Raghvi FF : TILL THE END prt 12 on pg 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Raghvi ff : Till the end


Its my second attempt to write about fabulous Raghvi as there are some issues with my previous ff For some time { i am not able to post as it always say spam content not allowed dont know why?} So heres another ff for all you wonderful creators and supporters...

Part 1,2,3 pg 1

Part 4 pg 2

Part 5 pg 3

Part 6 pg 4

Part 7 pg 4

Part 8 pg 4

Part 9 pg 5

Part 10 pg 5

Part 11 pg 6

Part 12 pg 6




Part one 1


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The new end

....

Its been a week they are married ....

The otherwise classy rr mansion was looking dark and evil and negative all in one place .

The staff also seems to be avoiding every single interaction between them and with owners , yes owners there is another member in the mansion ...

He married her force fully and was hell bent on making her life hell...

Farhad : anna aap ye sab ab bhi kyu kar rahe ho? Jo ho gaya wo ho gaya , waise bhi hamare pass koi proof nahi hai bhabi ke khilaf....

Rr: ek to usko tu bhabi mat bula, mene koi dhum dham se nachte hua ye shadi nai kiya ke tum khush hoke usko bhabi bolega...

Dusra ye ki uske alawa ye sab kon karega farhad wohi hi in sab ka challenge deke gaya tha merko...

aur tisra ye ke mere bhulne se baki aab nahi bhulega ,amma nai bhulega, kirti nahi bhulega, kirti ka liye jo ladka dekha me unka family nai bhulega...

Farhad : par anna aapne hi sab ka shuruvat kiya tha.

Rr : angry now speaks loudly with high pitched voice..

Farhad jitna usko bola me usse kahi jyada help kiya me, kitna galat bola wo ladki merko! par wo sahi laga isliye chup raha me, kitna baar jaan bachaya, business bachaya, ghar valo ka samne ijjat bachaya Par wo kya kiya mera amma aur kirti ko use kiya mera against...

Ab wo bhugtegaaa... And laughs loudly...Ab ye sab ka End me karega

..............

Here pallavi was still in the room a very dark room , it was very big and lavish room full of all the luxuries any girl would want but its like sone kaa pinjara servents use to come and give her a plate of food and thats it ... No one comes in she could hear raghav and farhaad talk and wept silently

Pallu: muzse ek baar puchte to sahi, main aisa kyu karungi ? Laga tha ki kahina kahi ye challenge aur dushmni ke bad bhi samjhte ho tum muze....

Aur jo tumne mere sath kiya wo ... Uska badla to me bhi lungi aur bugtoge to tum bhi Mr. Raghav rao... End to tumhara shuru ho gaya hai...

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Plzz avoid mistakes...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting start

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2


A bit far...


Its been a month since raghav rao and pallavis marriage and it seems to be an everlasting warth of raghav rao thats been showering on her ....


He is been too strict with staff to keep her alone in that room, only reddy would take food plates in and out of the room...

Pallavi wont eat any food , only as much necessary to keep her alive...


She has become ice cold and stone hard now a days as none of raghavs banter, his accusations would affect her and it bothered raghav very much ...


Raghav : ye saree ka dukan kitna besharam hai... Par me isko nahi chodega..


He gulp down his glass full of whisky and again went upstairs


Pallavi : startled by banging of door open and close looked at him.. as if ready for what ever his gonna serve her with...


Raghav on other hand wanted to see her in pain...he sat down on the floor next to her...


Raghav: kya saree ka dukan tumhare jitna daring ladki me apni akkha life me nahi dekha...
Ye ghar tumko itna pasand agaya ke jaisa bhi rehneko milega rahega tum????....


are haa wo tumhar appa come sasur tumko nikal jo diya ...tum jayega bhi kidhar aur upar se waha ka comparison me to yaha par itna aram milta hai tumko nahi????


(Pallavi didn't flinch a bit that burned raghav from the core, his desire to see her in pain and making her pay for what she has done made him mad with anger )


He moved in front of her to see her face
Raghav : waise tum kaisa samjhega mera taqleef tumhara to ammi aur appa mar gaya hai hainaa...


(Pallavi looked at him hurt is now comming in her eyes. her heart knows how it feels to be a orphan that to middle class that too a girl...)


