FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 20

Originally posted by: thebluewhale

P.S. this story Rreminds me a lil bit of If Tomorrow by Sidney Sheldon.

The cat and mouse games.

A suave gutsy yet naive heroine.

Hmmm. Will have to check it out. I don't read much contemporary fiction but Sisters often recommend books to me that they believe I'll enjoy.

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Ah, I finally caught up with this fic and I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter. The descriptions are vivid and I love the attention to detail. Though I read all the chapters together, I still felt they ended too soon. Greedy, I know. 🤣

I love the way you've crafted your characters. Such a relief that Pallavi is not all mahanta and no self respect here. Enjoying her cat and mouse chase with Raghav and how she's leaving him affected after each encounter. As to Raghav, the man has all the aura and charisma needed of Raghav Rao with that perfect touch of gentlemanly charm. Can't wait to read how the story next unfolds. Twice now, Pallavi was the one who sought him out. I'm guessing it will be Raghav now. Thank you for writing this wonderful story!

Thank you, Sister, for your comment. I noticed you were the first to view my first episode :-) Woohoo!

Yes, I like my men to be bad with a bit of "gentlemanly charm"---not too charming! And never sweet---except to children.

Pallavi is different in my tale from Pallavi in MHRW in part because I like sassy heroines---but also because in my tale she is wounded. Mandhar tricked, used and stole from her. And this makes her interesting to me as a heroine. Every woman knows that such an experience changes us forever. Her innocence is gone.

Originally posted by: Foreversonam21

Hi

I haven't seen the show, yet. You make me want to though. Just so that Pallavi has a face... I'm falling for the spark in her personality.

Thank you for such an intriguing story. So glad that you are brandishing your magic wand again.

Regards

Lovely to see you here, Sister. I hope you continue to read -PALLAVI-. As a heroine, she reminds me of Khushi in the sense that she cannot be defeated even by a man who has more power more resources. Yet, her weakness is her love for her family.

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Fantastic! So pallavi played a game and raghav didn’t recognised her. I bet he is intrigued. Looking forward to read their next meeting.

Thank you for regular updates.

Thank you, Sister. Pleased you are enjoying it. Their next meeting? Ah! Wait and see, dear.

I never comment or post on this forum but, I've been following this story and I felt obliged to compliment your writing skills. You're so talented and have an uncanny ability to keep a reader hooked. I'm so invested in this version of Raghav and Pallavi and how you've woven their characters. Love that you update so regularly. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Originally posted by: protagonistA

I never comment or post on this forum but, I've been following this story and I felt obliged to compliment your writing skills. You're so talented and have an uncanny ability to keep a reader hooked. I'm so invested in this version of Raghav and Pallavi and how you've woven their characters. Love that you update so regularly. Looking forward to the next chapter!

What a kind message! Thank you, Sister.

I hope you continue to follow the tale---and pop in here now and then to share your thoughts.

Silent or active, every reader is a gift to a writer. But feedback inspires and motivates me.

This storyline got me so hooked that I realized that I was really unhappy that I have to wait another day for the update.

I was reading the story and it created a flow in my mind which got disrupted as soon as the story cam to an end.

and the way you have potrayed your character is beautiful and strong and I can't wait for another update on it

So pleaseee update sooon

Am liking this ... it's exciting.

Wonder if Rao will recognize pallavi when she will be in her true form...

Wonder where their next meet wud be...

So finally raghav got his ring back

But the fact that she returned the ring will drive him more crazy ,😎

Will start unvestigate about her more

It is getting more exciting 👍🏼

Originally posted by: NESRIA

So finally raghav got his ring back

But the fact that she returned the ring will drive him more crazy ,😎

Will start unvestigate about her more

It is getting more exciting 👍🏼

Ah! That's such a good point, Sister.

That she returned the ring of her own accord will drive him crazy. And that too---entering his own home and doing so right under his nose. After providing him with a brilliant idea for free. He owes her!