Judaaii ff part 4 updated on page 11 - Page 11

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

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i hope ur pain will burn in holika dahan.

🥰 thanks 🙏

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Thanku shree

Ab serial me bed per kab Ayenge ye to nhi pata🤣.

But purvir parts bahut dil se likha hai maine❤️

I have such high hopes from Saba ki kya bataoon..🤣🤪

@bold - it shows, Pallavi. ❤️

Sigh ! how emotionally vested we all are in Purvir😆

Okay di..So I finally read the 4th part.Hamesha ki tarah dil ko chu lene wala part tha but 3 se kam(3 mere liye hamesha best rahega..Pata nahi kyu🤣)

Kidnapping part itna chotu sa kyu likha😒

Geeli mitti wala dialogue was bang on👏

Vir ne finally sakshi naam ke deewar hata hi di..Chalo ek to acha kaam kiya bawre ne😆🤣

End k hamare liye chod diya sochne ko..

Overall..Acha end kiya apne story ka..Vir ka confession was heart touching❤️

Ab aapki next series k wait h

Originally posted by: sargamif

Okay di..So I finally read the 4th part.Hamesha ki tarah dil ko chu lene wala part tha but 3 se kam(3 mere liye hamesha best rahega..Pata nahi kyu🤣)

Kidnapping part itna chotu sa kyu likha😒

Geeli mitti wala dialogue was bang on👏

Vir ne finally sakshi naam ke deewar hata hi di..Chalo ek to acha kaam kiya bawre ne😆🤣

End k hamare liye chod diya sochne ko..

Overall..Acha end kiya apne story ka..Vir ka confession was heart touching❤️

Ab aapki next series k wait h

Chalo. At last tumne padh liya.

Kidnapping part ko chota karna pada. Nahi to purvir scene ki importance khatam ho jati. Gili mitti wala dialogue like karne k liye🤗.only u mentioned it.

Last me purvi sare room me vir se bachte hue bhagti hai. Wo kaisa rha

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Chalo. At last tumne padh liya.

Yaad dilane k liye dhanywaad..Warna m to bhul hi gayi thi😆

Kidnapping part ko chota karna pada. Nahi to purvir scene ki importance khatam ho jati. Gili mitti wala dialogue like karne k liye🤗.only u mentioned it.

Apki writing ko m bareeki se samjhti hu na..😆

Last me purvi sare room me vir se bachte hue bhagti hai. Wo kaisa rha

Sone pe suhaga..😆

Originally posted by: sargamif

Mujhe yaad tha ki tumne abhi tak comment nhi kiya hai. 😆

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Mujhe yaad tha ki tumne abhi tak comment nhi kiya hai. 😆

To ab next series konsi likh rahi ho ap

Originally posted by: sargamif

To ab next series konsi likh rahi ho ap

Abhi tak kuch soch nhi.

Abhi tak to holi ki thakaan thi. Ab sochungi.

Tum apna ff complete karo

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Abhi tak kuch soch nhi.

Abhi tak to holi ki thakaan thi. Ab sochungi.

Tum apna ff complete karo

Arrey kar dungi...🤣🤣

Par pata nahi kab..🤣