhra hu tabse sirf roye jari ho, roye jari ho aur roye jari ho.. shakal dekho apni.. abhi chakkar aake gir jaogi.."
"Agar wo pasand nahi hai toh kisne bola shaadi karne ko"

Pallavi - (in upper tone with whatever strength she has left with) tumhare wajah se.. aaj mere saath jo bhi hora hai.. sab kuch tumhari wajah se hora hai..
(She clinched her fists and started banging on his chest)
Ye sab sirf tumhari wajah se.. q aaye tum meri life main.. main pehle kitni khush thi.. par jabse tum mere life main aaye ho tumne meri zindagi barbaad karke rakhdi hai..
(She clenched his kurta near collar from both hands tightly)
Humara zagda toh professional tha na fir tum ne meri personal life kyun kharab kardi..
Jab se tum aaye ho.. mere saath kuch sahi nahi hora.. kuch bhi nahi..
(She loosen her grip on his kurta and started banging fists on his chest again)

Jao tum yaha se.. mujhe tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhni hai.. mujhe akela chod do..
(She stops and breaks again in tears)

Raghav holds her both wrists and pull her a little closer.. she stops crying suddenly with his move

Raghav - aeee.. saree ka dukaan.. tumhe kya lagta hai ye tumhari sagai mere wajah se hori hai.. NAHI..
Tumhare ghar walo ne mujhe uss abortion case main ghasita tha.. mene toh sirf apna naam clear kiya.. aur mere saath saath tumhara bhi.. tumhe toh merko thank you bolna chahiye..
Ab hogaya tumhara ki aur marna hai mujhe..
Yahi khada hu main.. agar tumhe lagta hai ki mujhe aise marne se sab kuch thik ho jayega toh jitna marna hai utna marlo..

(he left his wrists.. she stepped 2 steps back and pinned herself to the wall..)

He stepped forward removing his handkerchief from his pocket.. he started tapping all her tears himself carefully with handkerchief, she kept on staring at him without saying anything
Raghav - (very low and soft tone)
Saree ka dukaan, tumhare saath galat main nahi.. tumhara rambo baap aur tumhare gharwale kar raha hai..
jitna gussa tumne mere upar dikhaya hai na agar usse aadha bhi apne gharwalo ke samne dikati toh aaj tumhe aise rone ka zarurat nahi padta..
(She came into her Senses and pushed him away.. raghav just smirked as usual..)
Aur agar tum nahi bol sakta apne ghar walo ko.. toh main hu na.. Agar tumhe ye shaadi nahi karni toh bolo mujhe sirf 2 min. lagega Raghav Rao ko ye shaadi todne ke liye..
Ye kaam toh main aisehi tumhare liye charity bolke kar dega..
Pallavi - dekho tum aisa kuch nahi..
" Pallavi ji " her sentence broke as avinash came there..

Raghav rolled his eyes as he sees him.. pallavi adjust her teary eyes..
Avinash - aap dono yaha.. raghav sir main toh aapko andar dhund raha tha..
Pallavi - wo.. actually.. hum dono (fumbles)

Raghav - iske saree shop ka Main owner hai.. Hum bus usi Ki baat kar rahe the..
Aur main toh iski tarif karra tha.. itna bhi bura nahi lagra hai ye iss laal saree main.. tumhe kya lagta hai.. (flirty tone)

(Pallavi gives him angry look, he just smiles)

Avinash - sahi kaha.. pallavi ji aap iss sari main bohot aachi lag rahi ho..
Pallavi - hum bass shop ki baat karre the.. aap pls misunderstand mat kijiye..
Avinash - ji bilkul nahi.. aap ye kaisi baate karre hai.. in fact achcha hua aap mujhe yahan per Mil Gai.. Main to soch hi raha tha ki Hamari sagai ke pahle hame thodi baat kar leni chahie..
(He looks at raghav)

Raghav - main yaha Hawa khane ke liye aaya hu.. tum log mere samne baat kar sakte ho.. mujhe koi problem nahi hai.. aur waise bhi raghav rao ko kaha ana hai aur kaha Jana hai ye koi order nahi de sakta..

Pallavi - kise bhi kahi bhi jane ane ki zarurat nahi hai.. Avinash ji.. mujhe andar jana hoga.. aai baba mujhe dhundre honge.. mansi ka function bhi chalu hai.. hum baadme aaram se baat karte hai..

She gave a final look to raghav and left..

