Clarity [RaghVi OS] - Page 2

"change everythink kind of serious" well ok😆

It was such a toe curling read... And I say that when I read something rated 18+ but dear gurl you managed to make me feel exactly that without you know....😆

And was it just me who felt it wasn't just Pallavi speaking her heart out but every gurl out there who finds herself wanting for the boy of her dreams... Like a poem to that boy we'll never write a letter for...

Heart touching yaar, it was...

I'm a sucker for drunk hero heroine scenes but here the main attraction wasn't that.... It was the unpretentious beauty of speaking your feelings out loud., plainly in front of the person who's really special to you...

It was love and lovely...

This is beautifully penned❤️

Originally posted by: K_keechu

That's brilliant. Really enjoyed their confessions and smile and that last laugh.

Am I the only one who got worried that what if she forgets all this the next morning? 😆

Keep writing, you write so well. 😳

No you're not the only one... I was worried about that too...

Honestly, I have never read a confession like Pallavi's. It's so simple, subtle but explains so many things. How she loves him, but will be really happy even if his happiness lies somewhere else.

The piece just stole my heart💔

Tannu loveeee it! This truly harks to the alternate universe of the comfort and banter filled relationship they had during the Lion track! Fantastic.

Do write more of this universe!

❤️👏

Sweet , warm story

I love that both of them kept their feelings inside and then had the courage to convince

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

This was such a sweet little piece. Pallavi finding courage to open her heart is something I'd want to see even on the show but I'm not sure if we will get it. Though the start of their conversation by the window cracked me up. 😆

Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

I just felt like someone like Pallavi, whose hamartia is her blind love for the Deshmukh family would not want to let her feelings out in fear of it impeding Amruta's future with Raghav, and being drunk might give her that boost to accept and own it. Glad you liked it so much.

As for the window part; well, this story is inspired from a real incident of someone I hold dear to my heart, but it was a unisex hostel and the girl climbed in through the window thinking it is a door and then literally ran away to her dorm after confessing without even waiting for an answer 😆

Originally posted by: Mihika

I am gonna go and read it again....its such a wonderful piece....👏

Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

So glad you liked it so much 😳

Originally posted by: Inese_20

So so beautifully written! Very deep.❤️ The way you have portrayed her vulnerability 🥺

An absolute gem. 👏

Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

She is indebted to the family, but she is also bound to her heart, those feelings needed a way out ❤️

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

This was sooo good..

A drunk Pallavi was good to read..

Raghav did listend without saying anything....

Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

So glad you liked it. For the drunk part, Pallu wont let her feelings out that easy, she likes to be guarded about certain stuff and she will hesitate especially when it comes to love; for Raghav, he initially did listen without saying anything coz he was sleepy and wanted her to get done with fatafat, but then also wanted to come clean on his own feelings.