Raghvi OS : The Twin Trouble - Page 5

Beautiful OS.

Loved it. You have a wonderful way with words and an amazingly creative outlook. Loved it.

It was so so so good...I really liked the whole concept and kudos to the parenting...everyone was exactly the same as expected

Originally posted by: __VIHU

His boys, despite being so similar physically, were totally opposite. Everybody thought so. Not him. They weren't opposites, just complementary. Both of them balanced each other's virtues and vices perfectly. Ryan's act of kindness and Ian's sense of fairplay assured him that as parents, he and Pallavi, had done a decent job.

"Did they apologised?" he inquired.

"I made sure, they do." pride was evident in his voice.

Raghav grinned but the expression evaporated as soon as it came.

"Did I made a mistake, dad?" he asked.

NO, was his answer. But voicing it out loud might've relayed a wrong message.

"Fighting is never good Ian. But I won't fault you for standing up for your brother" he ruffled his hair lovingly.

The child looked up at him with eyes shining with unshed tears.

"Do you want me to do something about that suspension" Raghav asked eyeing the note clutched in his good hand.

"No... It's fine. That's the least I can do to show some mercy on old Ms Das's poor nerves"

That earned him a chuckle from his father.

"I made sure, they do"

That line is full of RR's attitude 😎

re read this for the umpteenth time ,can't get over the beautiful story telling ! Loved RR as a father of the boys, wondering how he would be with a little girl ? awaiting ur next eagerly

Originally posted by: gata

re read this for the umpteenth time ,can't get over the beautiful story telling ! Loved RR as a father of the boys, wondering how he would be with a little girl ? awaiting ur next eagerly

That’s a compliment of highest order dear...🤗

You know fathers are really good with daughters actually... I thought it’d be quite challenging for him to have a son who’s so like him... And how he manage to keep his son from making the mistakes he did as a kid...

I’m literally mad about writing these days... let’s see if I write about a baby girl...

Originally posted by: bubblesort

So lovely OS ❤️

Hello... long time..

I’m glad you read it and liked despite not being so active in this forum...

It really warmed my heart❤️

Thank you🤗

your RR in all ur OSs is love ❤️ , yes as a father of twin boys , husband of Pallavi and son of amma he is IRRESISTABLE.

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Hello... long time..

I’m glad you read it and liked despite not being so active in this forum...

It really warmed my heart❤️

Thank you🤗

Hello🤗

Ya ,I am not that active in this forum , but do visit time to time and when I see it's your OS , I just have to read it because I know I gonna like it😃

❤️

Omg

I’m in love with this OS ❤️

Re-read for 5th time in a day

Will keep reading it again

Raghav as family man

Pallu as mom ✨

You kept their characters intact 💯

I’m sure they’ll have different parenting skills but they’re doing so well ✨❤️

In Love with the twins and this family

No words ✨

Ian is really like Raghav and Ryan is ❤️ Like Pallu

But yeah- it would be great to see how Raghav will behave if he ever has a princess

She’ll have him tied around her lil fingers - I swear ✨

I’m just swooning at this OS ✨❤️

I loved it 💯

Write more 😳❤️

This is such a brilliant take on how RaghVi would act as parents 👍🏼

Awesome 👏