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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Are padhte time jo meme aya tha mere dimag to Maine reply kardiya

🙈🙈🙈👉👈

Tooooooo goooood❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part-4

Mukhi purvi ko wapas lane k liye haweli se nikalta hai. Aur raste bhar bhagwan se prartha karta hai

" He bhagwan meri bawri ki raksha karna, use kuch na hone dena. Jab se uski shadi mere saath hui hai, usne sirf dukh aur apmaan hi to saha hai. Mai ek pati hone ka farj bhi thik se na nibha saka. Ek baar mai apni aankhon se dekh lu ki wo thik hai bas. "

Mukhi mill pahunchta hai.

Purvi ko gundo ne baandh kar rakha hai. Mukhi aur purvi ek dusre ko dekhte hai.

Mukhi: jitne paise chahiye le le, per mukhyani ne chod de.

Gunda: paise kise chahiye mukhiya. Hamen to tu chahiye. Teri patni ko jaria banaya, jisse tu hamare kabje me aa sake.

Purvi: please mukhi ji aap yahan se chale jaiye.

Mukhi: mai itna kaayar na ku ki tujhe akela chodkar chala jaun. Jaunga to tujhe saath lekar.

Mukhi aur gundon me haathapai hoti hai. Mukhi ko bhi chot lagti hai.

Kisi tarah mukhi purvi ko bachane me kaamyaab ho jata hai. Dono gundon se bachte hue jagal me bane ek ghar me chup jate hai. Gunde bhi unka picha karte hai.

Purvi mukhi ka ghav dekhkar pareshan hoti hai aur apne dupatte ko fadkar mukhi ki patti karti hai.

Purvi: sab hamari galati hai. Hamari wajah se aapko yahan aana pada. Hamen khud per bahut gussa aa rha hai.

Mukhi: Shhhhh... Shaant ho ja bawri. Ab sab thik hai. Bahut raat ho gai hai. Jaise hi bahar thodi roshni hogi hum yahan se nikal jayenge.

Purvi : thik hai.

Purvi bahut thaki hui hai, iske bawjood bahut sunder lag rahi hai. Mukhi bas use hi dekhe ja raha hai.

Purvi: aise kya dekh rahe hai.

Mukhi: dekh raha hu hamara rishta kaise juda tha aur aaj kya hai?

Purvi mukhi ki baaton me kho jati hai.

Purvi: kya hai hamara rishta?

Mukhi: hamara rishta ek geeli mitti ki tarah tha per tune apne pyar, vishwaash aur samjhdari se ise ek suder aakaar de diya.

Galati meri hai. Pahle maine hum dono k beech sakshi ki deewar khari rakhi. Aur aaj khud sakshi hamare beech hai.

Purvi sochti hai ye mukhi ji kya bol rahe hai kahin inhe humse pyar.....

Mukhi: ye meri hi galati hai ki maine hum dono k beech itni jagah chodi ki koi teesra hamare beech aa sake.

Purvi: sakshi ji teesri nhi hai, balki hum....

Mukhi: aaj manne mat tok. Ek baar tujh se apne dil ki sari baat kah loon. Phir tera jo bhi faisla ho, manne manjoor hoga.

Haa, lekin sakshi k aane se ek baat thik hui ki mujhe teri ahmiyat pata chali.

Mai jinda to tha, per jeena bhul gya tha.

Mukhi ki baatein purvi k dil ko chu rahi thi, use kamjor kar rahi thi.

Purvi: aap jo hamari itni tareef kar rahe hai, kya hum sachmuch us laayak hai?

Mukhi: to kya tujhe meri baat per bharosa nhi.?

Purvi: nhi(muskurate hue)

Mukhi purvi ka haath apne sine per le jata hai

" Ib bata"

Purvi apna sir mukhi k sine se laga leti hai. Mukhi bhi purvi ko apne aagosh me bhar leta hai.

Mukhi: aaj mai mere dil k haathon haar gaya, per ye hamare rishte ki jeet hai.

Tabhi gundon ne aakar dono ko bandi bana liya.

Aur wahan sakshi aati hai. Sakshi ko dekhkar purvi aur vir shock ho jate hai.

Mukhi: tu kaun hai? Sakshi na ho sakti tu.

Sakshi: to maine kab kaha ki mai sakshi hu. Mai to uski humskakal hu aur isi baat ka faida maine uthaya. Maine bahut koshish ki ki tujhe apni taraf kar sakun jisse apni zindagi aaram se haweli me sakshi bankar bita du. Per is purvi ki wajah se tune kabhi mujhpe dhyan nhi diya. Per ab jab tujhe sab pata hai to kaam ki baat karte hai. Ye property k papers hai, inper sign kar de. Phir tumdono ko saath me uper bhej dungi. Tabhi wahan Police aa jati hai aur sabko arrest kar leti hai.

