Raghvi FF : TILL THE END prt 12 on pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Part 8


Open wounds...



Its a new day raghav had instructed krishna to give medicines to pallavi by mixing in food or milk because he already knew she won't take it easily ....


He was trying to instruct her about other food details by dietician to krishna when amma and kirti came ..
Raghav was delighted to see them but soon. Fear take over ... He knew it must be related to what he has done in last two months....


Amma : pallavi kahha hai thik hai na wo ...?
Kirti kept ignoring raghav
...
Amma and kirti meets pallavi explains how the circumstances were at that time.. how raghav misunderstood her will to get them married and how sorry they are for her...
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Pallavi : koi baat nahi kirti and aunty muze aadat hai me to hu hi bachpan se unlucky... Saying this she turned her face ...

Kirti and amma felt bad and guilty .

they assured her that theh will come to see har again and left.

.......
Evening in grand rr mansion was dim as usual...


Krishna { ks} : didi aap aajse dining pe khana khane aayengi...bss bohot hua ... Mana ke raghav rao ne jo kiya wo think nahi tha par uska nazariya bhi to samzna hoga kisko... Uss waqt ke halath hi asie the ki.. jo bhi ho bhul jaiye plzz


Pallavi : me thik hu , tu jo yaha hai ...achha hua farhad ko sujha ki tumhe bula le ..mere wajah se dukan se bhi nikal diya baba ne tumhe...


Ks : didi yahin to samjhna hai aapko raghav hamesha se gusse wala, badtamiz aur gair zimmedar hai par aapke apne unhone bhi to apna pan nahi jataya ....


Pallavi : jane de naa krishna...


Ks : didi ab ye apka ghar hai aur yaha raghav hai ! Agar wo apse amma se kirti didi se aise baat karta hai ro baki sab ka kya ...???
Aapko mere liye baki sab ke liye ye chuppi todni hogi.


Pallavi : thik hai ... Par muzse jyada ummide mat rakhna.

...
Ks: didi aur ek chiz jaroor sochiyega ki aaj tak raghav kya kabhi aapke sath limit cross ki, kabhi usne isse pehle koi galat baat ki, kitni baar madat ki hai usne humari...
Apko kitni baar bachaya hai usne jab ki ye uski jimmedari bhi nahi thi..
Par baat uski behen ki ijjat ki thi tab ... Aur tab shayad usne apni takad ka istemal bina soche samjhe kiya...


Saying this krishna left rr mansion leaving dazed pallavi behind...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Nice seeing Krishna advicing Pallavi as a friend

when will you be updating next

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Just an attempt to show what i thought this marriage would bring .. as the makers are hell bent on romcom and dhumtana nana drama .. i wanna write it as more intense and lovey dovey

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Chubu

Just an attempt to show what i thought this marriage would bring .. as the makers are hell bent on romcom and dhumtana nana drama .. i wanna write it as more intense and lovey dovey

I m liking it 👍🏼

Keep writing

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Part 9


Moments to cherish....


It was a new morning something has changed obvious a day but more than that Krishna's words lifted just an ounce of wt over her heart.. even raghav's servent hadn't sent tea in her room itself ...
After freashen up pallavi went to the dining area ...
Pallavi : reddy kaka khane me kya bana hai yaa mein madat kardu
Farhaad : bhabi aap baitho wo apko...
Pallavi stoped him by showing her palm
Raghav and harish also felt a little shock but choose to get up an walk away
Before going raghav gives reddy a look of take care of and left...
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Pallavi sirf 2 plates kyu
Reddy : wo anna to bss protein shake an juice lete hai toh...
Pallavi { pl} : tabhi amir hai khane ka to kharcha hi nahi ise..🤣🤣😃
Waise mere liye me khud bana lungi aap jao dont worry kuch nahi kahega raghav ...
..... It starts raining but today she doesn't feel like going out....
Pl : garden me sirf hari patti laga rakhi hai kuch fool hote to kitne achhe lagte...
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Farhaad : bhabi apko kuch chahiye ho toh aap krishna ya reddy se kahiye ga hum showroom ja rahe hai..
Pallavi ignore him ...
At night krishna left early and pallavi thought of cooking food rather being bored , preparing chaat and panipuri she set the table and just go to freshen up a bit
Raghav enters mansion and asks reddy to cut fruits and make protein smoothy while he comes to dinner ...

