Separation - Let's rewrite it ❤ - Page 6

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Thank you for tagging.... Even though I wonder how 😂😂

Can't think of anything as of now... Will get back when smthin clicks

Ha ha, we have interacted in my Ffs 😆. Thought you might be interested.

I really liked this one suggestion that is made here, I missed out the name of the person.

Pakhi manipulates sai to believe that virat is just being sympathetic towards her and nthin else and sai being the tyag Murthy daan veer, will push virat away and towards Pakhi...

That sort of mind game is pro Pakhi and being helpful is soo sai.... It sits with both their characters. And virat usually goes with the flow... So I am not sure wat he will do.

But I liked that.... It's ITV typical but practically possible

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

I really liked this one suggestion that is made here, I missed out the name of the person.

Pakhi manipulates sai to believe that virat is just being sympathetic towards her and nthin else and sai being the tyag Murthy daan veer, will push virat away and towards Pakhi...

That sort of mind game is pro Pakhi and being helpful is soo sai.... It sits with both their characters. And virat usually goes with the flow... So I am not sure wat he will do.

But I liked that.... It's ITV typical but practically possible

Yeah, given by Sukri 😆. The first suggestion.

Originally posted by: laksh

Fake fights and fake separation would be fun to watch . Oh wow, Didi is exposed too, that's nice 👏.

Wedding track in FF, please tag me when you write one.

I so wanted a different track from the original version but that's something they can't write. 😆

The FF I have started it already. The DevKit wedding will come soon.

The link of the FF

Thank you for tagging me and for this idea. It’s nice to have a safe Sairat place🥰

As you know I’m really bad at writing up but love reading other people’s OS.

I’ll try and think of something and post him - I’ll warn you it will not be any good compared to others I’ve just read 🙄

Originally posted by: Khushidum

Thank you for tagging me and for this idea. It’s nice to have a safe Sairat place🥰

As you know I’m really bad at writing up but love reading other people’s OS.

I’ll try and think of something and post him - I’ll warn you it will not be any good compared to others I’ve just read 🙄

You can come up with anything, I am sure it will be good. Everyone's plot will be different and special in its own ways. ❤❤

Originally posted by: laksh

@bold all okay?

Thank you for asking dear🤗

Was soo emotional because of something happened yesterday. I was feeling low so I thought I won't be able to give in any proper inputs

and then I saw the episode💔

I can’t think of anything new up to this point...the writers of ghum have fried by brain.

As soon as Sai has left Nagpur ACP (the real one- not this duffer) goes to college and investigates. He then goes to see Devi who has suddenly become well over night and remembers all the terrible injustice that her family (including Virat - not noticing she was locked in her room) have inflicted on her. She and the weasel are not going to see Virat again until he brings Sai back home.

On the way back to CN Virat had already contacted his boss DIG and tells him that Sai had left for GC. As it happens the GC ACP has gone away for a short period of time and Virat is asked to cover his absence....Virat is thinking about it......

When he gets back to CN he hears Karishma blurt out everything she knows. He follows his sherni’s lead and does band baja of the Chavans. He says he’s leaving with his Aai.

He packs his bags and tells Aai to get packed - they are both moving to GC and won’t come back until Sai returns with them.

Pakhi offers to pack his bags and come with him...but he refuses....so she says once again you’ve done my bezzathi. (that’s not part of the story but I felt I had to use the forums catchphrase!)

Sai and Usha Maushi have left for GC and are living with Inspector Pavan until Sai can sort out her dads estate and collect his money.

On the way to GC Aai speaks to Virat in my simple language- as the duffer hasn’t understood why he is in this mess....she explains that his biggest problem is making vaada’s and then not fulfilling them.

Aai has now realised her error in thinking that Virat is the mature one and Sai the immature one. They are both immature 😏. She asks him when is he going to break the best friend vaada as he is letting 3 people down himself, Sai and Virat.. plus it’s immoral 🤬I f he wants Sai then he needs to be clear that there is no vaada to Patraaleekha (think holi Kaku calling)🤣

Can’t think of next stage yet....I’m too 😡

That’s it for now.....my very first attempt with no grammar checking and nowhere near the fantastic OSs I read here....So apologies 😊

After the Sangeetha Deshpande letter, though Virat promised to reinvestigate, I want Sai to work on to know the mastermind behind the letter.

Sai's POV:

I know Virat Sir promised me that he will reinvestigate on this matter. Let him do the investigation to know about Pulkit sir, but meanwhile, I want to know who did this. I am sure it is one of the family members who is against the marriage. Let me recollect the incidents since shivratri.

