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chavi12345 thumbnail
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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice part. Loved devi sai bond. Pakhi so irritating. Hate her

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the chapter for Devi tai... she was giving back Pakhi most subtle way...!!! I don’t understand Virat ... on one side worried for Sai and other side soft corner for Pakhi... !!! He is confused...thank you so much for update... please update the next part soon...👍🏻

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Posted: 3 years ago

Woh aaphi ke doosre post pe thi,kuch zyaada hi logic logic mein chali gayi thi,isiliye late hogayi. Mujhe kabhi kabhi mood banana padta hain.😆

Commenting is a complicated process,especially to an amazing writer🤗😉

So,shuru hui cute insaan-1(devi tai) ,cute insaan-2 (Sai) aur confused zimmedar insaan (Viru-haa toh cute hai,par handsome zyaada hai).

Lo,devi tai Sai ko dikha rahi hai hamara rugby kitne acche se football khelta hai🤣Waise kaash mein bhi jhaak paati usme. 

Devi tai is sho cute,cute. Mujhe nursery waala rhymes yaad aagaya,chubby cheeks,dimple chin waala.

Ohhhh,interesting information,so Viru was once a Radha to a Krishna,hmmmm,explains, toh kya uska badla utaarne ke liye yeh kishan kanhaiya ban raha hai,kis kis se pyaar karu nahi,har kisi se pyaar karu hogaya hai. Arre bhai,pyaar kar na,roka kisne hai, bano kishan kanhaiya,tips bhi doongi,par pyaar zara dekh ke kar,aisa pyaar nahi hota hai,woh chaar baar phisli nahi,yeh phisal gaya. Samjho,samjho kuch.

Par sahi direction mein bhaag raha hai yeh,Sai ke peeche,bhaag hi rahi the.....,bhaag hi rahe the....,mein OTT romance mein jaa rahi thi,.....has rahi thi,...padhte...padhte....padhte.....par lo aagayi ,mere sapno ki dushman ,didi.

Didi,aap sab se irritate hote hain,mein aapse irritate hoti hun. Mera OTT tod diya aapne,che,aur kya kare,jhelna hi padega.  Ok ,dushmani apart,I liked how she behaved with devi tai,chalo abhi bhi,thoda bahut "sajjan nakli premi" hai, mein khush huyi.

Waise Samru,I mish you.Tumhari biwi apne khwaabon mein palne waala nakli aashiq ke room mein bethkar, tumhere album ki beizzati kar rahi hai. Aur tai,I agree with you, arre didi,behen ,kabhi kabhi apna surname yaad rakho,Salunkhe,khe khe nahi,Salunkhe, aisa lag raha hai kisi khatarnak bacche ko A for Apple sikha rahi hu. Sheesh. 

Aur Viru yaha ajeeb nahi laga,theek hai,soft spot hai, zara tyaag yaad aagaya hoga ,Samru bhi kahi na kahi yaad aaya hoga,thoda bahut sympathy mix hogayi hogi,aur yaha aagaye aankhon se aansu. Chalo theek hai,itna OK hai, balcony waghera aaya toh garam hojaati hu. 

Par janaab ko inke mohabbat-e-hinduatan ka amar vaada yaad nahi aaya ,kyunki do pal nahi lage iss Radha rani ko kishan kanhaiya banke raas leela chalu kardi.🤣 kaash mujhe aise photo mil jaaye ,mein sandal wood se frame karwaungi😆

Loved it. It was amazing.❤❤

Continue soon🤗

P.S.: For Sai and Viru-

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana,

Dheere dheere se hai dil ko churana 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Woh aaphi ke doosre post pe thi,kuch zyaada hi logic logic mein chali gayi thi,isiliye late hogayi. Mujhe kabhi kabhi mood banana padta hain.😆

I agree. And sometimes we need proper time to comment or reply. 

Commenting is a complicated process,especially to an amazing writer🤗😉

Nahi, yeh tum kya bol rahi ho? 🤣🤣

Yeh nahi ho sakta. Mummy yeh mujhe daant rahi hai 😉

So,shuru hui cute insaan-1(devi tai) ,cute insaan-2 (Sai) aur confused zimmedar insaan (Viru-haa toh cute hai,par handsome zyaada hai).

Lo,devi tai Sai ko dikha rahi hai hamara rugby kitne acche se football khelta hai🤣Waise kaash mein bhi jhaak paati usme. 

Khaas unke liye hai 😜

Devi tai is sho cute,cute. Mujhe nursery waala rhymes yaad aagaya,chubby cheeks,dimple chin waala.