Raghav - tumhe nahi jana andar..

Avinash - nahi.. abhi toh mansi ka function chalra hai.. uske baad humari engagement hai.. aur vaise bhi Mujhe aapse milane ka mauka Mila hai.. pata nahin dobara kab milega to Main use waste nahin jaane de sakta..
He started talking how he always look upto raghav in business and all..

Raghav scratches his forehead for a sec. Fold his one leg backwards and keep it on piller.. remove his mobile and msg Farhad that -
Avinash is here and if he don't come out right now and handle avinash immediately.. he will break avinash's head against the wall..

A few minutes later.. farhad come running outside.. he sees Avinash is still disturbing Raghav..

Farhad - Avinash ji.. aap hume thode der ke liye akela chod sakte hai.. wo actually mujhe anna ke saath ek encounter ke baare me discuss karna tha..
Avinash - encounter ?? (taken aback with that) main.. main.. wo main andar chalta hu..
He literally runs inside and farhad started laughing..
Farhad - Anna, iski toh shakal dekhne layak ho gayi thi.. mujhe nahi lagta ye ab aapke aas paas kabhi bhi ayega..

He realised raghav not saying anything so he turned to him..
He saw Raghav was silent and was just staring at his handkerchief in his hand..

Farhad - kya hua Anna.. aapka rumal ganda ho gaya kya.. mujhe de dijiye main apne paas rakhleta hu..
Raghav - nahi.. rehne do.. (he remembered how he wiped out her tears with that handkerchief)

Farhad - kyun Anna.. ganda hai toh mujhe..
Raghav - maine bola kya tujhe ye ganda hai bolke..

Farhad - aap toh isi aise dekhre ho jaise iske saath apki koi yaadein Jud gayi ho..
Raghav - agar tu ek shabd aur bola na farhaad toh main tera sachme encounter karke tuzhe yahi chod dega..

Farhad - (smiled as he knew what's affecting raghav) thik hai anna kuch nahi boluga.. par aap ye toh bataiye ki aap soch kya rahe hai..
Raghav - Farhad, ye jo sadi ke dukaan hai na.. uska dimag ka screw pura loose hoke gir chuka hai.. pata nahi kya karne ki koshish karra hai..
Farhad - (in a teasing tone) par anna.. apko kya hai wo kuch bhi kare use karne dijiye na.. aap ko fark padra hai kya..??

Raghav - farak toh padra hai farhad.. par wo kya karra usse nahi.. wo kya ban chuka hai usse.. aaj aise lagra hai ki mere samne jo sadi ka dukaan hai na use toh main janta hi nahi hu.. maine aaj tak use ladte zagadte badbad karte dekha hai.. jo ladki raghav rao ke aakhon main aakhe dalke challenge kar sakta hai wo aise kaise ban gaya..
Farhad - jab baat family ki hona anna, toh har koi kamjor pad hi jata hai..
(taunting tone) aur waise bhi hume kya usse.. aap toh yaha amma aur kirti ke liye aaye hai na..

Raghav - tu samaz nahi raha hai Farhad.. ye avinash jaisa ladka kabhi sadi ke dukaan ko suit nahi karega.. wo pallavi deshmukh bohot alag ladki hai.. baki ladkiyon jaisi nahi hai.. aur upar se uski marzi bhi nahi hai iss rishte main.. wo ye deserve nahi karti..
Farhad - toh rok lijiye na anna.. rok lijiye.. aap chahe toh abhi ye sab rok sakte hai..
Raghav - nahi farhad.. jab tak wo mujhe aake khud nahi bolega.. main ye sagai nahi todega.. aur waise bhi maine usko apne language main samzane ki koshish ki hai.. agar wo samaz jayega toh thik hai.. warna uski zindagi wo Jane..
Ab chal andar.. Amma se acche se baat bhi nahi kiya hai maine.. (he leaves)

Farhad pray to god that everything sorts between two and raghav should realise how important She is for him.. and goes inside..
Meanwhile inside the house raghav meets amma and tries to talk to her but whole time his eyes only searching for pallavi.. but she is nowhere..

On the other side mansi's function is about to finish and avinash's parents takes aai rambo kaka and pallavi inside a room.. avinash is also there..
They tell deshmukh family that some of Their relatives are already arrived and also tell them that they didn't tell any of those relatives that Pallavi is actually a widow..
And ask them to keep it a secret and forget this identity of her forever..