At dinning table
Raghav was sitting at center chair he saw pallavi coming down and reddy bringing that chat to table and leave ...
Surprise to raghav pallvi sat on 2nd chair rather than at other end ...
Pallavi started eating her chat and panipuri here rghav couldn't take his bite at those apples his nostrils were so full of chat that he wanted to grab her plate but as gentleman he kept silence but saliva wont stop at any cost devoid of this pallavi kept enjoying her chat .. but soon as a good person she asked reddy to serve some to raghav but he refuses thinking he would enjoy leftover after she goes but she was nowhere near to stop... Finallay after grief staring at that tempting chat taking in the aroma breaking all his barrier ragahv asked pallavi ...

Rr : wo bowl pass karna ...
Pallavi passed it and raghav digged in it as if he didn't had any food for years ...
Pallavi smiled at him and left him ...
........
That night both of them felt releaved a bit, some more light hearted ...
It was another morning
Raghav and harish had left for showroom early, farhad and krishna were in garden
Pl : ye kya kar rahi ho krishna itne plants
Kr : didi aapko fool wale paudhe chahiye the naa bass wahi lagane the...
Farhaad : bhabi aap inhe har plant ki jagah bataa dijiyega anna ne kaha hai ki garden area aapke hisab se renovate kare...
Farhad and krishna left the garden while pallavi enjoys the new colorful view of it ...

And it was the beginning of the new season....
Its a daily routine for raghav rao masion to wittness new spectacle everyday...some day raghav would send rabbits or peacock or birds or there would be an accidental visit of chat wala ....
Some way or other each day of pallavi was filled with happy moments to cherish life time....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Read them all in one go..

You wrote the updates so amazingly

Loved how Pallavi showed her hurt and how Raghav sorted everything

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Wow, this was so lovely.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Guys again i am unable to post it says spam content not allowed... What should i do

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Part 10



Pooja




It was sunday morning but not usual to raghav rao, generally on any festival day he and farhaad would sit in study and do extra work but today it was different....

Raghav came down and look at the decorations and pooja preparation on full swing...

He knew amma must have mentioned this to pallavi...

Pallavi : dekh krishna sari tayyari achhe se karna aaj aunty aur kirti aa sakte he pooja ke liye unke hi liye mene ye sab prepare kiya hai wo dono yaha aa jayenge to kitna achha hoga na...

Kr : haa didi.. Aa jayenge aap fikr mat karo

.....

Raghav was mesmerized his mansion was looking like home , a home to a married couple just his childhood home....

.........

He saw pallavi in her usual attire simple saree and no jewellery except her mangalsutra....

While admiring his lady he stepped on something ....

It was a huge rangoli...

Before he can get away everyone surrounded him...

Farhaad : anna ye aapne kya kia..

Kr : he bhagwaan

Pallavi : dekh nahi chal sakte tum.... Kitni mehnat se banayi thi jao ab yaha se

Raghav accidentally crossed the other unruined half...

Everyone gasps....

Raghav not to ruin anything further goes to his room and adored everyone Evey thing.... He missed this homely touch for so many years....

Raghav makes a call and gave instructions ...

After a while pallavi receives a box it had a note...

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Pallavi merko pata hai tum always pooja etc karta hai. Amma jaroor iss pooja ka mention kiya hoga or tum apni marji se bhi kar raha hoga ye, par sab kuch itna achhe se tayar kiya aur khud tayar nahi hua to fir sab adhura rahega so plzz isse pehen lena... Aur haa me tumko mafi ke liye ye mahi kar raha kyo ki tumhara mafi me kamayega... Par ye jaroor pehen lena pooja, amma aur apna bhagwan ke liye

-raghav rao

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Pallavi opens the box it had a beautiful yet heavy saree with elegant jewels and accessories...

A light smile crept on her face...

.....,...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Aww...this was sweet chapter

Lovely update

Raghav's path towards redemption

eager for next update

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