FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 17

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Ah, I finally caught up with this fic and I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter. The descriptions are vivid and I love the attention to detail. Though I read all the chapters together, I still felt they ended too soon. Greedy, I know. 🤣

I love the way you've crafted your characters. Such a relief that Pallavi is not all mahanta and no self respect here. Enjoying her cat and mouse chase with Raghav and how she's leaving him affected after each encounter. As to Raghav, the man has all the aura and charisma needed of Raghav Rao with that perfect touch of gentlemanly charm. Can't wait to read how the story next unfolds. Twice now, Pallavi was the one who sought him out. I'm guessing it will be Raghav now. Thank you for writing this wonderful story!

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I haven't seen the show, yet. You make me want to though. Just so that Pallavi has a face... I'm falling for the spark in her personality.

Thank you for such an intriguing story. So glad that you are brandishing your magic wand again.

Regards

Fantastic! So pallavi played a game and raghav didn’t recognised her. I bet he is intrigued. Looking forward to read their next meeting.

Thank you for regular updates.

Another amazing update from you. The story is heading well. I am curious to know what happens next. Good one dear Jane,👍🏼

Wait..I thought Raghav knew..shucks..this story is so unexpected!

But loving the mystery. What happens next?

Will he send it for fingerprint check? Will he figure out who she is?

How will this get cleared? Ughhhh..cannot wait!

Thanks for this story 👍🏼

“Tell me—which turned you on more? Pretending to be a whore or pretending to be demure?”

Hahahaha. Let the games begin :D

Whore or demure Pallavi got the better of him in both cases and he is left baffled turned on and challenged.

“A school? That’s a brilliant idea,” Farhad said. “Students can study from actual artifacts.”

“I agree. It is brilliant.” Raghav gave a mysterious smile, adding, “It’s your cousin’s idea.”

LOL. The first time she got herself a job offer stole from him and the second time she inputted into his business plans and returned what was stolen. All done in a classy suave fashion.

Thats a hell of a heroine.

P.S. this story Rreminds me a lil bit of If Tomorrow by Sidney Sheldon.

The cat and mouse games.

A suave gutsy yet naive heroine.

Ohh, the games we play😱.

I have now words to describe🤐. I really like how perfectly your characters are shaping. How Farhad understands and in one statement clearly states that there's something wrong. The way Raghav converses with Pallavi.

The suspense just builds & builds👏

Can't wait for further updates.

Today's a festive holiday in most parts of India so this was a great addition to my LockedDown routine❤️

Loving the story so far. I also thought Raghav knew she was Pallavi. I’m really enjoying the story, can’t wait for the next update!