Pallavi gets shocked hearing that..
But she gets even more shocked when baba agrees to it without even thinking for a min..
She stood their numb alone..
Nothing is left inside her to break anymore..

Elders of both families came out and announced the engagement..
They come out of the room together.. raghav frawnd seeing them..
She walked 2 step and stopped.. avinash held her hand and brought her in the middle of their living area..

Raghav fumes in anger seeing them together and clenched his fists tightly..
Pallavi who was looking down all this while raised her eyes to look around..
She stuck her gaze at raghav.. they had a mini eye lock.. her eyes were watery again..
His eyes were fuming in anger..
Their eyelock broke when Everyone started claping for the engagement..
Farhad who was witness of that eyelock, he felt extremely helpless..
Avinash's mother ask deshmukhs to start the engagement ceremony..
Pallavi - kya aap mujhe 5-10 min. Denge.. main taiyaar hoke aati hu..
Aai - pallavi tu aise hi bohot acchi lag rahi hai..
Avi's mom - koi baat nahi.. jao beta.. acche se taiyaar hoke aajao.. humlog thodi der Wait karte hai..
She nods.. she turns to go to her room upstairs but while turning she looked at Raghav one more time who was still staring at her.. she went upstairs to her room..

Here Raghav gets restless and turn around and goes in corner and bangs his hand on a wall.. Farhad followed him..
Farhad - ye aap kya karre hai Anna..
Raghav - wo sadi ka dukaan kya karra hai Farhad.. itna pyaar se samzaya usko par nahi.. uske dimag main koi baat jati nahi hai..
Aur mujhe nahi samaz aara ki mujhe kya hora hai.. main kyun itta gussa.. (stops)
Farhad - anna, ye sagai rok dijiye.. pallavi ka apko kehne ka wait mat kijiye.. plss..
Raghav - main kyun roku farhaad.. main thode der ke liye pagal ho gaya tha.. mujhe laga shayad wo iss rishtey se khush nahi hai.. isiliye uske peeche peeche chala gaya usko samzane.. thode der ke liye fikar ho gaya tha mujhe uska.. par ab jab wo khud taiyaar hone chala gaya hai toh ab mujhe kya.. agar wo okay hai toh main kyun roku kuch bhi farhaad..
Farhad - aisa aap ko lagra hai Anna.. par mujhe lagra hai ki..
Raghav - bass farhad.. mera dimag mat kharab kar tu ab yaha se jaa..

Farhad - ek baar khud se puch ke dekhiye anna ki aapko koi fark nahi padega iss rishtey se..
Raghav - tum kehna kya chahte hai farhaad..
Farhad - main ye kahana chahta hun anna ki mujhe lagta hai aapke aur Pallavi ke bich mein kuchh hai.. kuchh aisa jo aap dono bhi samaz nahi pare ho par main dekh para hu..
Ek aisa gehra rishta ho gaya hai anna ki..
Raghav - (little upper tone) bass farhad.. (snapped his finger and point at him) chup ho jao.. tumhari himmat bhi kaise Hui Ki Tum Mera naam use Sadi ke dukaan ke sath jodo.. main aur wo.. hum kabhi bhi ek saath..
He stops.. as his gaze straight away went to pallavi.. she was walking down from stairs..
But Raghav was completely shaken up from head to toe by the view..
Pallavi has changed into plain white saree..
She was holding that red saree which she wore earlier in her hand and was walking down..
Raghav came few steps ahead and frowned.. he was confused..

Everyone in the hall started gossiping.. but out of all of them she just looked at Raghav to note his expressions.. they again have a mini eye lock but not for even a min. Bcoz rambo pulled her and took her aside..
Rambo asked her what the hell she was doing..
She without even giving any answer comes back in the middle of hall..
Pallavi -
Main yaha aye kisi bhi mehman ki insult nahi karna chahti..
Par main kisi ko zhuth bolke, dhoka dekhe, apni sacchai chupake koi naya rishta bhi nahi jodna chahti..
dekhlijiye mujhe acche se..
Kyunki yeh hai mera asli roop, meri sacchai aur yahi hai meri Astitva..
Meri shaadi ho chuki hai aur mere pati ab iss duniya main nahi hai..

MAIN EK VIDHWA HOON..
YE DESHMUKH PARIWAR MERA SASURAL HAI.. MERA MAYKA NAHI..

