GHKKPM (FanFic: Part 20 updated on page 19 (04/19/21) - Page 10

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

🎉🥳 Happy Birthday Dear...💐🎂🎁🎉 

Loved the update so much...specially Virat’s jealousy and Sai’s confusion for their own feelings...I hope Virat doesn’t have to take help for realising his love and all goes well at home since he decided not to share about Sai’s responsibilities at home...and people at CN accept Sai  at least in your story...❤️ Thank you so much for update...hope you enjoy your day to fullest...🥳


Thank you for the wish! 

Yeah Virat needs a push to realize his feelings but he will come to terms by himself! Sai listened to half conversation and will be confused and push her feelings away for now! Thank you so much! will update the next part soon! 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Sairat hug♥️♥️♥️ yay! Look forward to reading more 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: fathima14

Happy birthday dear, the update was awesome loved it plz continue. 


Thank you for the wish! 


Thanks! and will update the next part soon! 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Happy Birthday dear God bless you with lots of love and happiness🤗

Thanks for the update😇🤗

Sairat hug was the best moment

Hope Samrat bhi Pakhi ke sath move on ho jaye

Aur Virat bhi yeh zimmedari wala gana na gaye warna Sai dur hoti jayegi

And Virat ki jealousy toh dadoo sutto tha🤣

I love it❤

Waiting for next update🤗


Thank you so much for the wish!! 


Zimedari wala gaana bhi band hoga aur Samrat and Pakhi bhi ek honge! Jealous Virat Chavan will keep making appearances hehe! 

Thank you! will update soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice part. It is good that pakhi moved on with samrat. Guess there will be a seen when sairat will come to chavan mansion. Home samrt support  virat


A little bit as he decided to surprise his family members by directly bringing Sai in front of them! 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Happy birthday dear!!!


Samrat is smart and sorted... He wants to be sure before getting another heart break.... Bechara....


For a change, Pakhi so thoda samajdar Dekh kw Acha laga.... I hope she stays that way!!!


Virat is confused with his feels.... Nice.....


Shaurya an sai Ka bond mast hai... I hope they meet often at Nagpur as well...


Continue soon!!!


Happy writing!!!


Thank you for the wish! 


Yeah, he wants to clear everything before the progress so Pakhi doesn't have any regret and he himself will also be saved from another heartbreak. Pakhi is actually mature and sorted at least here hehe! 

Ofc! As Shaurya also stays in Nagpur and even Sai is going there a meeting of the bff is a must! 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update 

Sai and Virat in Nagpur...eagerly waiting 

Please update soon 


Thank you! will update soon! 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 16 - Welcome to Chavan Niwas:

Hello lovely readers, hope you are doing great. Just a reminder, be safe, and take care.

Happy Reading!

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(On their way to Nagpur, Sai questions Virat on how he plans to handle his family. Especially Pakhi, who will question him on why he brought her there.)

Virat: Woh sab mujhe bhi nahin pata. Pata nahin ghar waale kaise react karenge. Lekin mujhe itna zaroor pata hain ki woh mere decision ko samjhagen aur support karenge. 

Sai: Haan, aur waise bhi, main kaunsa wahan zindagi bhar rehne wali hoon? Jaise hi hostel ki formatilities poori hongi, main shift ho jaoungi. Aur ek baat aur karni thi mujhe aap se. Aap jo mere college ke liye pay kar rahe ho na, woh sab main lautana chahati hoon. Jaise hi hi scholarship ke paise ayenge, waise hi. 

Virat: Hmm. 

(The entire drive, both Sai Virat were silent. Sai was thinking of Virat’s words to Pakhi, and why it bothers her so much. Whereas, Virat was not liking the idea of  Sai going to a hostel. Plus, he really did not like the idea of Sai being closer to Shaurya as they are best friends, and in the same city.)

(Change Of Scene)

(The Chavan family is getting ready to welcome Virat, unaware about Sai’s arrival as well. The entire family, except Pakhi and Samrat. However, Virat told them not to tell the family till he reached. As he wanted to explain to them himself. The family hears the car horn, and proceed towards the door to welcome Virat home.)

Bhavani: Itne dino ke baad ghar aa raha hain humara Virat. 

Ashwini: Ho Vahini. Mera Godu. 

Samrat: Aa toh raha hain lekin ek phataka ko le ke. Jissey dekhne ke baad bada dhamaka hone waala hain. 

(Samrat says under his breath, but Pakhi hears him and laughs.)

Karishma: Aap dono has kyun rahe ho?

Pakhi: Kuch nahin. Chalo hum jaa ke welcome karte Virat ka. 

(Virat then enters the house. Sai is closely behind, comes in and stands next to him. The family is confused on who she is, and why she is here. More importantly, why is she with Virat?)

Ninad: Virat, yeh ladki kaun hain tumhare saath?

Virat: Baba, yeh Sai hain. Inspector Kamal Joshi ki beti. 

Shivani: Sai, nice name, not bad Veeru.

(Sai greets everyone, but gets no response back.)

Bhavani: Par yeh yahan kyun aayi hain? Tu ne shaadi toh nahin ki na?

Virat: Arrey nahin nahin Kaku. Sai toh bas kuch hi dino ke liye humare saath rahegi. 