Ragahv being raghav rao.. impatient, greedy and rude wanted to take a deeper dig at her heart ...


Raghav : waisa kya achha kismat leke aya hai tum maa baap nahi bhai ko tum bhaga diya deshmukhs ko barbaad karne ka baad ab yaha aya tum chupchap... kitna ajeeb baat hai ki iss baar tum lecture nai diya ki merko tumse shadi nahi karni chahiye and all...
Obviously smart jab jayathi jewels mil raha hai to sadi dukan kisko chahiye hoga??


Stretching this a bit faar ...


Raghav : aur jaisaa wo BWA bola ki merko bhi tum kha jayega !!! bas fir kya sab tumhara...


( At this pallavi shattered like a glass smacked at floor...
a whole funeral scene came in front of her how her colors, her happiness, her dignity, self-respect , soul faded at that very moment)



Rr : Par karega kya tum itna paise kaa kya hai tumhara paas .... Na maa baap na shadi aur jitna merko pata chala wo tumko hath bhi nahi lagaya karke aur uska pehla hi ... Tch thcc chhh

( making sound he laughed)


Pallavi : started crying ...


Raghav has never seen her crying so much. that sound of suppresed sobs was more horrifying...


He could see how instantly the floor became pool of her tears...
He was somehow sure that she hasn't cried her heart out all these years for any above reasons.... She must be holding that dam of tears till now when he deliberately breaking that with his strong hammer of words....

With all the possible reason to hate her he was feeling sorry for her....
Raghav want to embrace all the pain of her to relax her but he restricted himself from that...


He got a call from harish that amma is fully conscious again and he can meet her..


Before he walked away from her... He looked behind closing door and saw her holding both hands over face , knees to chest, crying non stop....
Raghav suddenly thought that may be that was a bit too far......
......

950842 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#4

Exactly the Pallavi I envision post marriage.

Lost but burning with hate.

Great start 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Exactly the Pallavi I envision post marriage.

Lost but burning with hate.

Great start 👍🏼

Right...if the marriage is for revenge then he will definitely hurt her with the fact she is an orphan and a widow.

But if the marriage of convenience, then they should rather have a deep emotional moment with all the crying their heart out

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Posted: 4 years ago
#6

Thank you guys heres the part 3 ....enjoy and do tell hows it... Its so overwhelming to get your response... Thanks a lot...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#7

Part 3

Innocent

Flashback:
Sidhhesh par ye rishta nai hua to pata nai aisa rishta fir kab mile !!! Pallavi waha khush rahegi, log bhi achhe hai .....
Aur waise bhi hume bhi to apni family ke bare me plan karna haina... Kitne din use hi paalte baithe hamari bhi apni life hai... Anath hokar bhi humne use bohot kuch diya hai ab bas ''wo choti hai, uska career etc ...ye sab band karo !!! maine use manaa liya hai'' pallavi still remember her dada vahini's convo...
That was the faithful day she thought of marrying madaar..

Today...

Ragahv : dr kya me amma ko mil sakta hai?
Dr: plzz aap thoda aur time dijiye unhe , abhi abhi hosh me aayi hai wo.. unko aram karne dijiye ....
Raghav noded and sits on the chair besides just when harish came with grabbing a guy with collor ...
Ragahv: kya hai ab ?
Hari: anna ye shoot kar raha tha sab kuch...
Raghav without wasting a sec started slapping him hard
Once
Twice
Thrice and on
Raghav: ye isliye mara ki ab aage jo me puchega wo sach sach batane ka, time nahi hai faltu mera pass.... bol kya kar raha tha, kiske kehne par aur wo aage kya karne ko bola tha...? ( Raghav takes out gun and put it on his heart)
Man: wo video record kar raha tha ,
Wo anjali kapoor karke ek ladki ne phone pe bataya tha , aur aage pallavi deshmukh ke naam se news channel walo ko bechne ko bola tha!!!! That man said this in one breath ....
Raghav shocked and enraged to the hell looked at farhaad and screamed saying...
Rr : itna himmat kaisa badh gaya logo kaa farhaad ki mera pith piche wo do take kaa ladki itna sab kar baitha aur naam saree ka dukan pe dalne ko bola... Itna planning....!!!

Farhaad : anna mene to bola tha ki pallavi ne nahi kiyaaa par aap ...