(Farhad was shocked but Raghav.. he was totally taken aback with that view and with those words.. His heart flinched seeing her like that.. she continued)
Samaz ki nazaron main ye safed saree hi meri asli sacchai hai.. yahi meri pehchaan bhi hai.. toh thik hai.. aaj main jab naya rishta jodne jari hun toh aise hi sahi..
(She dropps red saree from her hand on the floor)
Ab main puri tarah se taiyaar hu.. Ab sab sahi hai..
Ab bataiye kya aap abhi bhi ye sagai karna chahte hain..
Avi's mother - ye kya behuda mazak hai..
Pallavi - behuda ?? Aap jise behuda keh rahi hai wo meri puri ki puri zindagi hai..
Avinash ji ki bhi toh wife ki death hui hai na..
Toh kya hum ek jaise nahi hue..
Agar unke wife ki death ki sacchai apke sare rishtedaro ko pata hai..
Toh mere husband ki bhi death ki sacchai bhi inko pata honi chahiye na..

Agar vidhur hoke ye dusri shaadi kar sakte hai..
Toh main vidhwa banke dusri shaadi kyun nahi kar sakti.. mujhe ye sacchai chupane ko kyu kaha ja raha hai..
Aapne mujhe kaha ki main aapke rishtedaro ko mere baare main naa batau.. par kyun.. ??
Sirf isiliye kyun ki main ladki hu..

Ladki ki shaadi uske life ka sabse bada din hota hai.. kehte hai ki ladki ki puri zindagi change ho jati hai..
Meri bhi hui.. aur aisi change hui jo shayad hi aajtak kisi ki huyi hogi..
Kyunki apne shaadi ke din hi mene apne pati ko, apne mandar ko kho diya..
Kya galti thi meri jo apne Shaadi ke fero ke chand ghanto baad hi mujhe mandar ke marne ki khabar mili..
Jo insaan mere saath 7 janam nibhane wala tha.. wo mere saath 7 ghante bhi nahi chal paya.. isme meri kya galti hai..
(raghav listening to her shockingly and something inside him is already broken)

Ye dono.. meri aai aur mere baba..
mere shaadi ke din jab Mujhe sab ka aashirwad milna chahie tha.. sabse Pyaar Milna chahie tha..
uss din Mujhe iss samaz se sirf Tane Hi sunane ko mile..
upshakuni hai ye.. Jawan bete ko kha gai.. iske kundli mein hi dosh hai.. aur pata nahin kya kya mujhe sunaya Gaya..
per sirf yah dono the Jo mere liye Puri duniya ke samne khade ho gaye..
Are inhone toh apna beta khoya tha uss din.. bahut aasan tha inn donon ke liye Mujhe blame karna..
Par nahi.. mujhe kosne ke bajay toh inn donon ne ek jhatake mein Mujhe apne bahu se apni beti hi bana liya..
Apne Ghar, apni dukaan, apni saari Ki saari jimmedari aankh band karke inhone mujhe de di..
Aai toh aaj bhi agar main late ho jau toh raat ko wait karti hai aur Baba agar kabhi main tiffin bhul jau toh wo khud mujhe tiffin dene dukaan aa jaate Hain..

Shaadi ke pehle main anath thi.. sirf mera bhai tha aur main.. iss anath ladki ko inn donon ne ek bhara pura parivar Diya hai.. Bhai Bahan diye.. rehne ke liye ek chaat Diya.. sab kuchh toh de Diya..
Aai.. baba.. aapko pata hai.. jab log mujhe kehte the ye sab ek dikhawa hai.. asliyat main saas sasur bahu ko beti maan hi nahi sakte.. tab mujhe bohot hasi aati thi unki baat par.. Kyunki mujhe bohot naaz tha apne rishton par.. par aaj lagra hai.. kya wo sab sach kehte the.. aur main galat.. Kya bahu sach main parayi hoti hai.. Kya main aapke liye itna Bada bojh ban chuki hu ki aap meri shaadi kisi bhi ladke se aise jabardasti karvane ke liye taiyar ho gaye.. Itni badi bojh ban gayi main ki aaj aap apne mandar.. apne bete ke Astitva ko bhi khatam karne ke liye taiyaar ho gaye.. Aur Agar ye sach hai.. agar main galat aur duniya hamesha sach kehti thi.. toh aaj main bhagwaan se bohot naraz hu.. bohot naraz ki kyun unhone mujhe aapki bahu banaya.. aap dono ki sacchi beti banake kyun nahi bheja unhone..

