Purvir FF-. moh moh k DHAAGE✨✨|INDEX updated| - Page 17

Originally posted by: PriAmAddiction

piyaaa 🤗

phle mai apna wala khatam karlun wrna mai bhooljaungi 🤣

Karo Karo jaldi Karo 🤣 me to khud isko jaldi se jaldi nipta rhi hu bas ab ek last part bacha he Usko Karke chhutti🤣

waise bhi kaam toh hora nhi mujhse ek sonchti hun ek hojata hai.. 😆

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Aapko jab mann kare padh Lena koi jaldi nhi he 🤗

Sure Piyaaa😳

Mujhe 2-3 baar padna pada comment karne k liye

The mention of certain words(responsibility, rulebook,etc) in Vir's dialogue cracked me up.Y m har baar bolti hu,tu eng words use karti h r mujhe bahut hasi aati h🤣

U mentioned about patriarchal society & also I felt a bit of feministic approach in your writing.Well I'll not comment on that bcoz I've a completely differet stand regarding these topics.So,forget about it.

The visualisation of the surroundings is top notch.It is fantabulous.👏👌👏👌

Portrayal of Purvi's emotions & hesitation is again brilliant.👏

Most apt song u have used👏👏.Sanskrit language is really close to my heart.❤️.Mention of Maa Ganga touched me.❤️

Ur writing is getting better day by day piyu.😎

PS: Garbhagrih is place where murti's are kept and only pujaris are allowed to go there.Hum log nahi ja sakte h waha pe.Temple hall ko garbhagrih nahi bolte h.

Kisi ne itna bada comment nahi kiya hoga jitna maine kiya h..Mera kuch nahi ho sakta..🤣🤣Sorry Piyu😔😔

Woww yrr piya, so beautiful and so well written.🤩❤️The description of mandir and all the other surroundings was fabulously depicted by you💯🔥

Viru ka dialogue & purvi's hesitation👏so well written👍🏼

This part was soo filled with positivity & bliss. Kudos!❤️👏

Originally posted by: sargamif

Mujhe 2-3 baar padna pada comment karne k liye

Itti mehnat ki Aapne 🤗

Arre Yaar Di panga yo he ki MERI Hindi kharab ho gyi he (8th k baad padhi nhi na 🙄) to mereko Kuch words strike nhi karte or agar Karte he to vo thoda zyada hi shudh Hindi ho jaata he so I sometimes avoid it par abse likh Diya karungi 😆

vaise yha bhi Banda self obsession nhi bhula 🤣#chadvir😎

Mai mard virodhi Hu 🤣🤣🤣🤣 nhi on a serious note aisa nhi he mazaak Kiya he mene

Yeh or vo Pur Ka instigation part hi tha Jiske liye me telepathy jaap Kar rhi thi 😆

Arre bas Di hazam nhi ho rhi itti taarif 🙈🙈🤣🤣

Achha ?😳 Mene to padha tha Kahi ki temple Ka main hall ko Bolte he 🤦 murti to rakhte he vha yeh pata tha koi na thanks for additional info 😊

Par thanku X infinity 🤗💖💖💖💖💖💖

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

arre maar daala 🙈🤣 itta bada comment Aapne to aaj record tod Diya Di 🤣

Par thanku X infinity 🤗💖💖💖💖💖💖

Acha thik h next time se chotu sa karungi comment😆

Originally posted by: Anahita02134143

Woww yrr piya, so beautiful and so well written.🤩❤️The description of mandir and all the other surroundings was fabulously depicted by you💯🔥

Viru ka dialogue & purvi's hesitation👏so well written👍🏼

This part was soo filled with positivity & bliss. Kudos!❤️👏

This FF has actually been a blessing for me Mene aaj tak aisa Kuch nhi Kiya life me 🙈 upar se bahut likhvaya he isne vo bhi mere Jaise ko who hates writing 🤣

Originally posted by: sargamif

Acha thik h next time se chotu sa karungi comment😆

Mene itta Saara Likha aap bhi comment me likh likh Kar haath dard Karo apne🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Mene likh to Diya he patani Kaisa lagega aap sabko 🤔

First time Kuch alag try Kiya he 😳

Kaisa kya yaar ...bhot achha hai

Ek divine feeling ayi ise padhke 😌

In fact I want to appreciate the social message you conveyed through this ...ghar ki laxmi ki puja pehle kro, fir mandir ki devi pujo!! Kudos 👏👏

Akhir Vir ne pure gaanv ke samne Purvi ko accept kia Purvi vps 🤩🤩

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Aapko tag Karna bhul gyi 😳

Supriya u aren't tagable

Ye issue mere username ke saath kyo hota hai😭

I was waiting for ur update... Upar se aj practical tha to pura din kafi busy aur tiring tha

Raat me time milte hi I opened forum 🤣 aur dekha to tmhara update .... A treat 😁🤩