OS: Deal breaker - Page 2

Loved it...can understand Virat’s outburst...and totally related to his feelings...very well written...I request you to please write the follow up part after Virat finish his second investigation and found out the truth...separation is very hard to tolerate at the moment in show but at least find some closed end through your story...😥 thank you for amazing story... please keep writing...👍🏻

I can just imagine a scene like this. Please write from Virat's POV after he learns the truth.

Originally posted by: scarlett22

I can just imagine a scene like this. Please write from Virat's POV after he learns the truth.

I will try to. After watching the episode, I just want to give Pakhi a mouthful. So who else other than Virat to do this for me.

Totally Loved your OS dear. I can connect with each and every scene written there especially Virat's stance. Sai should now atleast learn to trust her husband

Very well written...👏the dialogues were heart touching and heart breaking💔

I cried during reading and can imagine their hurtful face😭

Very well written. It was so apt. Loved Virat's confrontation with Sayi and that too with the right questions.

This was love... Pls continue writing that how virat gets to know the truth, confronted his family and so called best friend and his redemption.

It's so heart wrenching... Why can't they show like this in the show instead of stupid drama which makes FL and ML look like idiots...😭😭

A much needed confrontation by Virat to Say.

He should have asked these genuine questions rather than just outright accusing her. Nice work 👍🏻