OS: Kaash... - Page 3

Originally posted by: ..KpopIsLife..

Your welcome friend🤗❤️

Yes definitely do write and i will be here to read for sure...😉😳

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Sure. Agar koi idea mila to zarur likhenge... 😊

Originally posted by: dinazz

Yeah, Rajvi. Isn't she being a bit too hard on Shobhit? It would be good to atleast show some cute mother son moments of their past from Rajvi's POV.

Reader-Insert is a type of fanfiction, almost always written in 2nd person Point of View; the protagonist is always the reader, and is usually paired with one of the real characters of the show or film. (Credits:Google->Fanlore)

Its is quote famous in Hollywood/ other fanfiction. Not really seen in Hindi series or film fanfictions.

Yup. Rajvee is indeed being a bit too harsh on Shobhit. I get it that she is angry, disappointed and is finding it difficult to forgive him. But she goes overboard many times...

I am wishing that they give some flashback moments from the times before the accident happened... and at least one monologue of Rajvee so that we get to know her exact stand... why is she still so harsh on Shobhit; Hasn't forgiven him as yet etc.

Okay, thanks for the information. 🤗

Darsh and shobhit are life of this show the two brother and their scenes are worth watching them any other

Their story, their ache of heart, their pain and over all pulling themselves to be strong for other sake for their own sanity is very inspiring ☺️

And I to wanted to write from Shobhit point of view but words failed me so reading this one it was like you made my dream comes true ❤️

It's beautiful, his regret, his trauma, his pain for being reason of unwanted unfortunate tragdey 😭 which could've been avoided IF ONLY he heard his brother 😭.

Awesome shot 👏

Originally posted by: Evil_Flower_08

Darsh and shobhit are life of this show the two brother and their scenes are worth watching them any other

Their story, their ache of heart, their pain and over all pulling themselves to be strong for other sake for their own sanity is very inspiring ☺️

And I to wanted to write from Shobhit point of view but words failed me so reading this one it was like you made my dream comes true ❤️

It's beautiful, his regret, his trauma, his pain for being reason of unwanted unfortunate tragdey 😭 which could've been avoided IF ONLY he heard his brother 😭.

Awesome shot 👏

Thank you so much... 😊

I'm glad you liked it.

Darsh and Shobhit are truly the life of this show... They both are in pain yet they hide it for the sake of others. They might be different in many aspects but when it comes to love, care and concern for others, they are truly very much alike.

I always wanted to write something for Shobhit. The makers haven't explored his character arc much.

He is still living in the guilt that whatever happened was because of him and that could have been avoided if he would have listened to his brother that day. This was actually the point which I kept in mind while writing this OS... His regret that he didn't listen to his brother that day and due to that, the accident occurred.

Anyways, I better stop now or else I'll end up writing an essay on Darsh and Shobhit.

Thanks once again for your review. ❤️

Very beautifully written.. really loved reading Shobith's perspective

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

Very beautifully written.. really loved reading Shobith's perspective

Thank you so much.

I'm glad you liked reading it. ❤️

Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

Thank you so much... 😊

I'm glad you liked it.

Darsh and Shobhit are truly the life of this show... They both are in pain yet they hide it for the sake of others. They might be different in many aspects but when it comes to love, care and concern for others, they are truly very much alike.

I always wanted to write something for Shobhit. The makers haven't explored his character arc much.

He is still living in the guilt that whatever happened was because of him and that could have been avoided if he would have listened to his brother that day. This was actually the point which I kept in mind while writing this OS... His regret that he didn't listen to his brother that day and due to that, the accident occurred.

Anyways, I better stop now or else I'll end up writing an essay on Darsh and Shobhit.

Thanks once again for your review. ❤️

It was truly beautiful 👌 that I can't help and enjoy😳

The fact even giving little scene of him😊 to he make us watch him and feel for him unconditionally is something to take pride at ⭐️

Underlined - this is the problem with me, that Shobhit is close to my heart if I begin to write from his point of view or over him 😳 I may end up expressing my own disheartening thought over how he's being facing wrath of His own mother 😭 as if his own remorse, his own trauma , and his brother suffering isn't enough to kill him daily that he had to face his own mother's wrath to 💔

And again you penned wonderfully 👏 simply awesome 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Evil_Flower_08

It was truly beautiful 👌 that I can't help and enjoy😳

The fact even giving little scene of him😊 to he make us watch him and feel for him unconditionally is something to take pride at ⭐️

Underlined - this is the problem with me, that Shobhit is close to my heart if I begin to write from his point of view or over him 😳 I may end up expressing my own disheartening thought over how he's being facing wrath of His own mother 😭 as if his own remorse, his own trauma , and his brother suffering isn't enough to kill him daily that he had to face his own mother's wrath to 💔

And again you penned wonderfully 👏 simply awesome 👍🏼

Thanks once again... 🤗

That's true. They give us very less scenes of Shobhit yet we watch his scenes and feel for him is indeed something to take pride at.

Well, that is my issue too... And that is an another reason why I wrote this OS in first person so that I keep my focus on Shobhit's feelings only. I have already written several lengthy posts on how disheartened I am on seeing Rajvee's behaviour towards Shobhit. So, I didn't want to take another risk else ye OS se seedha character analysis ban jaata. 😆

His own remorse and trauma is eating him from inside and his mother's behaviour is slowly breaking him even more. That's indeed heartbreaking...

Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

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Sure. Agar koi idea mila to zarur likhenge... 😊

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Sounds good👍🏼And im sure u will come up with something hehe...😉

Originally posted by: ..KpopIsLife..

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Sounds good👍🏼And im sure u will come up with something hehe...😉

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Ummm... well, guarantee to nahi de sakte. Will try though... 😆