Kyunki agar main aapki sachi main beti rehti toh shayad aap mujhpe vishwas kar pate.. mere saath aaj ye sab nahi karte..

Aai.. aapko pata tha na ki main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahti thi.. par fir bhi aapki zidd thi ki aap meri dusri shaadi karwana chahte the.. sirf aapke khushi ke liye main ladko se milne bhi taiyaar ho gayi..
Aankh band karke maine aapki baat mani kyunki mujhe laga ki aap mere liye accha ladka hi dhundengi..
Yaad hai aapko pichhali bar Jab voh ladka aur uski maa ghar aaye the mujhe dekhne.. aur jab unhone mere baare main ulta sidha kaha tha.. toh kaise ladh padi thi aap mere liye.. kaise jawab diya tha unko aapne..
Fir aaj kya ho gaya aai.. kya maine aapko aur baba ko itna majboor kardiya ki aaj aap koi bhi samzote ke liye taiyaar ho gayi..
Aai.. aaj subah aapne kaha shaadi karle ladka bohot accha hai.. baba ne kaha agar shaadi ke liye haa nahi karungi toh wo mujhse rishta tod denge..

aaplogo ne toh inki ek 5 saal ki beti hai ye tak mujhe nahi bataya.. mujhe laga koi nahi.. kum se kum inhone mujhe mere sacchai ke saath apnaya hai toh thik hai na.. kar lungi shaadi aapke liye.. Lekin abhi andar room main jab inhone ye behuda sharat rakhi thi humare samne.. tab bhi aapne wo chupchap manliya.. aai, baba tabhi usi waqt aap logo ko ye rishta todke inhe yaha se wapas bhej dena chahiye tha.. par aap logo ne toh mera sauda hi kar liya..
agar Mera naam kisi ladke ke saath jud gaya tha.. kisine aake apko kuch keh diya.. aapne kuch dekhliya.. aur sab khatam..
bass itti si baat pe aapka vishwas mujhpe se itna kamzor ho gaya.. ki aap aise itne aasani se mujhse chutkara pana chahte ho..
Aapne ya baba ne kisine bhi itna bhi zaruri nahi samza ki kumse kum mujhse puchle ki kya mera sach main kisike saath koi rishta hai..Kya aapko mere pe itna bhi bharaosa nahi tha ki agar sach main aisa kuch hota toh main sabse pehle aake aapko bataungi.. aapke saath share karungi..

Toh fir aisa kya ho gaya aai baba, aisi bhi maine kya galti kardi ki aap logo ka vishwaas hi khatam ho gaya mere upar se..
Aisi bhi kya galti kardi maine ki aaj aapne mere astitva, mera guroor hi mujhse chin liya..

(Silence in room)

Sorry aai.. mujhe pata hai aapko bilkul accha nahi lagta jab main ye safed saadi pehnti hu.. aapko nafrat hai na iss colour se.. par fir bhi mene pehni.. kyunki ye bohot zaruri tha aai.. main thak gayi thi inn saari baaton se..
Main thak gayi thi aapke aur baba ke iss bartav se..
(Turns to Mansi) Mansi.. sorry.. hamesha meri wajah se tumhare shaadi ke functions main tamasha ho jata hai.. sahi kehte hai log.. main jaha bhi rehti hu mere aaju baju sab kuch kharab ho hi jate hai..
(Turns to avi) Avinash ji, abhi mene yaha kaha hua harr ek shabd.. ye safed rang.. ye meri zindagi ki sacchai hai..

Aap bhi toh bina patni ke vidhur ho na.. toh aap mujhse alag kaise hue..
Agar aap apne iss status ko duniyawalo se nahin chupate to main kyon apni sacchai kisi se bhi chupaoo..
Agar main vidhwa hu toh hu.. ab isme meri Kya galti hai.. aur nahi mujhe apne iss sacchai pe koi sharam aati hai..
Agar iss sab ke bawjood aap abhi bhi mujhse shaadi karna chahte hai.. toh main abhi sagai karne ke liye taiyaar hu.. par agar nahi.. toh waise bata dijiye..

Avinash didn't say anything and looked down..
Pallavi nods in disbelief on his silence..
And bent a little to his daughter -
Sorry beta.. main aapki ek acchi aai kabhi nahi ban paungi.. kyunki jo ladki ek acchi beti nahi ban payi wo ek acchi aai Kya bann payegi.. (her aai baba in tears) I really hope aapko ek aisi aai mile jaise aapke baba chahte ho..