Omi: Kyun?

(Virat narrates the whole story on what happened with Sai in Gadchiroli. How Kamal Sir died while saving Virat, and in his last wish, he asked Virat to take Sai’s responsibility. Since she has no one in this world, so Virat promised Kamal Sir that he will take care of Sai.)

Virat: Sai state topper hain aur doctor ban na iska aur iske Abba ka sapna hain. Isiliye yeh Nagpur aayi hain. Yahan ke best medical college mein admission le ne.

Sai: Aur mein kuch hi dino mein hostel shift ho jaungi 

(Sai cutted Virat, and told them about moving to hostel.)

Bhavani: Pehele andar aao. Hum iske baare mein baad mein baat karte hain. Chal, aa. 

(Ashwini does Virat and Sai’s aarti. Then welcomes them home.)

(Change Of Scene)

(Virat goes to meet Bhavni, Ninad, and Omi in Bhavani’s room)

Virat: Kaku, main jaanta hoon ki aap log naraz honge. Lekin main yeh bhi jaanta hoon ki aap log mujhe samjhenge aur support karenge. 

Ninad: Virat, aisa ek kissa mere saath bhi hua tha jab kisi aur ne mere liye goli khayai thi. Aaj wahi kissa tumhare saath dauharaya gaya. I am proud of you ki tumne apni duty ko chunna. Ek marte hue insaan ki akahri icha ko pura karna humara farz hain. Aur tum wahi kar rahe ho.

Bhavani: Uske Baba ne joh tumhare liye kiya, uska ehsaan toh hum khabhie bhi nahin chukka payenge. Lekin hum se jo bhi ban paayega, hum zaroor karenge. 

(Virat was happy that his family understood his decision.)

Virat: Thank you so much! 

(Change Of Scene)

(Sai is in the guest room settling down, when Ashwini comes with a food tray.)

Sai: Aunty aap? Yahan? Apne takleef kyun ki? Mujhe hi bula liya hota.

Ashwini: Iss mein takleef ki kya baat hain. Mujhe laga tum aaram kar rahi ho gi isiliye maine socha ki khaana tumhare kamre mein le aati hoon. Yeh lo tumhara khaana. Phele kha lo, phir kuch aur karna. Aur yeh kya? Muh kyun utar ke rakha hua hain? Sab theek toh hain na?

(Sai starts crying seeing Ashwini's concern for her. She then tells her that she is missing her Abba, and is feeling weird in this new place.)

Sai: Mujhe Abba ki bahut yaad aa rahi hain. Phir main iss tarha itne bade ghar mein kabhie bhi nahin rahi hoon. Toh thoda ajeeb lag raha hain. 

(Ashwini hugs Sai to console her.)

Ashwini: Bala, roh mat. Tumhare Abba bhi nahin chahate honge. Ki unki beti ki aankhon mein aasun aayenge. Aur rahi baat is ghar ki, toh koi tumhe kha nahin jaayega. Iss ghar ko apna hi ghar samjho. Tum yahan pe aaram se raho. Aur haan, ek aur baat. Tum chaho toh mujhe Aai keh kar bula sakti ho, mujhe acha lagega. 

Sai: Aapko pata hain, meri Aai mujhe janam dete waqt hi hummey chod ke chali gayi thi.

(Ashwini did not know this, and feels guilty of reminding her of her mother.)

Ashwini: Toh main hoon na? Tum mujhe Aai bula sakti ho. Pata hain? Main bhi na hamesha se ek beti chahati thi. Tumahri jaisi hi pyaari si. Mere Virat pe mujhe bahut garv hain ki uss ne tumahri zimedari li, aur tumhe yahan laya. Isi bahane usne mujhe ek pyaari si beti mil gayi. 

(Sai hugs Ashwini, who then later feeds Sai with her own hands.)

(Change Of Scene)

(Virat visits Sai’s room to check if she is fine, or if she needs anything. However, when he sees her sleeping peacefully, he decides not to disturb her. Instead, he adores her from far away. As he was leaving, he bumps into Ashwini.)

Ashwini: Tu yahan kya kar raha hain?

Virat: Woh, Aai, main toh yeh dekhne aaya tha ki Sai ko kuch chahaiye toh nahin. Aur phir kal uska admission bhi hain na toh laga ki woh pareshaan ho rahi ho gi isiliye dekhne aa gaya. 

Ashwini: Badi hi pyaari bachi hain. Aur uss ne sab kaam kar liya hain apna admission related. Acha hua tu issey yahan le ke aaya. Hum sab ke saat rahegi toh khush rahegi. 

Virat: Ho Aai. Bas ab uska kal admission ho jaaye toh phir sab theek ho jaayega. 

(Virat smiles as Ashwini continues to praise Sai, and his decision to take care of Sai.)

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How is the update guys? Please ignore the minor mistakes.

Did the family really accept Virat’s decision?

Will Sai get admission into Nagpur Medical College and hostel accommodations?

Will Virat let her live in a hostel?

Do vote and comment your thoughts.




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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the update. The slow burn is killing me. But loving the story progression ❤️🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the update...finally no drama for Sai entering CN...I like how all accept her in home...and Sai Aai feeling...thank you so much for update...please update the next part soon...👍🏻