She thinks, none of us have informed anyone about the wedding yet. Then who can do this? Let me check with Pulkit Sir. She calls Pulkit and gets to know that he too didn't inform anyone about this, except Madhuri. As he was at home that day, she also gets to Madhuri and comes to a conclusion that only family knows this truth.

Then she recollects the letter and gets shocked. Pakhi didi?

No, this can't happen! She can't stoop this low! But what if she did? I know I might be wrong but it is strange that while Pakhi didi was reading the letter, she could feel as if she is just talking to them, those are her words!

She decides to probe into this further.

Fast forward, she gets the evidence, confronts Pakhi and waits for Virat to inform him about the same.

When she informs this to Virat, he couldn't believe his ears! He says there might be a misunderstanding and this can never happen. Sai says she has proof and when she goes to get it, she realizes that Pakhi has changed it

Virat, upon realizing that there is no proof, questions her how she can blame Pakhi for this. P, who is waiting at their door for the right chance, enters saying, Virat, your wife has done my beizzati! How can she think that I can do this to someone? Don't you know me, I am your best friend Virat. I need my best friend's support today

Sai, who is disgusted looking at how P is behaving, says aur kitna neeche giroge Pakhi didi? We both know that you have done this, so accept it. Then some dialogues exchange and Virat turns to Sai and says that she cannot talk to Pakhi like this.

Sai asks him if he don't trust her enough? She asks, don't you know that I never lie? yet, you believe that I am just blaming Pakhi didi because I won't like her?! Virat sir, despite of what she did to me, I have always respected her!

Instead of just believing her and questioning me, you could have given me a chance to prove myself! But no, chances are only to your best friend right?

She is hurt, deeply! As usual, Pakhi tries to instigate Virat and Sai asks her not to talk in between husband and wife. After doing such a disgusting act, you still want to instigate my husband against me, how can..

Virat cuts her and asks her to mind her language.

Sai says, aapne toh kabhi apni pyari dosth se aisa nahi kaha, jabki aap bhi jaante ho ki inhone mere saath kaisa sulookh kiya. Phir aaj kyun Virat sir?

Okay I am stuck. Can someone please help me. So what I want to convey is that he believed Pakhi and behaved in this way to Sai. Sai questions him how long will he show partiality towards his best friend and also asks, it is because you are not just friends?

Then this will initiate another fight between them. Sai should move out of her room stating that I know you can't give me wife's rights but you can't insult my intentions like this.

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I didn't proof read this. Its visible that these two have trust issues and Pakhi is the one that can use it to her benefit. Also, as long as Virat doesn't clarify it to Sai, whenever he supports Pakhi over her, if it is me, I would feel that the pyarosti still exists. So want the separation to happen in those lines

Originally posted by: Khushidum

I can’t think of anything new up to this point...the writers of ghum have fried by brain.

As soon as Sai has left Nagpur ACP (the real one- not this duffer) goes to college and investigates. He then goes to see Devi who has suddenly become well over night and remembers all the terrible injustice that her family (including Virat - not noticing she was locked in her room) have inflicted on her. She and the weasel are not going to see Virat again until he brings Sai back home.

On the way back to CN Virat had already contacted his boss DIG and tells him that Sai had left for GC. As it happens the GC ACP has gone away for a short period of time and Virat is asked to cover his absence....Virat is thinking about it......

When he gets back to CN he hears Karishma blurt out everything she knows. He follows his sherni’s lead and does band baja of the Chavans. He says he’s leaving with his Aai.

He packs his bags and tells Aai to get packed - they are both moving to GC and won’t come back until Sai returns with them.

Pakhi offers to pack his bags and come with him...but he refuses....so she says once again you’ve done my bezzathi. (that’s not part of the story but I felt I had to use the forums catchphrase!)

Sai and Usha Maushi have left for GC and are living with Inspector Pavan until Sai can sort out her dads estate and collect his money.

On the way to GC Aai speaks to Virat in my simple language- as the duffer hasn’t understood why he is in this mess....she explains that his biggest problem is making vaada’s and then not fulfilling them.

Aai has now realised her error in thinking that Virat is the mature one and Sai the immature one. They are both immature 😏. She asks him when is he going to break the best friend vaada as he is letting 3 people down himself, Sai and Virat.. plus it’s immoral 🤬I f he wants Sai then he needs to be clear that there is no vaada to Patraaleekha (think holi Kaku calling)🤣

Can’t think of next stage yet....I’m too 😡

That’s it for now.....my very first attempt with no grammar checking and nowhere near the fantastic OSs I read here....So apologies 😊

Nice one yaar. Thank you 😆.

I like how Aai and Virat and travelling and Aai's talks to him .

Karishma kuch toh kaam aayi.

Beizzati dialogue comes hand in hand when Pakhi's name is taken I guess 🙈