🤣🤣

Ohhhh,interesting information,so Viru was once a Radha to a Krishna,hmmmm,explains, toh kya uska badla utaarne ke liye yeh kishan kanhaiya ban raha hai,kis kis se pyaar karu nahi,har kisi se pyaar karu hogaya hai. Arre bhai,pyaar kar na,roka kisne hai, bano kishan kanhaiya,tips bhi doongi,par pyaar zara dekh ke kar,aisa pyaar nahi hota hai,woh chaar baar phisli nahi,yeh phisal gaya. Samjho,samjho kuch.

🤣🤣Radha kaise ne jale on Viru would be perfect 😂😂


Par sahi direction mein bhaag raha hai yeh,Sai ke peeche,bhaag hi rahi the.....,bhaag hi rahe the....,mein OTT romance mein jaa rahi thi,.....has rahi thi,...padhte...padhte....padhte.....par lo aagayi ,mere sapno ki dushman ,didi.

This comment cracked me up actually 🤣🤣

Sab mujhe daant rahe honge didi ko laane ke liye 😂😂😂


Didi,aap sab se irritate hote hain,mein aapse irritate hoti hun. Mera OTT tod diya aapne,che,aur kya kare,jhelna hi padega.  Ok ,dushmani apart,I liked how she behaved with devi tai,chalo abhi bhi,thoda bahut "sajjan nakli premi" hai, mein khush huyi.

Hmm, she is tolerable from what I have noticed.


Waise Samru,I mish you.Tumhari biwi apne khwaabon mein palne waala nakli aashiq ke room mein bethkar, tumhere album ki beizzati kar rahi hai. Aur tai,I agree with you, arre didi,behen ,kabhi kabhi apna surname yaad rakho,Salunkhe,khe khe nahi,Salunkhe, aisa lag raha hai kisi khatarnak bacche ko A for Apple sikha rahi hu. Sheesh. 

🤣🤣Maine pehle socha Sai degi jawaab phir yahaan pe Sai ka kholne se accha toh Devi hi hain 😉


Aur Viru yaha ajeeb nahi laga,theek hai,soft spot hai, zara tyaag yaad aagaya hoga ,Samru bhi kahi na kahi yaad aaya hoga,thoda bahut sympathy mix hogayi hogi,aur yaha aagaye aankhon se aansu. Chalo theek hai,itna OK hai, balcony waghera aaya toh garam hojaati hu. 

Jhoola bhul gayi? Last scene tha ek doosre ke saath 🤣

Jaan bhooj ke soft spot rakha hai, banda itni jaldi toh move on nahi kar payega na 😉

Apne past ko yaad karne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai, saamne hi hai usko yaad dilaane ke liye

Woh use past samajh ke ro raha hai aur woh use present aur future samajhke sabko rula rahi hai 


Par janaab ko inke mohabbat-e-hinduatan ka amar vaada yaad nahi aaya ,kyunki do pal nahi lage iss Radha rani ko kishan kanhaiya banke raas leela chalu kardi.🤣 kaash mujhe aise photo mil jaaye ,mein sandal wood se frame karwaungi😆

🤣🤣


Loved it. It was amazing.❤❤

Tell me frankly about things you didn't like. Arey mujhe feedback chahiye baba 😂😂

Continue soon🤗

P.S.: For Sai and Viru-

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana,

Dheere dheere se hai dil ko churana 


Song mast a mast


Thanks for commenting ❤❤

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Posted: 2 years ago

next update, please... loving it :)

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Posted: 2 years ago

Superb update 

ACP Radha 😆

Posted: 2 years ago

Finished the chapters on one go! I just loved the bonding between Sai & Sunny😍🥰. Hope to see them more in future chapters. So many funny moments I had tears reading Sai-Sunny convo and Sai teasing Virat 🤣😂🤣

Please update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: KBBofRCIBC

Amazing story yaar. After reading this chapter I was reminded about how Pakhi was looking at Virat and not samrat the whole wedding😞


It was kind of creepy on another level🤮.  Funny part is none of the family members seemed to notice except Karishma. 

I am enjoying the story and rewatching your version❤️


Thanks 😊

 Just noticing these messages 🙈. I miss some messages when I get numerous notifications. It generally happens whenever I write a lot of posts or when I write stories. Sorry. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Awesome update 

Virat dressed as Radha and Sai teasing him about it was hilarious 🤣 

Devi indirectly taunted Pakhi and I loved it 

Please update soon 

Lol 🤣

Thanks 😊

 Just checking the messages in this thread after I got a notification. Missed many comments. Sorry about that. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice part. Loved devi sai bond. Pakhi so irritating. Hate her

Ha ha ha, she is annoying 🤣

Thanks 😊