A Purvir Story - New Beginnings (Mar 23 - Updated Ch. 3/Pg1 2nd post) - Page 5

So beautiful✨❤✨ waiting for purvi's decision 😌

So beautiful✨❤😍.

I loved all dialogues.

Shree di honestly bolu toh am not so good with words like all of you...khud ko zyada express nhi kar paati I think... And also i generally don't write long comments...but jo bolungi dil se bolungi...

Your writing is so touching ki kya batau and i love the sequence of events and the long updates full of all the beautiful details, it's very completing, your writing, the reader's imagination that you stimulate, the warm feeling of actually being present at that spot when actually it's all imaginary. What with my weird analogies but it's like when we get drenched in the rain na.... The anticipation of our actions like sardi na ho jaaye....yr cliffhanger be like that very anticipation... and then that feeling of belonging with each drop that covers us... that's yr story for me....full of warm feeling of belonging as it makes me imagine what i actually want to and the always present anticipation for yr next part... how you will amaze us again and again with yr magical words!❤️

Thank you so so much for such a wonderful gift for all of us! 🤗

Love you loads but yr writing more🤣

just loved it! you pen the dialogues exceptionally well they all sound effortless… just can't wait for the next part ❤️

Oh shree👏👏

Finally Maine padh liya

And the wait was worth it

The meeting and conversation between mother and daughter was beautiful

I love that you bring her in the story this is something that I was expecting from the show but I don't know when this will happen

Manas and juhi playing with purvi ke bhai ( nam bhul Gaye mai) ye teeno relation me kya lagenge 🤔🤔🤔🤔

Ok mukhi ji ki public apology was good dialogues felt natural

But humare chad viru panch parmeshwar 😎 ese mafi mang sakte hai show me bhi Jaane ke liye dekhiye molkki rat 10 baje

Whole chapter was really good waiting for the last part ❤❤❤❤

Another amazing part...

Mukhi is a master piece...

I loved vir emotional side so much

I thought I had commented on Part 3…but it seems I missed!

A very good part as usual…Purvi’s conversation with he rmother was so cathartic…Purvi really needed to get it out!

Vir’s apology to Purvi’s mother…extremely touching! In a country where sons-in-law are considered second only to God, his apology comes straight from the heart and also teaches his kids that if one has made a mistake, there should be no shame in apologizing!

Ab toh Purvi maaf karde Vir ko😳

Looking fwd to the next part!

Originally posted by: sargamif

Shree di apne to kamaal hi kar diya👏

Hats off to ur writing..

Eagerly waiting for ur next part..Actually I m excited to see what will be pur's decision now.😉

Thanks, Sargam!

Karungi update in a day or 2.. Kaam ke chalte couldnt find a a block of time to write

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Shree di honestly bolu toh am not so good with words like all of you...khud ko zyada express nhi kar paati I think... And also i generally don't write long comments...but jo bolungi dil se bolungi...

Your writing is so touching ki kya batau and i love the sequence of events and the long updates full of all the beautiful details, it's very completing, your writing, the reader's imagination that you stimulate, the warm feeling of actually being present at that spot when actually it's all imaginary. What with my weird analogies but it's like when we get drenched in the rain na.... The anticipation of our actions like sardi na ho jaaye....yr cliffhanger be like that very anticipation... and then that feeling of belonging with each drop that covers us... that's yr story for me....full of warm feeling of belonging as it makes me imagine what i actually want to and the always present anticipation for yr next part... how you will amaze us again and again with yr magical words!❤️

Thank you so so much for such a wonderful gift for all of us! 🤗

Love you loads but yr writing more🤣

Oh my, Jiya!!🤗

Thankyou for your kind words. I am so touched.❤️

Next part hopefully during the weekend