Kulkarni family and their guests Leave without saying anything.. guest of deshmukh family also started leaving.. kaka requesting them to join mansi's wedding next day..

Aai comes a step forward to pallavi but she turns & sits on floor to pick her red saree..

From the corner of her eyes pallavi can see that raghav is still standing there but she didn't dared to raise her eyes & look at him..
She wanted to, she struggled but she feared to look at him.. her heart didn't want to meet his gaze bcoz she was scared to receive the same disgusting feeling from him which she got from the society for all these years..
She don't know the reason but she was afraid to get rejected by raghav's eyes..

She picked her saree and straight away went to her room..
Raghav too leave the house and come out..
Followed by Farhad..

Raghav is still shocked.. he trying to take deep breaths and was trying to understand what just happened.. his mind throwing all types of thoughts at him.. his heart was melting melting and just melting for her every passing second..

Farhad - aap thik hai anna (he just nods) aap se ek baat puchu.. kahi uski sacchai jankar aapne aapki feelings toh nahi change karli na..
(Raghav just glared at him.. just then they saw kirti and Amma came)

Raghav - Amma bohot raat ho gayi hai.. farhad aapko ghar chod dega.. mana mat kijiye ga pls..

(Considering all the drama happened, she just nods to that)
Farhad - par anna apko chodke..
Raghav - tu jaa farhad, main apne aap ghar aa sakta hai..
(Farhad gives him the car keys & they leave)

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Its late in the night.. around 2 hours passed to all the drama.. Pallavi is still in her room and can't sleep.. she didn't talk to anyone after she returned to her room.. she was worried what if her family will hate her more because of what she did.. but along with this she was more worried about what Raghav will be thinking of her.. what will be his opinions..

She was continuously accusing her that how can she think abt raghav's opinion at this moment.. but her heart could only think about him only..

She brushed up her thoughts and She got up from floor where she was sitting and opened her window to get some fresh window..
She closed her eyes & took a deep breath as cold air touched her face.. she opened her eyes and saw Raghav outside her house gate.. his car was parked outside Deshmukh niwas and he was standing there leaning on his car..

Here on the other Raghav was lost in his thoughts.. he didn't even realized what was the time it was.. all her words were still ringing in his ear.. his heart was filled with full of emotions..

Just then his phone rang.. he take out his phone from pocket.. & saree ka dukaan name flashed on his screen.. he probably smiled for the first time seeing that name..

He picked up the phone..

Pallavi - tum neeche kya kar rahe ho..
Raghav - (raised his eyes & spotted her on window) main wo bass.. (fumbling) main ruka tha tumse kuch kehna tha..
Pallavi - thik hai main aati hu neeche..

(She cuts the call and turn to go but stopped near her mirror.. she was still in her white saree.. but she didn't care about it anymore.. bcoz she really needs to deal with her thoughts about him ASAP)

She comes out of house and was walking to him.. he saw her coming in white saree.. whatever the colour of saree was he was glad that her eyes were sparkling with self confidence and he finally saw the old pallavi again which he was missing desperately from evening
She snapped her fingers and brought him out of his thoughts..
Pallavi - ab kuch bologe (showing some extra confidence than usual but fearing from inside to face him..)
Raghav - tumhe itna scene create karne ka kya zarurat tha ?? Kitna badbad karta hai.. mujhe bola hota.. ek lafa marta toh aise hi bhagke Chala jata wo Avinash.. (She frowns.. after few seconds) par thik hai.. jo bhi tha.. shayad bohot jaruri tha..
Accha sunaya tum sabko..
Pallavi - matlab.. tumhe iss baat se koi farak nahi pada ki main..
Raghav - mereko kyun fark padega.. haa shocking toh tha.. par jo bhi hua usme tumhara kuch galti nahi hai..

