Separation - Let's rewrite it ❤ - Page 5

Originally posted by: laksh

Arey wah. Waise agar holi ke baad saaf suthra raja babu ne kuch kiya ki nahi 🤣

That was the first doubt I got because the whole forum thought that they might have done it 😉

Chalo from the MU, that you have created, it doesn't look like it happened.

Nasha hi nasha hai 🤣

Sai ka dil thod diya 😒 💔

Accha plot hai 👍🏼

Waise, you can add more such plots.

Kuch Kiya bhi tho Nasha Mei Kiya hoga, kisko patha😳

Waise I edited and added more in that story, plz have a look

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Mera bhi.

Chalo good night dear❤

Good night ⭐️

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Kuch Kiya bhi tho Nasha Mei Kiya hoga, kisko patha😳

Waise I edited and added more in that story, plz have a look

Just read, kya baat hai. Too good ❤. Ladakh mein mile donon

Originally posted by: sukri

After Pakhi confronts Virat about going close to Sai during Holi, she realizes Virat might end up moving on with Sai and only way for her to stop it is if she manipulates Sai.

So she talks to Sai in the evening where she tells Sai that she was right about Pakhi having feelings for Virat and Virat hiding it in his heart.

Also that he gave her vaada of not having any other girl in his heart coz he loved Pakhi. She will be like tum se kuch chupa nahi hain Sai, tumne khud dheka hain jis din se Virat tumse shadi karke aaya hai, how it has been.

You might think that he is coming close to you, but you cannot assume Virat's majboori as mohobaat for you Sai. Tells her their story is also like Devi and Pulkit and if Sai doesn't help she will become crazy like Devi and Virat like Pulkit will never be able to truly love anyone in future.

She fake apologizes to Sai for all her past behavior.

Asks Sai to help them unite them by going away from Virat by either forcing him or freeing him from her dad's vaada. Unless he is free from your zimmedaari towards you, he will never come back to me. He is just waiting for you to become doctor and then we will unite eventually, but why should we go thru this pain.

Sai will then do anything in her power to move from Chavan Nivas and file for divorce (thinking she is helping Virat) without realizing she is actually hurting him.

You got best trigger point of sai, pulkit Devi example... Agar Sach Mei ise huva, sai will go to any extend to unite virat and pakhi... Awesome plot

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

You got best trigger point of sai, pulkit Devi example... Agar Sach Mei ise huva, sai will go to any extend to unite virat and pakhi... Awesome plot

I know, she is brilliant 😆.

Even though I hate separation trope but if it is inevitable I would like it have happened for more sound reason and not in this haphazard manner and almost making the ML villain.

Sai discovers a sinister plot by kaku to keep devyani mentally unstable to keep her under control for some inheritance issues. It would have then fully justified the drastic step she took, leading to her ouster from CN. Since this track is necessary to make Virat shed his blind trust in his family, he should be present during the whole drama but he could offer to provide accommodation to Sai in some pg or hostel which sai would flatly refuse and goes back to GC.

After Virat unearths the truth, he goes to GC to placate sai and bring her back but she remains adamant and refuses to come back with him. Virat, instead of returning back crestfallen and becoming devdas, will camp in GC, determined to win over Sai no matter what.

Here is the twist, vitthal mane becomes aware of the presence of both Sai and Virat, and swears to punish them. During the escape from GC, Virat and Sai bury their hatchet, realising how deeply they care about each other.

Sounds cliched but it's much better than what is being shown. Do share your opinion.

Originally posted by: laksh

Sorry I missed you all. If you are interested.

Thank you for tagging.... Even though I wonder how 😂😂

Can't think of anything as of now... Will get back when smthin clicks

What an interesting topic. 👏

Well I always had an idea about this wedding track which I am using for my FF so can't reveal it here . 😆

Now if I have to think something different then I don't know my brain is off today. 🤣

All I want if Virat and Sai team up and fool the Chavans with fake fights and fake separation. This way not only the reality of the Chavans will come out but also he will see what a cheaproo Didi is. 🤣

Ok balwaas khatam, I will write something good if my dimaag works again.

Originally posted by: Lostin90s

Even though I hate separation trope but if it is inevitable I would like it have happened for more sound reason and not in this haphazard manner and almost making the ML villain.

Sai discovers a sinister plot by kaku to keep devyani mentally unstable to keep her under control for some inheritance issues. It would have then fully justified the drastic step she took, leading to her ouster from CN. Since this track is necessary to make Virat shed his blind trust in his family, he should be present during the whole drama but he could offer to provide accommodation to Sai in some pg or hostel which sai would flatly refuse and goes back to GC.

After Virat unearths the truth, he goes to GC to placate sai and bring her back but she remains adamant and refuses to come back with him. Virat, instead of returning back crestfallen and becoming devdas, will camp in GC, determined to win over Sai no matter what.

Here is the twist, vitthal mane becomes aware of the presence of both Sai and Virat, and swears to punish them. During the escape from GC, Virat and Sai bury their hatchet, realising how deeply they care about each other.

Sounds cliched but it's much better than what is being shown. Do share your opinion.

Wow!! Too good, I love it.

Makes sense for Sai to help Devi. Wow 👏👏

And the GC track, camping in GC, sounds too good. I love the twist at the end. Sounds really nice.

Wish they had come up with something like this. I didn't find it cliche. It sounds logical and dreamy too 😆.

Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion

What an interesting topic. 👏

Well I always had an idea about this wedding track which I am using for my FF so can't reveal it here . 😆

Now if I have to think something different then I don't know my brain is off today. 🤣

All I want if Virat and Sai team up and fool the Chavans with fake fights and fake separation. This way not only the reality of the Chavans will come out but also he will see what a cheaproo Didi is. 🤣

Ok balwaas khatam, I will write something good if my dimaag works again.

Fake fights and fake separation would be fun to watch . Oh wow, Didi is exposed too, that's nice 👏.

Wedding track in FF, please tag me when you write one.