Mukhi: thanku inspector saab.

Inspector: mukhi ji aapne hamen call karke mill ka pata bataya tabhi to hum yahan aa paye.

Police sabko wahan se le jati hai.

Mukhi aur purvi ek dusre ko safe dekhkar khus hote hai aur gale milte hai. Dono haweli pahunchte hai.

Aadhi raat ja chuki thi.

Room me.

Pahli baar dono me ek jhijhak hai. Purvi room me aati hai aur almari se apna bistar nikalne lagti hai. mukhi ander aata hai aur room ka darwaja band kar deta hai aur purvi ki taraf use apna banane k liye apna pahla kadam badhata hai. Purvi mukhi ki aahat se ghabra wahan se chali jati hai aur pani pine ka bahana karti hai. Bechara mukhi phir uske piche jata hai aur uske kandhe per haath rakhne wala hota hai tabhi purvi wahan se hatkar khidki khol deti hai aur wahin khadi ho jati hai. Mukhi ki purvi k paas aakar khada ho jata hai. Dono chor nazar se ek dusre ko dekhte hai. Mukhi purvi ke baalon ko thik karne k liye apne haath badhata hai to purvi hat jati hai aur jakar apna bister zameen per lagane lagti hai.

Mukhi: mai kya kah raha tha, tune online shopping karke kitna accha gadda mangaya hai. Niche sote sote teri bhi peeth me dard ho jaiga. Aaj se tu bhi uper hi sona.

Aur purvi k haath se takiya chinkar bed per rakh deta hai.

Purvi: matlab ab hum.....

Mukhi apne dono haathon ko piche karte hue: tu sach much baawri hai ya mere saamne nautanki karti hai bawri banne ki.

Purvi k chehre per bheene si muskaan hai.

Mukhi purvi k bilkul saamne aakar khada ho gya. Wo itne kareeb hai Jaise do nhi ek ho.

Mukhi: aaj k baad tu hamesha k liye meri hogi, sirf meri.

Aur purvi k hothon ko chumbe k liye apna sir niche jhukata hai.

Purvi bhi mukhi k pyar ki chandani me bheegne ko taiyaar shram se apni aankhen band kar leti hai.


❤💞💓💖❤

THE END


Guys maine kidnapping scene ko chota se chota karne ki koshish ki hai aur apna pura focus purvir scene per diya hai.

Hope u all like it.

Waiting for ur precious comments.


Happy weekend. ❤

Edited by pallavi_p28 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

👏👏👏

Kafi acha end tha

Lol to saki imposter nikli chudail🤬

To kidnapping bhi isne karwaye thi bhut badiya

Kash itna simply show me bhi ho 😭

Par ap to nostradamus hai na to ho bhi sakta hai who knows😏😏😏😏


Pallavi ❤❤❤ age ese aur likhte rehna

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Posted: 4 years ago
#84

Superb Kidnapping bhi jaldi khatam hua aur Sakshi ka drama bhi kaash show mein bhi aaisa ho!!


Mukhi asking her if she is really bawari or does nautanki 🤣


Lovely one Pallavi🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#85

Wow kidnapping and confession bhi ho gaya...


Saki is fake ...Kaash show me bhi aisa ho....😆


Weekend me kuch to mila purvir ka...


Loved it yaar

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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

Pehle mujhe laga tha dono hut me mangal karenge 🤣🤣par gunde aa gye

Par bohoooooootttt Sundar Likha he Di especially Purvir part


Phirse jaldi likhna

milte he ek Naye FF pe 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Woww bhot badiya Pallavi!👍

Pura package thi aapki ye story.👏 Purvir scenes were soo nice & thank God ki wo saki imposter hi nikli.😛😂

All in all your ff was super awesome. Keep writing.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#88

You update is complete package yaar..This is just so perfect..👍🏼

And Virendra's confession..So dreamy it was❤️..

Sakshi is an impostor..Please hamare show mein bhi aisa ho..😒

Love your Style of writing..Keep writing more😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89

Pallavi🤗

Thankyou for another fabulous update. ❤️

Accha hua woh mataji evil thi and dafa ho gayee hamare Purvir ki zindagi se.


I love this VPS, pursuing his heart and telling what he felt to Purvi. Serial mein kab they will start sleeping on the same bed. Maybe with pillows between them in the beginning like they always show.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Nezuko

👏👏👏

Kafi acha end tha

Lol to saki imposter nikli chudail🤬

To kidnapping bhi isne karwaye thi bhut badiya

Kash itna simply show me bhi ho 😭

Par ap to nostradamus hai na to ho bhi sakta hai who knows😏😏😏😏


Pallavi ❤❤❤ age ese aur likhte rehna

Today was a hectic day.

Bahut jaldi me likha hai maine.

But serial me kya hoga🤷‍♀️

Thanku for comments❤️

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