Rr: tum uska vakil mat bano, usne ye anjali wala kand nahi kiya matlab kuch bhi nahi kiya aisaa nahi hai....
Rr : aur tum reporter tum us anjali ko bolne kaa ki kaam hogaya bas news wo hoga jo main batayegaa ... ARDHAMAINDAA!!!!!!

nurse came out in meanwhile saying patient is good an you can meet. Her...

Raghav enters to looks at his amma
She as usual was looking angry but he was stll happy ...

Jaya : kirti abhi abhi ghar gaya hai usne bataya merko sab ki tum wo pallavi ke sath kyaa kiyaa...

Rr: amma wo ladki ne bhi to tumhara aur kirti kaa sath galat

Jaya : bss ek aur shabd nahi....
Merko mat sikhao ab tak jo bhi hua wo sab janne kaa bad hi me tumko bol raha hai

Rr : lekin amma wo ladki ...

Jaya : ab tum meri baat sunoge chup chap
Ardhamaiyndaaa...

Rr : haa amma me chup rahegaa aap tension mat lo bss me sun raha hai...

Howzz it guys do tell any suggestions

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Posted: 4 years ago
#8

Wow nice amma class le gi anna ki🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago
#9

Part 4


May be ....


Why my life is so tough, what I have done wrong... I have been a good girl through out my life... Never complained about anything Never judge anyone, never even lived for myself...


Every single tear was a incident which was now coming out of her eyes...

Being anaath she was always using a hand me down books and clothes.

She remember how she was imposed being unlucky for the parents...

Been wedded early, not given any opportunity for career

being widow kept away from each auspicious ceremony...

Kaku's harsh words, stares from her friends, and accusations from her own aai baba...

And here comes the monster rao.. He is the acid which has penetrated her heart....talking about her parents mandaar, her being virgin and He is saying that " muze kha jayegi..."

She sobbed aloud.. For her aai baba not deshmukh but the real one.... Koi kisi ka nahi hota....

May be maine sabko galat samjhaa...


At Hospital...

Jaya : merko jo pata chala kya wo sach hai...kyo kiya wo pallavi ke sath aisa...tum sochta nai kya kuch karne ke pehle?

Rr: amma par..

Jaya : chup bola naa...

Are wo pehle se hi bss madad karne me laga hai sabki...

Jab tumko aur wo harish ko wo recording karke dhamkaya tab usko kuch pata nahi tha ke wo behen hai teera wo to help kar raha tha na... Tab se tum pichhe pada hai bechari kaa....

Usne tumhara jaan bachaya, kirti ko bachane ka koshish kiya...

tum family and business ka baat karta hai...

Are wo ladki bhi to apna 2 behen, aur family ka bare me socha, aur wo business uspe to uska pura family ka kharcha chalta tha uska upar bhi tum gaya.. To kya karega akela ladki...

Ho gaya hoga usse galti aya hoga gussa ,

Yaa ho sakta hai ke usne kuch kiya hi naa ho...

Tumne ye karne ka pehle jankari nikali bhi nahi hogi bss kar diya ...

Tumne wo bichari anath widhwaa ladki ka zindagi nark bana diya...

A major shrill run through raghavs spine anaath, ladki, widhwaa those words kept ringing in his mind....


He just assured her to make every thing good normal again and left....



Rr mansion...

Raghav reach home and immediately called farhaad and harish...

Raghav: harish tum Amma aur kirti pe nazar rakhna Aur farhaad tum

Farhaad didn't look at him

Raghav knew he is not gonna let that go easily

Raghav : farhaad agar tumko time mila to ye sab jo bhi chal raha hai uska details nikalo merko pata lagvana hai ke ye sab pallavi ne kiya ya koi aur...

Farhaad : sach anna?

Raghav : hmmm...

They both left...


Raghav went upstairs to check on pallavi...

As he opens door the site in front was unbearable... Food on plate untouched just glass of water was half,floor on which her body lies was wet, her face had the marks of dried tears...

He lifted her to bed and placed her carefully not to wake up her....

Raghav : may be main tumko galat samjha saree ka dukan... Main sach dhund ke rahega

।।।

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Raghav will find who is the culprit. N punish them. But will pallvi forgive him

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