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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

Thank you so much...🤗

I too feel really sad when I see Shobhit.


True. We do talk a lot about Shobhit especially about the relationship between him and Rajvee. We all have the same feelings for him.

Rajvee is a business woman so, she has to be a headstrong lady... Since we still don't know or technically have never been shown her exact stand after the accident nor have we been shown her stand regarding Darsh and Shobhit, I decided to take some creative liberty in depicting her scenes.

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I think you described her beautifully, indifference is more painful than expression of anguish.

Edited by 999loveyourself - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Your story made me emotional 😭👍🏼👏

Please writing more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please write Darsh point of view story too🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: dinazz

Gosh! This was angsty and cathartic. But it's amazing nonetheless!

Can you please extend this into an SS or FF where we see how Shobhit and Rajvi mend their relationship!!!! 😊 😊

And maybe a reader insert fanfic with Shobhit x Reader story 😊 😊

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. 😊

Will see if I can extend this or not... Else I might write a fresh one in the future.

I actually wish the makers give us Rajvee's POV too. They have already shown how Shobhit is still feeling guilty and holds himself responsible. And they have shown Rajvee's anger...but it would be nice if they show a pov of Rajvee regarding everything.


Reader insert fanfic? I've never written that... what exactly is it??

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: A.Theepa

Your story made me emotional 😭👍🏼👏

Please writing more

Thanks a lot... am glad you liked the story.

Will definitely try to write more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: A.Theepa

Please write Darsh point of view story too🙂

Well, I can't promise that but yes, I will definitely try... 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow that was amazing👏❤️


This OS i think you can make it into a great story would love to read more from you...😳🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..KpopIsLife..

Wow that was amazing👏❤️


This OS i think you can make it into a great story would love to read more from you...😳🤗

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. ❤️

Will try to write some more in the future. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. ❤️

Will try to write some more in the future. 🤗


Your welcome friend🤗❤️


Yes definitely do write and i will be here to read for sure...😉😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. 😊

Will see if I can extend this or not... Else I might write a fresh one in the future.

I actually wish the makers give us Rajvee's POV too. They have already shown how Shobhit is still feeling guilty and holds himself responsible. And they have shown Rajvee's anger...but it would be nice if they show a pov of Rajvee regarding everything.


Reader insert fanfic? I've never written that... what exactly is it??

Yeah, Rajvi. Isn't she being a bit too hard on Shobhit? It would be good to atleast show some cute mother son moments of their past from Rajvi's POV.

Reader-Insert is a type of fanfiction, almost always written in 2nd person Point of View; the protagonist is always the reader, and is usually paired with one of the real characters of the show or film. (Credits:Google->Fanlore)

Its is quote famous in Hollywood/ other fanfiction. Not really seen in Hindi series or film fanfictions.

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