Pallavi don't even know why but she felt so relieved hearing that.. all her fears regarding his judgements just went away..
Raghav - aur haa.. main kehna chahta tha ki kapde koi bhi colour ke pehno.. par apne andar ki chamak kum nako hone ko..
Pallavi - bass.. itni si baat kehne ko tum 2 ghante yaha ruke the..?
Raghav - nahi.. (fumbles) aur hai..
Pallavi - Kya??
Raghav - aur wo.. wo upshakuni waigare kuch nahi hota.. insaan toh kismat apne saath leke aata hai na..
Pallavi - Aur..
Raghav - aur (fumbles) haa.. wo tumne bola na ki tum jaha jata hai sab kharab karta hai..
Uska tension mat lo.. mere mood ko chod ke tum kuch kharab nahi karta..
Pallavi - (wanted to smile but was successful in keeping straight face) Aur..
Raghav - aur tum bohot accha beti hai.. aur ye baat wo khadus rambo samaz jayega.. aur nahi toh tum samza dena jaise mujhe hamesh badbad karta rehta hai waise..

Pallavi - Aur..
Raghav - (fumble more) aur tumhare jaisa ladki bohot kum rehta hai iss duniya main..
Koi na koi zarur ayega tumhari life main jo tumse pyaar jarur karega.. aur use koi aur baat se kabhi fark nahi padega..
(They share an awkward silence between them.. pallavi breaks it)
Pallavi - Aur..
Raghav - ab main tumko kya story sunara kya.. jo tumhe aur, aur, aur sunna hai..
Bass ho gaya mera..
Pallavi - toh pichle 2 ghanto se tum bass itna sa kehne ko ruke the..
Raghav - haa.. kyunki mujhe laga ki tumko ye sunne ka zarurat hoga aaj..
(They share a small eye lock.. he continues)
Bass itna hi.. ardhamainda.. aaj waise bhi dimag ka bohot exercise ho gaya hai..
Toh main chalta hai..

He opened the car door and was going to sit.. he stopped and turned to her again..

Raghav - Aur haa Saree ka dukaan.. apna challenge pehle jaise hi chalu rahega.. don't forget.. toh subah subah jaldi utho.. himmat ke saath ready hoke apna wo saree ka dukaan chalu karo aur pehle jaise mujhe takkar do.. raghav rao kisi pe daya karke soft nahi hota.. Hyderabad se toh main tumhe nikal ke hi rahunga.. just wait & watch.. ardhamainda..

He sits in car.. start the car.. look at her through side mirror.. give a soft smirk and drive away..
Here pallavi too see him drove off with soft smile on her lips and gratitude in her heart..

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Thank you if you read patiently till the End..
It wasn't a romantic OS.. but it was simply an outcome of my wish for pallavi's outburst infront of her toxic family without being Mahaan for once..
I just added my take on how raghav should know about her widow bagage and his reaction to that.. I had to write it & let it go..

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Thank you for the help Gunjan.. ♥️♥️♥️

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Just few hours ago I was reading this in pieces in twitter and was thinking of searching it in IF and here I got it...so good this is ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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koi writers ko bolo re ye piece uthane... ohh my heart.. this is what raghav n pallavi we all want..bs ye dedo 🥰🥰


by the kudos to the writer 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Originally posted by: DesiTvButterfly

Thank you for the help Gunjan.. ♥️♥️♥️

this is damnnnnnn good. 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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How amazing would it be if Pallavi actually found the strength to say all this! Really beautifully written ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was damn awesome 😍😍😍😍

Raghav being so understanding here!!

Loved it!!!

Keep writing 😍❤

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I read this piece of work this morning on instagram and I couldn't believe I found it on IF too.

This story is really damn good....the way Pallavi expresses herself and how tenderly she talks to Avinash's daughter.

Also the way Raghav was trying to provoke Pallavi was really sweet...It was almost like Raghav could not bear seeing Pallavi crying and how he offered his help to cancel the marriage. and I am quite sure Farhad must have had a secret smile on his face seeing his Anna's distress regarding Pallavi.

The monologue of Pallavi just before her cancelled engaement was so intense and raised a social issue and how widows are marginalised by the society and how society does not treat widow and widower equally.

Hehe...Raghav is now Asha's guest not BWA's

This story was pure emotions and really beautifully penned down too...and the smile on Raghav's face when Pallavi calls in the end is so cutee.

I really loved this...and Raghav fumbling infront of Pallavi whenever she said "and" and at last Raghav says "ab main tumko kya story sunara kya.. jo tumhe aur, aur, aur sunna hai..Bass ho gaya mera.." had me laughing.

I really loved the story and this sweet-sour bond is exactly what we want to see our Raghvi as

Would love to see more from you

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is awesome!! Keep it up Nidhi!! 👏👍🏼

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Roller coaster ride.. very entertaining...

Raghav’s words at last..❤️

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