Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 19

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Posted: 4 years ago

Jyotiiii!🤗🤗

What an absolutely lovely update!!!❤️

Loved it so much.

The romance was so breezy...and yet so hot. The best thing was that nowhere you got vulgar. It was sensual...it was pure...and it was electrical.

I loved the part when they are in the RK style ans everyone is there.😆

Your writing has a very unique quality Jyoti that it touches the heart and it makes me smile.

Thank you soo much for this. 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Another noteworthy update from you 👍🏼Main aur kya hi bolu, sab ne bahut acche se bataya hai😆No words to describe is all I can say👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Damn that was quite something 😆

The romance was bang on ☺️

Can't say much bcz I'm all 😳 bas samajh joa ki mai kya kehna chahti hu 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update. Loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

Omg😆 kya maine itna jyada likh diya jo tum itna sharma rahi ho☺️☺️

By the way mujhe tera comment padh k sharm aa ri h abhi😆

U underground hone ka waqt aa gya h☺️

I have tried ro unres again 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Blackrose92

Wohooooooo I'm the first one to reply 😃

But res for now 😆

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Gussa mat karna jyoti jaldi unres kar dungi

Pehle toh nahi aya tha lekin ab aa raha hai kaha hai itne din se😡

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

Pehle toh nahi aya tha lekin ab aa raha hai kaha hai itne din se😡

gussa mat kar meri jaan main filhaal busy hun I'll read it soon🤗❤️and I'll unres it soon
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Jyoti,hayeeeee☺️☺️.

Aisa likha tumne,end mein Chand bhi sharmake badlon ke piche chup gaya, hum kaha chupe🤪☺️

The ending🤪☺️whoa!!Outclass👏


Koyal😆 bilkul sahi boli...chand bhi bechara sharma gya☺️☺️

Thanks yar...i'm so glad🤗


THIS song my gawd,what an outstanding choice of song and what a befitting justice to it through the writing!


That song is❤️ the lyrics of the song are pure, nahi?


Unbelievable Jyoti, I feel through this chapter you have proved how versatile and flexible your imaginative skills and writing power is! Multi-talented writer for a reason👍🏼😳


Awww thank you so much for this appreciation ❤️


Not an ounce of vulgarity or discomfort can be found in this delectable chapter👍🏼😳It is just capable of making you blush and blush more! Loved the soft and pacifying descriptions, literally loved every moment👏Fiction no longer remains a fiction , it turns into reality when writers like you mould it according to your creativity👍🏼


Thank god, you know what i was nervous, thinking kahin se vulgur na ho jaye..but glad that everyone found it's good👍🏼

So glad that you loved each and every description and find an amazing writer in me 🤗


Beautiful Jyoti , phenomenal!Thank you for such a good one❤️


Thank you so much koyal. Now only one chapter left. I will post it soon👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: RUDY575

You made my heart garden garden...

I was so waiting for this....

☺️

You are brilliant in the romance genre...it's subtle yet intriguing...

Keep bringing girl....

This chapter was 🔥...


Ps sorry I couldn't reply firsr😭

Thank you so much Rudy❤️

Glad that you liked it🤗

I will post the next chapter at night, hopefully👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherryrose

What a heavenly update👏...

Really like your style of writing, simple and sweet❤️

Aww Thank you so much shivani❤️

I will post last one tonight. Stay tuned👍🏼

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