SaiRat OS - Berang zindagi aur rangeen yaadein

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just penned it down as if I was scribbling 🙈🙈.

Hope you guys like it.

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Jo bhi aaya likh diya, hope you guys like it.

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Hope you guys like it. 

Posted: 3 years ago
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Heartbreaking....💔😢😞

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Another OS. Hope you guys like it. 

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Awww seriously...this is beautiful....bechara viru😭

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It's very nice, you showed virat emotions very nicely and beautifully... It's going to be heartbreaking and your os is trail for that 

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What a beautiful OS. 🥺 


What I love the most about your writing is the dialogues. 👏 Loved everything Virat said to himself. Could feel his pain. 😭 The way he touched her sarees and looked at the chudyaan. 😔 The guy is missing him so much. Loved how he wanted to be the most important person in her life, even more than her Aaba. ❤️ And Sai who couldn't leave everything behind her. She kept a part of him with her. 


Beautiful writing. 👏

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Originally posted by: tinafans

Awww seriously...this is beautiful....bechara viru😭


Haan yaar, woh toh hai

Thank you. Will continue with Sai's soon.