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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

His emotions and yearning for love and peace were neatly presented. 

Though the story had sad ending, loved the concept very much.

Would love to read another ending ( like happy, intense ) of this os

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42


Thanks

:)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Oh my god.


He find comfort in her arms..


N died in her arms.


Oh tumne toh emotional kar diya😭


Plz isaka happy version bhi likho..


Thanks for pm


Sorry for late reply


Happy version bahut jald likhenge..

:)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Mythreaye

His emotions and yearning for love and peace were neatly presented. 

Though the story had sad ending, loved the concept very much.

Would love to read another ending ( like happy, intense ) of this os


Thank You so much.

Would definitely try a happy ending. 

:)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Wow! such emotional OS! Glad that arjun found his comfort finally! 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: scorp1AN

Wow! such emotional OS! Glad that arjun found his comfort finally! 


Happy that you liked it 

:)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

So dad n emotional os

Like it

Do wrtie more on Ariya

Waiting for new one

Iss bar happy ending hona chahiye😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

So dad n emotional os

Like it

Do wrtie more on Ariya

Waiting for new one

Iss bar happy ending hona chahiye😳


Will try to write another OS soon. 

Currently caught up with my book, 'Jealousy and Revenge.'

You can read that.

:)